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Date: 01/30/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: CH 14

great update

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 04:27 pm Title: CH 14

Yeah.. Lindsey seems to forget that Buffy is married. Still married for now at last and in the past. Am I bad for being glad that Buffy is pissed at Lindsey now? Whatever.. but I am. Huh? Spike and Cordelia? *wonders* I mean what do you say to the person whom you’ve shared a bed with for five years and never even considered sharing your heart? Good question. ~ I love this Angel :) Hurray for him to try to bring Buffy and Spike together. But I wonder if this will Spike cancel the divorce. Maybe he thinks that he and Buffy need a fresh start together? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: CH 14

awwwwww i love angel in this story

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: CH 14

I'm very glad that Buffy asked Lindsey for a break and that Angel told Will. I really hope that now that they've seen each other, they find some common ground to restart their relationship. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: CH 14

Ya know..I was wondering about Angel and Spike's friendship..They did used to be best friends.
I love how Angel is trying to open the door for William by encouraging him to meet his nephews. Angel is a little devil here..he sure doesn't like Lindsey. lol

THANK GOODNESS Buffy is extracting herself from this relationship with Lindsey. She is still way in denial though. By now..does she really think anyone other than Willam is ever going to make her happy? Don't get me started on Lindsey! He has got to be the biggest wimp ever..I mean DUH Lindsey...she's NEVER gonna love you. You've had 5 years to figure that out!
Thanks for the great update as always! Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: CH 14

Oh and the Spike, Cordy, Angel thing....that is just eww, LOL.......I would think that alone would've killed the friendship in high school.......I wonder if Buffy knew that William had slept with Cordy? I'm sure this was before he and Buffy fell in love.........

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: CH 14

Man, Buffy is still a selfish twit here.......etiher break it off and let the man go......again stringing the man along to have after things are done after Will. If you don't love him by now, you never will......it's just not there......he was just someone to whiddle the time with until......LOL.....

Angel did a bad thing, LOL.....I think enough people have lied to William, he didn't really need to add to the list......Does Will have anyone that really cares for him?

And do you want to even care about a man that thinks love and ownership goes hand in hand......hell you walked out of a man's life that tried that, Oh wait that was your husband, LOL without giving him a by your leave or goodbye.......seems she's grown up and bit....but then if she's not snuck around on Lindsey he'd not be the overprotective cow........insecure now caveman cow.........he was a touch more likeable as the lovesick moo cow......

it will be interesting how you have these two come together......because how is William going to trust that his Wife won't go on the road be gone for a few months and cheat on him if they have a harsh argument...hmmmmm. Trust on both parts will be hard to reesablish......fidelity the biggest of all. Will he ever come to understand her straying, when he hadn't. Even in his darkest moment he fought the tempation......(and yes there are men, and women out there that have no matter what remained faithful. It took one of my male friends 10 years (with three kids) to even consider sex with another woman again after his wife died. My cousin 6 years after her divorce......cause she thought he'd come back.....it took him remarrying to open her eyes and move on.......William I think troughly believed she was coming back to him once she found her dream or gave up and found she could be a wife.

More please......excellent chapter, I just wished Buffy knowing she can't give her heart after five years is still basically keeping him on the side.....instead of telling him the truth that more then likely she will never love him.....and giving him the choice of as he said, wasting 5 years.......

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 02:06 pm Title: CH 14

Loved it, as always hon :) And I like the fact that Lindsey pointed out that Buffy is afraid to realize it is over between her and Will ( but we all know not for long, eh hon ;)) I think this is the push she so badly needed. Can't wait for more. God I so love this story! :)
You're such a great writer *bows head*!

*Love&Hugs*
Sabrina :))

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: CH 14

Hmmmmmm.....

I wonder, who is it that Spike's calling and is it to get closer to Buffy?

Good chapter. I'm disappoined about Spike and Cordelia, but hopefully it was before any of them were married?

spuf

Reviewer: aspikefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 01:24 pm Title: CH 14

You and your cliff hangers. Now you have me anticipating the next chapter and I have so little patience. Good chapter as always please keep up the good work

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 07:36 pm Title: CH 13

Thank god!!!! I was getting a little worried for a mintue there!!!

