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Reviewer: romero Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Love your story.

Author's Response: Thank you Romero!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

very disappointed that she slept with angel but i am glad that spike was trying to comfort her

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're disappointed, Angel turning into Angelus was kind of necessary for my plot. It will lead to spuffy in the end, promise :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Poor Buffy; Angel was the wrong choice. She knows it now. Too late. Loved Spike's change here: Running fuming into the room and then ending to comfort crying Buffy.

Author's Response: Thank you Cordykitten!

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2006 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

I love it! The way you wrote Spike in the library - I dunno- I found it like whoa. I'm having a hard time explaining myself here. But that was very good. And the ending - perfect. Just keep doing what you're doing. You have a great fic on your hands here. great job. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, Spikesonlychilde! I'm so glad that you like my writing, I'm not always sure about it myself. Keep telling me what you think, it means a lot! :D

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Love this story Please write more soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you Bluebird! I'll do my best with the updates, but I can't promise anything

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

definitely doing a great job and a little angst is okay! otherwise it wouldn't be realistic. keep it going!

Author's Response: Thank you Riahannon!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Wow. Great chapter. Even though it started bad, I think it ended rather well. Angel pretty much always makes me want to heave, but I'll forgive you because it led to the Spuffiness at the end. So worth it. And I'm glad that the Scoobies kept their thoughts to themselves for once. Loved the chapter. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Jessica, I'm so glad you like it! Angel makes me want to heave too, when he's around Buffy anyway, making him Angelus was a easy way to get rid of him.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you Sirc!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

wow, poor buffy. cant wait for more, soon please

Author's Response: Thanks Daisy!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Looks like Spike just can't help himself around Buffy..She just brings out the "human" in him.. : D

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks Dani!

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Thanks for the angsty update. I'll be looking forward to your next....

Author's Response: Thanks Gaillee! You're my review nr 100! Yay! :D You guys rock!

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Good job! Inserting Spike in earlier and keeping him closer to Buffy at this point seems to be working very well. Looking Forward to more.



Author's Response: Thanks Pin! I'm glad you're looking forward to more of my story!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

can we maim angel now? *bounces*

Author's Response: Oh yeah! Who wants to dust angelcakes? *I do, I do!*

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Trying to prove a point is never a good reason to have sex, Buffy! This is why teenagers should stay virgins. They aren't mature enough to handle this kind of decision.

Love that Spike stormed in there and made them all see what's going to happen. That was awesome - he being dead-on accurate.

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with you on the whole when to have sex part. I wanted to make her first time less perfect (sorry buff) and yeah, she rushed it. I'm glad you like how Spike handled things! Thanks Kim!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Spike's warming up...

Author's Response: Oh yeah Lux... he's warming up all right

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:02 am Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Great chapter! Love tender Spike and the scoobies thinking WTF? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks bloodshedbaby! I was thinking of updating this on your site too, but I can't open it...hmm..I'll try later

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter Eight – The Return to Innocence Lost

Hmm I don't see the angst as very thick yet, I'm gonna need alot more before I start calling it real angsty. For now it's mostly just funny, well except for Buffy having a hard time but Spike and Xander makes it all fun :)

Author's Response: Thanks spacelord, I got a little worried there, I was making it too angsty...

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

loved it. can't wait for more. Hope you update soon,

Author's Response: thank you! :D

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

great chapter

Author's Response: thank you sirc

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

Terrific! Hope Angel turns her down. Spike's the one! Please can we keep her out of Angel's clutches? Thanks for a fine chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you gaillee, I think Spike's the one too, that's why this is spuffy...you just gotta wait

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

Great job Nemo! A lot of readers are waiting in suspense... ;D

Author's Response: Thanks for the support Lux, means a lot!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

That was very evil. And I hope that Buffy realizes that she had to convince herself that she wants Angel on the way there before she does something stupid and gross. My opinion, of course. ; ) Loved the chapter. More please.

Author's Response: Gross? Oh yeah... my opinion too. Thanks Jessica for reviewing

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

can't wait to read more of your story! the spuffyness is so addicting, i can't wait to read more of it and if angelus comes back in the next chapter!please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks Jenny!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

Uh Oh...Are we getting ready to meet Angelus..If Buffy and Angel do have sex that is? Spike just can't kill the girl : D

Author's Response: Can't tell you anything...don't wanna spoil... You'll know everything in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Seven – The One She Wants

please dont let her sleep with angel....i rather it be with spike for her first time

Author's Response: I rather want it to be with Spike too, but if she sleeps with Angel or not...well you just gotta wait and see

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