

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Five
Little bitca! :::growls at Dawn::: Good story. Quite dark, but in a good way. I'm enjoying it. Update soon.

Date: 02/20/2006 - 11:54 pm Title: Five
A bit of a sad and disturbing little exposes on what all of Buffy's compatriots have been up to. Willow scheming the council and Xander trying to do the right thing for, well everybody and not really nailing it. I also like the fact that Dawn seems to be in on the whole bag of bones thing with Spike. Wonder what that's all about. Great chapter.

Date: 02/20/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Five
Very good Xander characterization. But I still hate his black and white view of the world. It didn't matter how much Spike tried because demons were evil, except if for some reason your name is Anya. And of course humans are all good. I hated how Xander thought that Riley was perfect for Buffy. Beside the fact that he was incredibly boring and had control issues, he essentially cheated on her and put everyones lives at risk. But it was still Buffy's fault for pushing him away. I think that Xander and Spike are both in the same situation. Both of them hurt the women that they love by betraying their trust, by doing something that, if you love someone, would be inconcievable. Obviously Spike's actions were wrong but if Xander didn't think he would make a good husband, why did he propose? Spike is not making excuses for himself, he has tried to make it right, and he is not avoiding confrontations.
Looking forward to the next chapter, and Xander getting hit upside the head with reality. Wonder what Willow has planned. Curious as to what Dawn did, although I figured that it was her. She was the only one that knew he was back after all.

Date: 02/13/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Four
I really liked the way you dialogued Buffy and Spike's interaction-- Very real and believable. Now, I can't wait for you to update this one!

Date: 02/13/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Four
"Ah, ignoring reality, one of the keys to living well. Good thing he’d mastered it so long ago."--A truly wise statement that one is. Love how Buffy was able to be civil, despite the fact that she didn't tell him that she had been looking for him, and that he never revealed where he had gone. And then there is his missing little bundle. Wonder what that's about. Amazing chapter, filled with so much emotion. Breathtaking.

Date: 02/12/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Four
I'm surprised at how well Buffy and Spike's talk went. Excellent chapter. Looking forward to more.

Date: 02/12/2006 - 07:21 pm Title: One
First read this a while back on another site and am glad you posted it here so I can tell you how much I enjoyed it! Excellent, excellent work!

Date: 02/08/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Three
Hmmm, I wonder how that is going to turn out. Can't wait for more.

Date: 02/05/2006 - 01:32 am Title: Three
Ohhh....Evil cliffhanger! Now we're getting to the good stuff-- the interaction between the two of them. Please don't leave me hanging for long! I am so loving this story. More, please!

Date: 02/05/2006 - 01:12 am Title: Two
I love your writing style-- You really have nailed Spike's inner voice really well. I am totally digging this story, and I can't wait for more!

Date: 02/04/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: Three
wow. Keep writing. I so love the story. And now a cliff hanger ending? Evil. lol. Just kidding. But I do love to story and I can't wait to read more.

Date: 02/04/2006 - 12:49 am Title: Three
Gahhh!!! Just where it would have been even more good that it already was. Love Giles and Spikes retrospection. Love how he is so busy tryin to figure out which parts of Spike and William are still inside him. And how Buffy knows so many things, but yet, feels very different inside when she thinks about things. Another amazing chapter in an amazing story. Can't wait for an update.

Date: 02/04/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Two
Anya being so Anya. Is this Anya a vengence demon? And Spike being so annoyed yet subdued and back in touch with his inner William. Great chapter.

Date: 02/04/2006 - 12:24 am Title: One
I was so into the flow. Spike all broo--thinking in private. Loving everyones detachment and their retrospect, and then we have a bag of human bones. I love it. So unexpected and brilliant. And now he has a reason to talk to her... Great beginning.

Date: 01/24/2006 - 11:21 am Title: Two
great chapter. I like that you had Anya build the Magic Box back up. Can't wait for more. And I hope to see more Dawn in the story.

Date: 01/23/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Two
Interesting start. Looking forward to more.

Date: 01/16/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: One
Great start, more please!

Date: 01/16/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: One
I think I've read this before? - I know that I really enjoyed it - looking for ward to updates :)

Date: 01/16/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: One
I remember reading this somewhere else and LOVED it! One of my absolute faves actually. I loved the twist you had on the whole thing and Buffy and Spike's eventual reconciliation (did I spell that right?)

Date: 01/16/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: One
great story so far. I can't wait to read more. I love the Dawn/Spike relationship. I always thought that it should have been brought up more. And when Buffy is thinking about how Xander crushed Dawn's dream and stuff. That ruled. One of the best ways to describe it. Wonderful job.

Date: 01/16/2006 - 04:32 pm Title: One
oi... creepy ending! But your story do seems quite interesting... please, keep on: i'm waiting for their first meeting!

Date: 01/16/2006 - 02:43 pm Title: One
Good start. I wonder what the surprise is for him.