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Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: CH 15

I cant wait to see what happens next - really great story

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: CH 15

Ok...is showing her husband who shes become a good thing or a bad thing....let hope good!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: CH 15

Interesting... Buffy was together with Lindsey 5 years.. and yet she isn't sad that he left. And she doesn't wonder why that is so. Loved the flashback. So both run away to get married.. maybe next time they'll do it with their families. Till death do us part.. or Buffy's decision. It's time she decides that she'll acted more like the grown woman she is and not as the child. And that she decides what (whom) she wants. Two man are a bit much if they both want her only for themselves. Looking forward to find out what both (Buffy and Spike) decides to do. (Lots of decisions in my review, huh?)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: CH 15


ROTFLMAO, sorry....but I never asked anyone to listen to me......just going by these words here

“I think maybe we should take a break and give each other a bit of space,” Buffy suggested softly.

“How long?”

“At least until I can get through all this shit with Will,” Buffy replied feeling a headache coming on at just the thought of her divorce.

“I’ll move back to my place until then,” Lindsey suggested.

To me thats not a clean break....and yet gives him hope they will work things out in the end, but hey, it's a free board we can think as we wish.......but if you don't like my perception then.....don't read my reviews.....I see no flaming in my revew just stating how I'm seeing things in my mind. Never asked anyone to jump on my bus, LOL.....

Hell Angel even lied to Will saying she'd broken up with Lindsey.....when she'd even told him they were taking a break....hmmmmm. And it's not a clean whatever.....he's stil her manager and the bands......those never really do well.....most likely will need a new one if things move along for the Spuffy. I don't think I'd want my wife's exboyfriend so intimatly involved with her any more......hmmmmm. Like I said, I'm not disappointed in the story......I think it's going rather on track so far......Buffy is finally having to face growing up and making a mature decision on what to do with her life, marriage, and future......we will see more on William as she unfolds it...right now I can only really comment on Buffy.....is she about to fight for him, or give him what she thinks he wants....hmmmmm. But either way she needs to deicde one way or the other which one she truly wants and let the other one truly free.....

Reviewer: met Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: CH 15

and "taking a break" pretty much means its over. duh.

Reviewer: mer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: CH 15

i think you should not listen to kimber. i think you broke it off with lindsey pretty well, and they definitely need to get together, not break as friends. DO NOT LISTEN TO KIMBER.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: CH 15

Oh, and great chapter on many levels........Will being rash is asking and then actually marrying her. Buffy for jumping in and following her heart and not listening to the doubts......but it's all said and done......it's what she does now that will lead the way.......and how he reacts to the new Buffy......and I hope she doesn't get to disheartened if he doesn't believe her right away, for what has she given him to trust about her or to see the new Buffy as something he might not like.....for he will still be seing a bit red with the Lindsey thing, and when he finds out how long she's been with him.....wow, I wonder how he will react to that.....hmmmm. This story has awesome potential to go many ways.......and still be a great story.....even if they part as friends, I would find this a great, awesome story of love gone mad, to sad......

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: CH 15

I'm sorry, but what she going to show him.....that she knows a few more positions in bed, LOL. If she thinks she's going after her husband, she still has a boyfriend she left waiting for her to work things out. Didn't really break things off with him, just "taking a break.".......I think Buffy has committment problems that she still has yet to learn to deal with. You can't stay married to a man and live with another, and you can't tell the other man your taking a break while you show the husband what kind of woman you've become, LOL. rather immature and playing the fence. Actually Buffy you need to leave both of them alone until you know exactly what you want. Then let the other one go completely before you persue either one. How else are you going to build the trust back. Not only that......poor Will might be waking up to instant fame as being Buffy's long lost hidden husband. In her bio with the record company and her PR people, does she list herself as single, married, or is it blank. I'm thinking singel or blank......and all she has kept fits in a shoe box.......I wonder where is yer wedding ring and that lovely little ring Spike gave her. What made her take it off.......and hide her marriage from the world and those aound her. Does the rest of the band know? We know Amy the make up girl knows, I can't remember if Willow knows......hmmmm. But if she's going to fight for Will, I would respect her more if she'd made a clean break with Lindsy......if not, then how the hell will Will trust her if he finds out, she and Lindsey was only taking a break......kind of what she did with Will.......saying basically the same thing about finding things out before being able to be a wife. I wish for Spuffy, but not by Will easily taking her back.......not with how she half assed ended it with Lindsey.........

