[Report This]Date: 04/21/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
love the first kiss and the chemistry
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 19
Approve ?? You are kidding right? I love it, and the only thing I can say is MORE !!! Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked. Hope to have more soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter 18
It amazes me that the two sisters are so different. I know it happens in RL, although hopefully not to this extreme. Great story! I really don't like Aimee.
Author's Response: Yeah, they're quite different. Thank you for your review. And I don't like Aimée much, either, to tell you the truth. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh Yay!! I am so glad that Spike happened to see Buffy. That undeniable chemistry will be making itself known again and should give Spike some food for thought while on his trip. Of course I am on the edge of my seat about how this conversation is going to go between Spike and Buffy.
BTW..I appreciate the frequent updates and am fully aware that we may be getting a bit spoiled! lol Doesn't matter how often or not you update..I'll follow this story until the end. : D Great update hon!
Author's Response: Oh, he'll have plenty of food to think of then. ;) Hope you like how the conversation is going to play out. ;) Thank you so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 18
It's great to know that William and Elizabeth were both so effected by their meeting. Aimee was beyond cruel... I am so looking forward to when she gets her comeuppance. I love the scene by the cliff. Can't wait to find out how Elizabeth will react when she realizes she's in William's arms. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, they might be a little more affected than I expected, too, as you'll see on my next chapter. ;) ... Yep, Aimée made me cry for what she made me do, I'm looking forward to that, too. I'm glad you liked that scene, hope you like the continuation of the scene. ;) Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter 18
Poor Elizabeth, to have a sister as cruel and heartless as Aimee. Thank goodness Spike happened along before she became too despondent to give up on life and jump. I hope that Spike helps her realize that there is nothing wrong with her and give her some dignity in being a woman. Very powerful chapter. Enjoyed reading it. Am glad you muse is busy with this story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree, but Aimée will get what she deserves pretty soon. ;) Oh, yes, he will make her realize a few things, that will impact her. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Hee! Hopefully she is going to keep busy for while. I just can't wait to get this part of the story out ot the way. ;) Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 18
definitely good update especially the ending with the spuffyness
Author's Response: Hee! Glad you approve. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
I like the insight we're getting on Aimée. Though her reasons for doing what she does are not very good ones at least we know what they are and can somewhat commiserate her.
So if the only thing keeping William from pursuing Elizabeth is that he thinks he doesn't have a chance with her, I wonder how fast we'll get to the Spuffy goodness once he realizes he actually does :)
Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking that. I just couldn't get to shut up until I told her part of the story. I know the reasons are kind lame, but *shrugs* at least she feels vindicated now. Yes, that's the only thing keeping him from pursuing at the moment. *lol* Just wait 2 or so chapters and you'll discovers just how fast. ;)Thank you so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
Very interesting chapter :)! It seems that Aimée has reasons to be so jealous of Elizabeth, but are they good reasons? I mean, I don't like Joyce (brainwashing Joyce!) but maybe she sincerely thought of Aimée's well-being when she sent her to her aunt. It's obvious Aimée hates Galveston, and if it was the same when she was young, Joyce could have think Aimée would be happier far of this town, especially after the death of her father. But Joyce has already shown us a certain (complete ?) lack of psychology... After all, Aimée is maybe allright when she thinks Elizabeth was the favourite child in the family... Elizabeth who is not so innocent and shy that it seemed at the beginning ;)! Yes, the confrontation between the two sisters shows us that Elizabeth has some temperament! And William... It seems Elizabeth has already made her way to his heart. He feels like cheating on her by thinking of Aimée, so cute ;)! And he thinks that his travel will help him to forget Elizabeth and focus on Aimée? Honestly? Poor boy, the complete opposite is also possible. He thinks that he has none chances with Elizabeth, who will take her vows? I want to say him: Boy, you are exactly the one and only who can show her she would make a terrible mistake (convent sucks!)... It will be a long, a hard time til the next chapter ;)!
Author's Response: Oh, sweetie, I can't even begin to tell you how much I love your reviews. They make my day! :D Yes, she has reasons, in my opinion, not too good ones, but reasons nonetheless. Joyce, ah, Joyce is beyond clueless, she has no idea how to support her daughters, and loves to manipulate them. She's not as bad as Darla though. ... I loved writing that confrontation. ;) And I loved the idea of William being so smitten that he felt that he was cheating on her and not Aimée. *lol* And it won't be too long time, since I already posted it. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
Man...Aimee's view of their family situation was twisted even from an early age. It's true though...some people just have a jealous nature.
