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Reviewer: mer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: CH 1

loved chap 13! update again VERY VERY soon!

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: CH 13

God I hope Buffy Kicks Lindsey's ass! How dare he try and claim Spike's buffy!! Through-out this whole story I have just wanted to give Spike and Buffy both a smack upside the head and knock some sense into them! I hope they come to their senses soon!?! But I love the fic so far and i can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: CH 12

There should be no flames, as this is not shocking- in fact, for him to run to Dru make perfect sense with his character. So, if anyone flames you, bring out the extinguisher and say, "What the hell did you expect?" And then write, "But, remember, it is a Spike/Buffy fic!" :-)

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: CH 13

Wow! I think you characterized Drusilla wonderfully. This was such an intense chapter and I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Lindsey when Buffy confronts him.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: CH 13

oh thanks gosh!!!! i was worried about that him and dru... sneaky little you!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: CH 13

thank god!!!!!! loved it. hope buffy gives lindsey a good swift kick to the balls!! lol. how dare he??? post soon.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: CH 12

Dru?!!! Really?! DRU?!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow. wasn't exspecting that but I completely understand it. Buffy has some major making up to do. She did spike wrong and even though he was in the wrong as well, she's got WAY more to make up for. loved it so much.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: CH 13

just came across this story and it is wonderful....you had me till the very end and I am along for the long or short ride.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:40 pm Title: CH 13

Thank the lord...hate godzilla, oops Drusilla, what is he going to do now? But I must tell you there is NO WAY someone as sexy as Spike would have been celibate for 8yrs, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! But I like the sentiment, how will he forgive her for Lindsey then? This is just getting beter and better, love the quick updates, more please:)

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: CH 13

Great Way to handle Dru! As usual, you know I'm dying to read more, more, more!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: CH 13

So relieved to know that William not only slept with Dru but has been "faithful" this entire time. He would have been justified cause of what Buffy has been doing, but he didn't know till recently..and my biggest pet peeve is lying...so at least he's still honest.

I wonder if Buffy and William's confrontation earlier will make Buffy actually want to leave Lindsay and work things out with Will. Because Lindsay has very good reason to believe that he and Buffy are quite serious and his whole "claiming" thing is not uncommon for guys who have been with a women for five years and has wanted to marry. (But don't mistake me...women are not property and I don't condone anyone treating a woman that way)

Very eager to see where they will all go from here..because Buffy is all sad and angry and Will is just devestated.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: CH 13

Pressure? Queer. I'm not aware of any pressure.

Great update. Doesn't really constitute a Spike/Other warning IMO.

Hey, remember how people disliked Buffy on the show for her self-righteous, holier-than-thou view of the world?

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: CH 13

Glad you don't cave to peer pressure!! Your story, your rules!! Keep it up.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:04 pm Title: CH 13

Ahhh, spufette falls at mistress Beasleymom's feet!
You are a goddess!

Thank you, thank you!

Wonderful chapter. I like how Spike accepts the fact that he and Buffy might not get back together.....but, he rises (sorry) above the situation and chooses to take the higher road!

Great, great great!

spuf

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: CH 13

SO fukin great!! luv it to pieces.. make my day brighter to know you've updated!! u[date soon!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: CH 12

Interesting turn this chapter took. I can't wait to find out what these two are gonna do next. Good update.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: CH 12

Oh no, he's making a booty Call. Bad Choice William, but Buffy is sleeping with someone else, so....
Can't wait to read another chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: CH 12

Thanks Beasleysmom!

I appreciate you answering that question for me. If you are able, posting another update tonight would be great! God, I feel like we are all a bunch of greedy, hungry, snapping wolves..hehe lol *MORE, MORE, MORE * : D

This particular greedy wolf is very appreciative..So Thank you : )

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: CH 12

With the intensity that Wiliam loves her......I expected him to act so.......and in the end she always thought she'd come back to him...man thats one for the have your cake and eat it too category....LOL......seems like someone has been trying to win Wil's favor and now he's taking the bait.......rebound...is thy name William.......hope he uses a rubber....

and we have to wait all weekend.....you bad girl.....I usually hate Mondays, but for the next chapter I guess Monday will be a good day, LOL

And if Lindsey don't grow some balls and walk away, he is so *ussy whipped call him Mr. Buffy Butter.......LOL

I hope one day they can meet and talk without all the hurt and anger so they can really say what they want and not what the emotioins and the need to protect themselves....interupt

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: CH 12

*picks up heavy object* ... damn girl, please update soon, you have me feeling all sad like, and i want to know what happens next. Great chapter, good portion of emotions as well. keep it up! :)

Reviewer: ................ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: CH 12

I really don't think he should do anything with Dru, because that might ruin any chance of him and Buffy. Please don't drag this out too long, we all know they both want to get together, and frankly it's getting kind of ridiculous. Update again tonight, and maybe actually write something we want to see, than dragging it out. You didn't have a Spike/Other warning either.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: CH 12

I'm sticking with this mainly because I have a perverse sense of riteousness that wants to get to the end and say... 'Told you so, Chrissie... these two people aren't nice at all, they're shallow and weak and not the sort of man or woman I'd ever want my children to get involved with.'

Neither of them seem to have any moral fibre, or maybe they don't consider fidelity to the love of their life a worthy enough stance? If you truly, absolutely know that you love someone above all other you do not betray that love by finding comfort in shagging someone else. Nor do you torture the other person. If you truly love someone, you love them above your own self.

Buffy has been with Lindsay for five years... that is NOT a comfort shag and, as far as Lindsay is concerned, neither is it a light relationship... he seems to think they are in a serious relationship. Buffy must have given him reasons to believe that... that makes her shallow in my book.

Spike too seems shallow now that I've read this chapter. He's driving away from Buffy, the woman he professes to love more than anyone else in the world and the first thing that pops into his head that will make him feel better is to call Dru and arrange to shag her... and from the way he's familiar with her number and the intimate familiarity with which they conversed, this liaison will not be the first.

Both of them... if they'd truly loved each other that much would not have left it five years to try to reconcile. They just wouldn't. Couldn't.

You're a fine writer, pet to have triggered this sort of emotional reaction to a story... but I'm finding it hard to put much credibility on this Love thing. My concept of true love is way different from your, I fear...

I reiterate though, you do write well. There's a good balance between narrative and dialogue, and with the Spike/Dru dialogue at the end you really captured their characters superbly.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: CH 12

keep up the good work

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: CH 12

Definitely not down on Dru. Sounds like he could use
a little TLC from an old friend.

Waiting to see how things work out for Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 01:25 pm Title: CH 12

Just to add to that note:

It's sometimes difficult for readers to read about our fave duo with anyone but each other. I'm kind of that way, however, as a writer? My attitude is different.

It's up to the writer to develope their plot line as they wish to and if these little pesky 'others' have to show up? Well, then so be it.
Sometimes you have to kiss alot of male and female toads before you find the prince or princess you belong with! (believe me, I know that!)
hugs...spuf

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