Reviewer: Rikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: CH 13

I dunno you let Buffy sleep with Doyle, which makes much less sense than Spike/Dru so I thought you would have Spike sleep with Dru. Spike really needs to try and move on. Let Buffy know that he can get along without her if he has to.

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: CH 13

thank god for that!!!

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 12:20 pm Title: CH 13

Can't wait to see what happens when buffy finds Will !! please update !

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 09:59 am Title: CH 12

ooohh Bad William! Stupid Buffy,!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 07:13 am Title: CH 13

Oh I think you are doing a marvulus job.......it's not your writing but the characters who you want to just reach out and smack up side the head and tell them what twits they are......Even if he'd slept with Dru, I really couldn't hold it against him......what better way to say ti's over then to have a bit of rough and tumble, but for Will I don't think it will be over for some time....but then I don't know what you have up your sleeve.....could be Spike finds a ray of sunlight that's not Buffy.......or Buffy......but I hope Lindsey gets put on his cave man acting butt.........gone from moo cow to crazy cow......needs to be gone cow........and Buffy needs to take a step back and see....she's pushed Lindsey to this point......yes he should have better control, but she's been leading him on whether she realizes it or not.......especially since by her own words she always thought she'd come back to William.....so what is or was Lindsey, other then a stand in bed warmer, body warmer.......silly girl......wake up and stop living in your fantasy world.......OH thank GOD Monday is tomorrow, LOL.......

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 06:11 am Title: CH 13

Nah, I didn't think he could go through with it.

Hilarious seeing Buffy get so upset about Lindsey's possessive attitude.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 05:29 am Title: CH 13

What a satisfying conclusion to the cliffhanger. I'm really enjoying the story so far. Great chapter!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 04:47 am Title: CH 13

So now I have to eat some humble pie and apologise.

He hadn’t been with another woman since the first time he had kissed Buffy nearly twelve years ago.

I'm sorry... I misjudged William. He does have the sort of love I think of as 'True Love' for Buffy. It was all your fault though, you did trick us, didn't you?

*gives BM a severe look*

Buffy, on the other hand is totally off her rocker. She wants to keep William all tucked on a shelf somewhere for when she's ready... when she decides she's 'found' herself and she's "bored now..." with Lindsay. Sheesh, even her brother Angel doesn't seem to feel there's anything odd about Buffy shacking up with Lindsay while she professes to 'Love' William. She seems to have used sex the way a child uses a comfort blanket. How sad that she holds her body and sexuality in so little esteem that she would give it to someone she purports not to be in love with... William has kept himself, for her.

A sad reflection of today's world actually. Don't know whether you consciously meant to make a social comment, but I read that in your writing here.

I suspect you've generated lots of passionate feedback from this fic. All cudos to you. It shows you've written something stimulating.

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 04:39 am Title: CH 13

Excellent! Who would have thought that Dru is a divorce
attorney? I am sooo looking forward, hon! :))
*Love&Hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 04:11 am Title: CH 13

Is it Monday already? Well I'm not one to complain to you that you updated! And don't worry! I may whine that you write Spike/others and I may don't like it but I'll continue reading... ~ I'm with Angel here: I'm not mad that Buffy may be pissed off because of what Lindsey said ;-) I'm glad Spike made the decision not to sleep with Buffy. (Eh, now he can lay the blame to Buffy that she was the one who broke her vows and that he was faithful.) And it was a real good cliffhanger. So I'm happy you posted earlier than you thought you would. Loved Dru's words at the end: William, you will stand in the light again :) And don't forget: I love this story I just may whine a bit ;-)

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 03:34 am Title: CH 13

great chapter. we'll see how this continues. and if buffy kicks lindsey ass. (laughs evily) So I don't like Lindsey? Who does :-P

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 12:40 am Title: CH 13

you are killing me with suspense! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!11 please update soon!? I LOVE YOUR STORY!! i am really looking forward to read what buffy says to lindsey about her belonging to him, i hate it when guys are like that!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: CH 13

Let me tell you..No matter what my opinion may be about the plot line..I am LOVING this story! Sure I HATE reading the parts where it's Buffy/other or William/other..but believe me it only adds to the ups and down of any story, and that is a GOOD thing. lol

Thank you again for posting two chapters in one day..and please keep up the great work : D

Reviewer: SarahandJAmesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: CH 13

keep up the good work

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