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:30 pm Title: CH 15

Loving this story. Look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: CH 15

Gotta love that William...love the vegas wedding very sweet...so whats Buffy gonna do huh? Just love this fic please update soon:)

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:03 am Title: CH 15

Loved the flashback and it does explain a lot on how she acted. I can't wait to find out how is Buffy going to show William how she's changed. More, please?

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:38 am Title: CH 15

Great flashback. Very informative chapter. I like how the story is progessing. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:30 am Title: CH 15

She's what, 28? About time she starts acting like it. She's got a long way to go to make things right with him.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:23 am Title: CH 15

I guess with that cryptic message of yours, I'm going to have to go back and read through all the past posings and figure out who "hit the nail on the head"..

These flashbacks are so sad, and bittersweet..

Wow..I can't believe how quickly they got married! Buffy graduated, then they jumped in a car and went to Vegas and got married. : 0
I can definately see how they jumped the gun on getting married. They never had the "what do you want out of life" talk before they took the big leap. Not that their marriage was any less sacred..because they definately loved one another. By jumping the gun, they kind of doomed themselves though.

I'm looking forward to seeing how Buffy is going to show William who she is now, and what exactly what that entails.

Thanks for the quick updates..I love to write reviews for this fic. The whole premise is just so thought provoking! : )

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:18 am Title: CH 15

Hon,you always make my day :) Loved the flashback and I'm really anxious what Buffy is actually going to show Will. Thanks for another wonderful chappy *blows kiss*


Yours Sabrina :))

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:01 am Title: CH 15

Oooh, this explains alot.

I'm thinking that Buffy was a bit overwhelmed at the time.

Anyway, sweet chapter and I hope the two of them get their wires straight!

spuf

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 11:52 pm Title: CH 14

YAY! I've very excited about this fic. It's really good and I can see it going to some really cool places. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: CH 14

this is so good as usual!! I can't wait till the next chapter is up!! Make it soon please! lol

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: CH 14

He needs to decide quicker!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: CH 14

Great update. I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: CH 14

Buffy is still not looking too good here...she pretty much all but clearly admits that she used Lindsay to pass the time untill her and William got back together.
I personally think the divorce should go though and from there they should start again, because this marriage is practically non-existant, with no contact in eight years and one being in another committed relationship for five of those years. I think that if they do start over again, it should be with a clean slate. All symbolic and all :P

Hopefully Will won't wuss out and become the love sick puppy because he deserves way more then that.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: CH 14

Away from the computer for a few days and three chapters to read! Having Dru be the divorce attorney is a good twist, and thanks for not having them sleep together. I really like Angel in this story. His enthusiasm for wanting to see Buffy dump Lindsey was funny. I also enjoyed his supportive phone call to Will. I look forward to more.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: CH 14

Buffy still doesn't impress me in the slightest. The character traits she's shown so far are pretty horrible, and definitely not attractive. A pretty face and nice body means nothing when there's nothing sweet inside. I don't know if Will should want the person she's become.

I liked the phone call with Angel. You really do feel like they're long time friends.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: CH 14

I don't know why, but it always squicks me when Spike sleeps with Cordy, Dawn (ew), Willow, Fred or Tara. Anyone else and I'm peachy with a side of keen. Even Xander. But not those five.

Sleeping with your best friend's ex? Way low. That is freakin' unforgivable (depending on the duration and emotional depth of the relationship. Though, ex-husbands and wives are completely off the list as possible partners). Seriously, I can't believe Angel remained friends with Spike.

Yeh, I'm a little miffed at Buffy for "breaking" things off with Lindsey. She's stringing him along. It really is shamefull. I just hoped she would have let him go the right way. I still understand and stand behind Buffy on her choices and reasoning in the beginning, though. The only quabble I have right this moment is that she isn't considering Lindsey's feelings (even though he's dumb with, dare I say love?) and is still hanging onto him in case she needs a security net.

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: CH 14

please update soon i want to see what happen when they see each other again !!

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