I am enjoying the pace of the story..but I am getting excited about the reaction that Aimee will have when she realizes that things are happening between William and Buffy. (whenever it does happen!) I LOVE that Spike is already feeling such a pull toward Buffy even after one short conversation! BTW..I feel sorry for Joyce. She is so clueless to the nature of her own child. That makes her easily manipulated.. Looking forward to your next update : D
Author's Response: *lol* Yes, Aimée is a very jealous girl and that'll show even more in further chapters. I'm glad you're enjoying the pacing, and about that reaction, well, you can expect fireworks for that. She won't be happy, that's for sure. ;) I loved writing that Spike felt so taken with Buffy, it just felt more natural for me. And you'll get to see what she really thinks of him on the next chapter. Don't feel too sorry for Joyce, she's clueless in some things, but she's also manipulative on all Buffy things related. You'll see. Thank you for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aimee's backstory was really interesting. It seems Joyce is most at fault for Aimee turning out the way she did. I don't feel to sorry for her though she freely choose to walk a dark path, so i'm really gonna enjoyed it when all her lies blow up in her face. Great confrontation between Elizabeth and Aimee. I love how Elizabeth can see right through Aimee's lies. Fantastic ending to the chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Hee! Aimée's backstory was not intended to make you like her, she just wanted to let it be known that she had reasons (not too logical reasons, but reasons nonetheless) for doing what she is or will be doing. ;) Hopefully will have more soon. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed this over at BSC earlier this afternoon. Great update. Glad to see William has Elizabeth on his mind. Glad she saw him at Aimee's door again. Looking forward to the next meeting between William and Elizabeth. Will she go back to the nunnery? Wait til William finds out Aimee is engaged to Angel. Oh, the possibilities. Love this story.
Author's Response: Yes, I answered you there, too. Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked that, hope you'll like what will happen next, too. ;) Yeah, tons of possibilities. *bg* Thanks again, *hugs* Mari
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
It came to my mind that in this story, the 2 people who are engaged in a marriage decided not by themselves but by their mothers, a marriage of reason in fact, are the 2 people who are the most determinated to have a marriage of love. Elizabeth felt in love with Angel, or rather the picture she and her mother had made of him. And Angel wants to marry Aimée because he felt in love with her at their first meeting (romantic, yes, but not very clever). And the 2 people who are free of their choices, want to make a marriage of reason, so to say. Aimée wants to be Angel's wife, not because she loves him, but for his name, his money, his rank (and for the little revenge on Elizabeth of course). William is not in love with Aimée but wants to marry her because he likes her, she's beautiful, and born in a good family. It seems to me he wants to establish himself, have a family, and he sees Aimée as a good choice. He seems to think that "she seemed not to care if he came from a good family, or even had a family" and because of that, she really cares for him. Yes, my boy, she cares for you, a lot, but not for the thing you think... (not very clever n° 2). The 2 brothers De Alcazar have a problem with women. Is it genetic? Let's hope they will open their eyes soon! I agree with the last review: Aimée deserves an Oscar AND a Golden Globe! I can't wait the next chapter :)!
Author's Response: Hee! Well, I think that's a very good analysis of the story. ;) And you're very right on your assessments. *lol* Not sure if it's genetic, but don't worry, they'll soon realize who Aimée really is. ;) I'm glad you think so, I had fun writing her on this chapter. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 16
Seems that Elizabeth drives men away to her sister now that Angel and Spike have decided that Aimee is more their type of woman.
I really feel sorry for Elizabeth because as gentile as she is, she really doesn't fight for what she wants. Perhaps the sheltered life she lead has crippled her spirit and makes her less appealing to the opposite sex.
I would love it if another man would take an interest in Elizabeth to bring out her feminine wiles. Someone more affluent or richer than Angel or Spike. A character like Riley? Perhaps. I just want her to have one male suitor...darn it!
