[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
Arghhh....Aimee is such a bitch! LOL I know I sound like a broken record..but it just has to be stated at least once every review..LOL Now I feel a little better.
Faith was an interesting element to this story..She could serve a lot of purposes to this story. DEFINATE sparkage between Spike and Buffy..Of course! Very satisfying that someone notices Buffy is prettier than that twit sister of hers. Can't wait til the next update!
Author's Response: *lol* I don't mind you calling her a bitch, au contraire, it means she's coming across exactly as I want her to. ;)Faith is going to spice things up, that's for sure. I'm glad the sparkage between Spike and Buffy could be noticed. ;) And really? It couldn't be any other way. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
Great update. So glad William met Elizabeth and his thought of her. Glad so far hea and Angel are friends. It would be nice if they weren't enemies in this story and cooperate on getting back at Snyder , Darla, and Aimee. I so love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked William and Elizabeth's meeting. :D
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad William's reunion with Angel went so well. Great first meeting between William and Elizabeth. Those two definitely bring out the fire in each other. Should be interesting to find out what part Faith is gonna in the story. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: I love that you liked those parts. I had fun writing them and this chapter. Oh, Faith is definitely going to spice things up in some parts of the story. ;) Thank you for reviewing :D
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 15
*big grin* I love this story. I have an idea of where it's going but I'm still on the edge of my seat, exited about another chapter. Things are starting to look up for William and I know there's still angst to come but I can't wait for Spuffy goodness. I wonder how Aimée's going to explain having Spike sneak up to her room.
Author's Response: *big smile* Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that it is still interesting for you. :D I'll try to hurry up and move the plot along so we can begin with the Spuffy goodness. *lol* Guess you'll have to wait and read to see what Aimée is going to invent now and if Buffy is going to believe her. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope the ho sister catches the pox while she at the market and her face falls off.......LOL.......I wonder how she twit will like finding her lover is going to be her husband to be's right hand man....oh my.......LOL...... I can't wait to sing "Ding Dong the wicked witch is caught in all her lies......"
Author's Response: *lol* I have so much fun reading your comments. I can't wait to read what you'll think when things continue to develop. :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2006 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
I liked Angel's talk with Giles, especially the part about taking a bride and keeping her name secret... if Giles only knew it was the same girl. It's so great that William is going to be taking Synder's job. As for Elizabeth it's still so sad that she's mourning the loss of her dream. Can't wait for William to get to Campo Real, and for the fireworks when Elizabeth and William learn about Angel and Aimee. Great update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked their talk. And Giles will discover very soon it is the same girl. Fireworks are coming soon, I just have to move a few things out of the way first. ;) Thank you for your comment, cariño!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
William in place in Campo Real? Great idea :)! I love the plot! I wonder how will be the meeting between the two brothers... No need to say they have a lot of things in common, more than they know themselves, particularly some little bitchy girl. Elizabeth... I feel sad for her. Honey, covent sucks... Hope she will see soon that she doesn't have to, and needn't! regret Angel. And Angel... it would be funny to see him understand, with time, that he has made a very bad choice with Aimée. Funny concerning Angel, wonderful for William if he does the same way :)! I just can't wait the next chapter ;)!
Author's Response: *lol* I'm glad you approve! :D I love that you love the plot. And yes, William and Angel have many things in common. ;) If it's any consolation, Elizabeth won't be in the convent for too long. Next chapter (a very long one, btw) will be up on Thursday, it's almost done so I hope to send it to my beta tonight. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
So glad for another update. Looking forward to William and Elizabeth meet. Hope he totoally pushes Aimee from his mind.
Author's Response: They will meet very soon, next chapter soon enough? ;) Thank you for your comment :D
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
I feel bad for Elizabeth, but I can't wait for her and Spike to meet. I wonder what she's going to think of him.
So William will start working at Campo Real.. wonder what Snyder's going to say about that. I can't wait till they start revenge against him.
Writer's block sucks bum don't it? I'm glad you're getting over it. Love the story, keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I feel bad for her, too, but I know what's in store for her, so I think it'd be for the best in the long run. ;) Not much longer until they meet, that will happen on the next chapter. Yes, it does suck, but hopefully it's over now, at least it seems to be. Thank you for your comments!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
First things first... I wonder when Angel and Spike finally meet again....WIll Angel realize how much Spike looks like their Father? That should be interesting. I can't imagine how the whole Aimee' thing is going to go down between these two. I hope neither one of them wants the biddy when all has finally been revealed! Sorry..I just REALLY dislike her character...LOL
Poor Buffy...I was kinda hoping that Angel would be a little more regretful when he met her...but as his character said, " The heart wanted, what the heart wanted." *snort* A better quote would be..." Love is blind."
