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Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 03:00 am Title: Escape

This is the thing I disliked about canonBuffy... for a woman so powerful and so amazingly adept at fighting, she's an ignoramous when it comes down to emotion and psychology. She just cannot conceptualise what Riley has been doing to these creatures. She only skims the surface, addresses what she 'sees' and is oblivious to what is going on under the skin...

People used to say it was her youth, something that would develop as her life experiences grew. I disagree. If anything, children have a greater sense of emotion and it becomes dampened as rationality and adult responsibility grows. Buffy just seems not to have a strong sense of emotional empathy.

Thankfully, her love of Spike, or her strength of feeling for friends and family, force her to see things she would normally not see.

i think this incident is going to be one of those shock experiences for her.

Great stuff, pet.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 12:41 am Title: Escape

Poor, imasculated Spike. We gotta give that guy his *stones* back! Great update, though. Can't wait to see what you'll have in the next chapter. Could I hope for some serious Spuffy lovin'? Maybe some bitey, claim-type stuff in the not too distant future? Spike feeling more like a man because the Slayer is his now? Hmmm....please?

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Escape

ERRR STUPID BASTARD!!!!! i HATE riley, why cant he just die and his character be done with, hes such an asshole. i cant belive that he said those things to spike and that spike believed him. buffy really cares for him and i really hope that buffy tells him that and that he understands. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that they free all the cvampire slaves and that riley dies soon. also i hope that spike and buffy get together and that he claims her when they tell each other they love each other. please update a soon as u can i cant wiat to read more and see wat happens . thanx

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Escape

Great chapter! Glad Buffy got them out of there. I could beat Riley for his treatment towards Spike! Please update soon!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Escape

Ugh! Riley is such a bastard! Poor Spike, just as he was getting better too.... Really good chapter, can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Escape

I was on the edge of my seat the whole chapter ... that was fantastic!

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Escape

I love this story so far! Great original plot and love the fact that Spike and Buffy are together now. I'm sure that Buffy will play a major role in his recovery and I look forward to seeing how you're going to depict his road to recovery.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 07:31 pm Title: Escape

God, I hate Riley!

I hope Buffy helps Spike find himself again.

Very intense chapter.
spuf

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: Escape

God, Riley is a bastard. I know Buffy couldn't kill him, but I kept hoping one of his other slaves would turn on him and do it for her. Anything to spare Spike the pain he inflicted. But, maybe now Spike will be the one to give him his final just end.

And, now, maybe Buffy can help Spike get over his feelings of inadequacy? There has to be a way -- I don't like seeing him like this.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 06:48 am Title: A Shocking Revelation

I read all 44 chapters today - This is wonderful, beautiful and a passionate story, cant wait for more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

I just came across your fic and love it! Right now I'm on the edge of my seat! Please update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 09:50 am Title: A Shocking Revelation

Phew! Good that the soldiers were vampires. So Spike had a chance to fight with Buffy (and I thought first that the chip didn't function any longer but that was wrong *points to Riley*). If Riley has the same pistol as Spike did and he would blow his head... Spike would die. So I'll be eagerly waiting for an update here :)

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:46 am Title: A Shocking Revelation

Don't hesitate, Buffy! Get HIM... you promised Spike you'd get you both out of there. Don't let Riley take him! Pleeeeease!

OMG... I feel like I'm in the middle of the drama... need to lie down.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 03:24 am Title: A Shocking Revelation

Well, it's been taking the other vamp's heads off, so Spike is also screwed. Now, if it's a metal bullet, and designed to go straight through, then he'll just have some major damage to heal from. Like if you shot a vamp with ammo from an AK-47 - the steel core round would just blaze a hole through and keep going because it's a fast bullet that's armor piercing. Whereas, a 44Mag is designed to mushroom out as the bullet travels and have stopping power. That would just take his head clean off.

I'm so disappointed in Buffy for not taking Giles or Xander with her, too, or at least having Spike standing at the door listening for Riley to possibly come home.
And she didn't even sense the vampire soldiers? how lame is she?

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

You get a flying round house slayer style kick to the face. Thats what happens bizatch :-)

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

Interesting twist. Had me wondering if Riley was going to turn out to be a vamp too.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

OMG ERRRR IN WISH THAT BASTARD WOULD JUST DIE!!!!1 i LOVE this story and am SO happy that u updated. i really hope that spike and buffy get out of there and that riley at least gets hurt in the process. also i really want everything to work out between them and for this whole mess to be over with. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

Oh Fuck no!
Oh, please no!
Save him, please save him, Buffy...
Wow, that kept me on the edge of my seat.
I'm beginning to wonder if Riley isn't a bit vampire himself?
spuf

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

*faints dead away*

What an exciting roller coaster of a chapter -- but what a cliffhanger!!!

More, soon, please!!!!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:45 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

Oh, please don't leave me hanging.......thanks

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

Evil cliffhanger! But I love this chapter, and way to keep us on the edge of our seats with vampire guards. Gotta say, I didn't see that one coming. Ok, I'm hooked on this story-- an absolute junkie. Please update soon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: A Shocking Revelation

Oh holy crap!! You're too good with the cliffhangers... It's not fair I tell ya! Please hurry! *Whines* I wanna know what happens!

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 12:02 pm Title: Showtime

Riley is a bitch....

XOXO

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Showtime

okay, i know i've never reveiwed before on this story but i just happened to be reading it and I had to review for this chapter. Please don't let spike go back to riley!!!!!!! I feel so sorry for him. This is not the spike that I'm use to and I guess it's a littel shocking to see him so scared of riley. Hopefully, spike will make him pay soon enough. loved it great job

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 07:11 pm Title: Showtime

Crap. I hate when a dozen, lethally armed, artificially strong men show up just as I'm about to stick it to my psycho husband, but before I let my vampire slave know that I love him.

But then again, a dozen men are no match for the Slayer and her vampire -- right? RIGHT?

Excellent chapter - can't wait for the next chapter. I'm dying here!

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