

Date: 01/11/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
good job

Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
I love sweet shy Buffy..and I so feel for her. I was so much like that myself a few years back. Spike may be just what the doctor ordered for her..aeh? Sounds like she may be a breath of fresh air for him too.
So...are you inspired? Cause' I will write reviews all day if you'll keep updating :D Great job!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
I love the story... please go on !!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
more soon please! that was wonderful!! im so obsessed with this story so far.! =]

Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: There’s more than meets the eye
They are soo sweet! I loved how you made Buffy go and order beer all nervous, it felt realistic that 'nothing happened' (according to buffy) except it did cos Spike was staring at her and she didn't notice that, only tara. I'll stop rambling now cos I don't think I'm making any sense... Anyway, what I was trying to say: great update!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:58 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
cordy is gonna have a fit for some time since spike has his eyes set on buffy..... waiting for more!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 05:42 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
you left in a note from your beta...
Author's Response: oh jee, thanks for telling me. that's quit embarrassing!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:04 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
You're doing a great job! Keep it up and update soon, sweetie.

Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:08 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Good start. Looking forward to more.

Date: 01/11/2006 - 02:14 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
I'm writing my first fic too, so I know first ones are scary, but you did a good job! I would love to see how Buffy's gonna act when she meets Spike, iis it going to be snarky or sweet?

Date: 01/11/2006 - 01:40 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
i can't wait to read more of your story!!! it is so pulling!! i am dying to know what happens when they meet!!!please update soon!!1 I LOVE IT!!!

Date: 01/11/2006 - 12:11 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Congrats on an excellent start to your first fic! You're doing great, and I look forward to reading more. I can see lots of potential here... the inexperienced, reserved girl interested in the outgoing, hottie bartender.... I sense angst here!! Damn, it's only one chapter so far and *I* am jealous of all these women at the bar! ;)

Date: 01/10/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
First chapter of your first fic is GREAT! You've got my attention..please keep going : D

Date: 01/10/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
This is a great start - loads of potential!

Date: 01/10/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
wow this is so great :) i can't wait to see how buffy and spike meet :) please hurry and update again soon :)

Date: 01/10/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Fine job on the first chapter. You've begun to introduce the characters, which does need doing. Will be watching for the next....

Date: 01/10/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
i like so far!

Date: 01/10/2006 - 06:46 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Good start...the story has real potential to be really romantic and angsty, good combo...keep up the good work.

Date: 01/10/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
I like what you've written so far. I can't wait to read more.

Date: 01/10/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
very nice start looks to be a great work in progress

Date: 01/10/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
its really good.! i hope you update soon!

Date: 01/10/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
I have to congratulate you in being brave enough to write a story. So far so good. Keep it up.

Date: 01/10/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Good begining. Hope you continue. And update soon.
PB

Date: 01/10/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
I think you've got a great basis for a story here. Cordy's quest for Spike, Spike's attraction for Buffy and vice versa, great triangle set. Plus playing on Buffy being inexperienced and shy and Spike being the 'bad boy'. You can go far with this one!