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Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:21 pm Title: Edge of Darkness

that was an evil cliffie if i've ever see one! velvet is going to be dust soon, yeah? over riley's dead body... please! lol
really a good chapter... loved spike, so vulnerable and defenceless but stronger as ever:

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 01:41 pm Title: Edge of Darkness

Great chapter. You must update this soon. It is wrong to leave us hanging like that.

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 01:38 pm Title: Edge of Darkness

Keep it coming, cause I'm checking back everyday. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 12:52 pm Title: Edge of Darkness

Good Riley is so sure of himself and takes his time. This will Buffy buy time to get there before Spike is dust.. I hope. *reads on* So Riley let play Velvet with Spike, finish him. I'm very glad that Buffy came at last. We'll see if she was in time. And that Willow and Tara finish the spell very soon! And then Spike will need some blood.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Edge of Darkness

*happy dance* Very much looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully Buffy won't be anywhere close to nice about giving Riley and Velvet what they deserve. More please.

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 10:38 am Title: Edge of Darkness

ohh velvet and riley are going to get it, but did you have to leave it there? mroe soon please, i hope the spell works and they do it in time.

Reviewer: gailleee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 10:12 am Title: Edge of Darkness

Powerful! Horrendous! So glad Buffy is there now; can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thank you for a fine update--well done.

Reviewer: freespirit79 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 08:02 am Title: Edge of Darkness

aaahh! Please hurry with the next chapter!
I love this story.

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 07:42 am Title: Edge of Darkness

Oh God, you can't end it there!

*begs shamelessly for more*

I'm thinking Velvet is the first to go....and Buffy has just what Spike needs to help him out with his problem.

Yup, things could get very, very interesting.

*begs again*

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 07:33 am Title: Edge of Darkness

It's time to kick some arse I believe!

XOXO

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 05:50 am Title: Edge of Darkness

Poor Spike. Love the turn of events. Please write more soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Revelation

Oh god, hurry with the rest. This is great.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Revelation

Squee! I completely adore this chapter. Probably only to be dwarfed by any future chapters where Riley and Velvet die slow painful deaths. Can't wait. ; )

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 06:44 pm Title: Revelation

Love your story! Buffy "You Go Girl". Can't wait to see Riley get his please write more soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Revelation

*grrr Riley* He is torturing Spike. And planning to kill him.. no witnesses. That could maybe endanger Velvet too. I'm sure she didn't think about that! Her bad. *wonders* Did Riley take Buffy strength for himself? (Didn't think of it before Willow mentioned it.) But at last Buffy knows now Spike is in terrible danger. But her friends are going to help, that's good. Buffy is too weak at the moment.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Revelation

major confrontation coming! you know you have to update soon... can't leave like that for long! lol
so, riley is stealing buffy's force, huh? never see that coming! original concept, really...

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: Revelation

great update. hope not only Riley gets what he deserves, but Velvet also. looking forward to next update.

Reviewer: daffodil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 03:45 pm Title: Revelation

ooh! Great update! Is it too much to hope for that maybe this essence thing will affect Spike in some way as well? ...

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 09:28 am Title: Revelation

Great story and great update. I hope that Buffy gets there in time to help Spike. However, I do hope that she stops being mean to him. I don't understand why Buffy is always written as a "Bitch" although that is how she was on the show. It would be nice if for a change that Buffy faced her feelings and developed some insight.

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 07:55 am Title: Revelation

lol...I SO saw that coming!!

Fabulous!!

XOXO

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 07:05 am Title: Revelation

awww, thats not fair. i can't wiat for the next chapter. more soon please

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Revelation

looks like theres gonna be a showdown, go buff, kick his ass!!!!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Revelation

"We'll se it through
It's what we're always here to do
So we will walk through the fire...."


... and help Riley BURN......

eep... *Hang in there Spike, the Scoobies are on their way!*

Nice one jl, nice one.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Revelation

About time.

A fine mess of your life you made, Buffy.

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 02:18 am Title: Revelation

Great chapter. At last we are getting some answers. Canīt wait for the next chapter and the confrontation between Buffy and Riley because of Spike.

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