This was another great chapter..and I am looking forward to more. I for one don't mind if it takes a little longer to bring Spike and Buffy together.. Story development is much more important ;-)
Author's Response: *lol* I think you're not alone with disliking Aimée, I don't think anyone likes her much. I wonder why? ;) Love is very blind in Angel's case, and will be like that for a while. ;)I'm glad you liked this chapter and there will be a new chapter on Thursday. Thank you for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
good update
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2006 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh God :)! I am astonished :)! So William wants to marry Aimée but he doesn't "love" her... Clever boy! And clever to not have slept with her too. The simple idea of William with her... Argh.. Aimée... What can I say? Yes, she is a slut, but if I had to listen all the time my mother says "Elizabeth", I would be annoyed. But not as bitchy as her, I hope. She wants all, it seems. There is a french expression for that "avoir le beurre et l'argent du beurre": "to have the butter and the money of the butter". Resumes perfectly little Aimée. She is little. When you love someone, you are ready to dare, to fight. In the light of day. Yes, I am very old fashionned it seems... I can't wait to see how William and Angel will react when they will meet Elizabeth. And make comparisons. To say I am impatient is an euphemism: I have reached the boiling point! Good job :)!
Author's Response: *lol* Yes, Aimée wants it all, but she won't get it. ;) Thank you for your comments, I love to read your opinions on the story. :D
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful chapter! It's a shame William has decided he wants to marry Aimee, but on the plus side at least he doesn't love her. Giles was so sweet to give William his name.... now when the time comes he can marry Elizabeth! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you, Amelia! I hope you enjoy the chapter I just posted. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 13
great update
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
This is such a great chapter I don't even know where to start... I love the relationship forming between Giles and William. I can't wait to see the interaction between brothers and the first meeting between Spike and Buffy. I'm anxiously waiting until Don Rodrigo finally shows up and everyone finds out who his true heir is. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, please?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the William/Giles interaction, I love writing it. Don Rodrigo won't come back into the story until later chapters, but he'll make quite an impact. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great update! Thank you, thank you. Very much looking forward to the next chapter! You are pacing this story so well..
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the pacing. No matter how much I try to hurry them up, they won't let me. ;) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
I spit on the wicked bitch sister.......to have both men wishing to marry the tart breaks my heart, for with Wiliam then Buffy if she knows will feel second best..... for her intended to reject her for the slut, and then to find out the man she falls for actually thought of marrying the slut......Oh poor Buffy, can't she have a man the bitch hasn't touched or soiled.......and silly William, I would think he'd be smarter then that to think a woman keeping their relationship a secret, dressing down, and sneaking around too see him means she accepts him to be a man she'd marry........Oh, the pain that Buffy truest love is the one to deflower both she and her sleaszy sister..........you better make him love her like the devil for this missy, LOL.......and I hope he scrubs himself really clean......get all Ho-sister's germs off him............
Author's Response: *lol* I love to read your comments and your nicknames for Aimée. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Glad that the next chapter has Elizabeth meeting both men. Was missing her character in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, there'll be a little more of her in the next chapters. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
I just sat and read through from the beginning...FINALLY...I'm caught up! lol
This story is fantastic! I just want Aimee to have her smug self have to watch all her plans crumble to dust! You created quit the little villain there. LOL
Poor William and of course, poor Buffy..That's ok..I'm looking forward to the Spuffy that is coming up!
EAGERLY awaiting your next update : D
Dani
Author's Response: Wow! Really? I'm flattered, thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I hope you like what I have in store for them. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Elizabeth... too far, too fast. Being a nun? It's a very very bad idea. Well, Aimée is fast too, at the opposite, complete opposite... Will William and her... ? Or maybe, for her dislike, will he act as a gentleman for this first encounter? It would be funny too ;)! And Angel? How will he react when he will see Elizabeth? Again, a lot of questions... It seems we will have to wait ;)!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Elizabeth won't become a nun. Most of your questions will be answered on chapter 14 though. ;) Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2006 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter 12
I still feel bad for William, I hope he doesn't end up falling in love with Aimee like Angel did. Elizabeth certainly is being rash, but it doesn't take a genius to figure out that she won't be going through with her plans to become a nun...lol. I'm really looking forward to William and Elizabeth's first meeting. Great chapter!
Author's Response: *lol* No, Elizabeth won't go through with her plans to become a nun. And just one more chapter to the meeting now. ;) Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
I knew the angst was coming, but a nun? Poor Buffy. Hope the next update is longer and gives us more info on Spike-Giles, Angel-Aimee situationand I guess I'll have to go back and reread. Don't remember if anything was done to Snyder.
Author's Response: Chapter 14 will be longer, I promise. ;) Hope this new chapter will clear up some of your doubts. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
Well I have just found this story and I have just read it all...very good....Aimme is such a bitch and will amke as great wife for Angel, however you are going to do something about the Spike Aimee situation arent you? Thought so, *WHEW* so update like NOW and lets get this show on the road...thanks..:)
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh I feel so bad for Buffy.....not only is her slut sister stealing her intended.....she is going have her first itme it would seem with the man that Buffy is meant to be with........oh so sad......I just hope Slutty sister doesn't get pregnant with William's child...and she burns a slow death when Angel finds out his intended he SO loves is not the virginal bride he thinks.....more please......
Author's Response: Yep, I feel bad for Buffy, too, but good things come to those who wait and there are many good things for her in the future and not so good for Slutty sister. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
good update
Author's Response: Thank you!
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