Author's Response: Well, don't worry, Elizabeth will develop more of a backbone on the next chapters and will begin to fight back. ;) And as you'll begin noticing on the next chapter, she's not that unappealing to William. And don't worry, there'll be someone that will bring Elizabeth out of the protective shell she's been living in and it might be sooner than you all might think. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 16
It's good to know William's first meeting with Elizabeth left such a lasting impression on him. Aimee should win an award for that performance she put on for Angel. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked. :D Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 16
good update
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter 16
So William's in love with Elizabeth, or getting there anyways. Love how the story's turning out. Can't wait for their next meeting. And soon revenge against Snyder.. *evil grin* ;) Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I think he'll get there sooner than he thinks he will. ;) I'm glad you're liking how it is turning out, I'm having fun writing the story. I hope to update very soon. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 16
The plot thickens. Hopefully, Mr. Rhodes is not lying to William. So Spike has Aimee & Faith (well anyway, Faith is in love with him). Glad he couldn't get Elizabeth off his mind. We can't let her go back to the convent tomorrow can we? You know best .
Author's Response: Hee, and it will thicken even more soon. ;) And we'll see what happens to Elizabeth soon. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
ooooooo.....William can't get Buffy out of his mind... *big smile*
Ya know..I get that Aimee is just an ass..but why is she so set on making sure that Buffy gets hurt? Just jealousy? William and Elizabeth meet again next chapter! I am really looking forward to it!
Author's Response: Hee! Nope, he can't. *big smile*You'll find out more about Aimée on the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2006 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
What a lovely image :)! Elizabeth, with a candelabrum and threatening William. Furious and angry. So pretty ;)! (Beautiful story to tell grandchildren too: "When I met your grandma, she tried to knock me down with a candelabrum...) William didn't fail this time: sure he understood he had just met the perfect match! A big change with Aimée. Always smiling and charming, well, playing... It seems that Elizabeth is not as naive as everybody think around her. She's perfectly aware of her mother's plan. No doubt that she will understand a lot of things in the future (especially this: convent sucks). So here is Faith... Mad ideas in my mind: Angel with... Faith! And Aimée in... convent! Let's get nuts... I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: *lol* Yep, that's a great story to share with the grandchildren. *nods* *rofl* Aimée in the convent? I don't think that's the right place for her. ;) I hope to write the next chapter soon, things have been kinda hectic around here and that's not conducive to writing. :( Thank you for your review. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
good update loved their meeting
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked their meeting :D
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
O.M.G AHHHHHHH ! ! ! ! ! !
AM LUVIN IT SO MUCH KEEP IT UP
SPUFFY RULES ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER !
: ) : ) : ) : ) : )
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it. I hope you continue to enjoy the story! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 - 11:02 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh I wish the ho sister death in the most cruel and slow way....and seems ole Will is going to have a bit of a women problem......and I hope Santa Elizabeth takes him on a ride to hell and back....cause he deserves it with dallying with the likes of slutty sister........and I so hope Angel does not hate Willam and sends his pretty sour puss ho bag to the convent to be beaten by the sisters.....and I hope Faith finds love with Xander maybe.........she did let him carry her away.....LOL......more please
Author's Response: *rofl* I can promise Aimée is going to go through very difficult times in the future. ;) ... Yes, he's going to have more than a bit of a women problem ... *lol* Santa Elizabeth won't be as saintly with him, that's for sure. ;) ... although poor William didn't know better and that's why he fell in the clutches of slutty sister. ;) ... *rofl* you'll have to wait and see what happens with Angel and William, but I love what you suggest for sour puss ho bag. ;) ... Faith and Xander? Hmmm, we'll see, it might work. ;) Thank you so much. :D You always put a big smile on my face with your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 15
I was kinda hoping that Buffy would have read Angel the riot act when he casually broke off the engagement without so much as doing it himself in person. The notion that Angel thought that he met Aimee first when he had an engagement first to Buffy just shows that he is truly Darla's son. Darla should Aimee's number real quick since they are so much alike.
Loved the way Spike was drawn to Buffy. The defeated way Buffy resigned herself to a nunnery really has me wondering why she never confronted Angel and demanded that he should have beeen man enough to face her to end their engagement. *Just me*
Really am enjoying this story, since I grew up on the Gulf coast in Texas. Thanks for a quick update.
Author's Response: Well, there's a reason why she didn't do that to Angel. It wasn't really his fault, he didn't know of the engagement, Darla forgot to tell him about it, relying only on the power she thought she held over him. So, that's why. Darla and Aimée are very similar and they're going to clash as soon as they begin living under the same roof.I'm glad you liked that part, I loved writing it. And I just answered why she didn't confront Angel this time. *hint hint* ;) I'm very glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for taking the time to review. :D
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