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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 05:40 pm Title: The Den of the Enemy

Buffy did indeed let Spike come with her.. and the lock didn't get changed yet. Good, they found stuff they can use... and the ownership papers... so Buffy (and Spike) knows now the truth. I wonder what Buffy has in mind to beat Riley (with his own weapons)...

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: The Den of the Enemy

Oh bugger... she's not known for her forward or contingency planning skills, is she?

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 06:22 pm Title: Making Mistakes

spike's finally back! loved it...
free, but still hers... that's a very happy vamp, isn't he? lol
loved the interaction between them... from now, i hope they will go on, still needing each others, but on equal terms.
and i'm right with her punching the pillow. I mean, mara has been a victim, sure... but before the chip, and the slavery, she was a vamp who killed humans... the ordeal she has been through doesn't make her good, just makes the humans who did that (instead of staking her) monsters

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: Making Mistakes

Oh I loved this chapter. Buffy trying to help and kind of failing.. no, that's too hard. eh.. she is beginning to see the other side, what vampires like Mara. And loved the talk, Buffy wanting to 'set him free'. It was the best thing (talk) Buffy could do. And telling she still wants to be him. And now old Spike makes a visit: Spike is turning her words around and want to come with her even if she didn't want it. Told you before: Loved the chapter. Looking forward to the next one.. hopefully Riley won't be there when Buffy (and Spike) are going back.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: Making Mistakes

I've never reviewed a story before so we'll just have to see if I get how it's done. I love this story! This last chapter was so sweet, I love that she wanted to set him free. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Making Mistakes

woohooo!old spike is back! update soon! can't wait to find out what happens with riley!

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:20 am Title: Making Mistakes

HAHAHAHA thats my Spike!

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Making Mistakes

Hee hee hee! Naughty, crafty Spike!

This story is really making me think about the concept of freedom and if it actually exists. Which I'm not sure was your intention. Meh, my mind's a strange place.

I need to know what happens next and more of tSpike's back story that you've been hinting at!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 01:09 am Title: Making Mistakes

Way to take the air out of our lungs with Mara's little revelation! I loved the interplay between Slayer and Spike-- I adore his stubborn streak. Update soon, please!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Making Mistakes

ha buffy he found the loophole. guess you have spike along with you now. can't wait for more. will riley be home? will his slaves try to keep them there? please more soon

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Making Mistakes

AWWW i loved the part with spike and bbuffy and how hes free nnow. i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i real,y hope taht wen she goes back to the house that riley isnt there and that spike and her are safe. also i really want everything to work out and i want riley to day and his whole orginization be destroyed. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Making Mistakes

Crap... that's bad! Well, good that he's finally gathering the courage to do and say something like that. But I just KNOW something bad is gonna happen to him.. =( Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Making Mistakes

I swear, 1 out of 3 chapters bring tears to my eyes. This one did. I could totally relate to Buffy's foot-in-mouth syndrome and her utter frustration. I love how you make her so human and relatable. With another writer, I'd just keep getting angry with her, but you make her change understandable. Afraid of Spike going back but I could see why he needs to do it.

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: Making Mistakes

YAY!! AN UPDATE!!

And I'm so glad Buffy "freed" Spike. :-)

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Making Mistakes

Yes!!! The chapter I was waiting for!

The discussion/confrontation with Mara and the rest was excellent, and served to make Buffy's transition a believeable one.

But, the conversation with Spike was absolutley perfect - everything I was hoping for. And, I've imagined it many many times since they escapted the mansion.

Except, of course, that they may well be walking into a trap...

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Making Mistakes

Wow. A lot happened in this chapter. I understand Buffy's anger at the slaves that were in their home. But I don't think she can call them whores like Mara said. Great Spuffy development. I agree that Buffy shouldn't go back alone, not just for emotional reasons but because he is manipulative also. And we know that he especially hates Spike. She should bring someone who can fight. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Making Mistakes

I just had a terrible thought!! What if Riley plans to make Buffy a slave because of her "demonic powers." He could have his evil way with her then. I'm so afraid for Spike and Buffy, but I love your style and I know the story will be great!

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Making Mistakes

I dont loke Mara, go Buffy, she's is a good a person and I think she`s trying the best she can

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: Making Mistakes

Yay for Mara. Great OC.

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: Making Mistakes

I love the last part "Right, then. I'm going with you!". Pretty funny. I really really hope nothing bad happens while they're at Riley's mansion... Riley had something planned, right? Crossing my fingers. I also kinda had a question, but it doesnt need to be answered. Can't Willow or Tara try taking the chip out of the vampires? Using magic or something? Or maybe that was answered somewhere... it gets confusing w/ all the stories here. anyways, update soon!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Going to War

NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID U STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I WANT TO FIND OUT WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE this story so much its amzing and im so happy that i started reading it. i really hope taht spike and buffy form a real relationship and that he starts to act like the way he use to. also i wonder wats going to happen between buffy and riley and if they are going to find anything to help poeple see wat they do. i really hope that buffy kills riley or better yet spike getting his chip out and killing riley himself. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more and see wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Going to War

Great updat.e Glad I was able to catch up on the last few chappies!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 06:19 pm Title: Going to War

Loved this chapter and all of the ones that I missed. I am so glad that they are trying to do something to stop the slavery and the training now. I agree that they were doing everything that they could before, but blowing up the building really does seem like a reasonable option. The humans that are there can't be anything other than evil, and I'm sure that the demons would find death preferrable, or at least I would. Love this story.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 06:03 pm Title: Monsters and Men

Excellent revelation. The poor things. Everything they had to go through was so cruel. And Riley was doing some of the same things with Buffy, like the verbal abuse for instance.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Going to War

This is all getting very exciting! I can't wait to see them all take down Riley. That bastard needs to pay. Taste of his own medicine maybe.... Anyway, looking forward to more! =)

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