[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just can't say that I feel that bad for Elizabeth. Poor chit, sure, but we all know what's to come. Love how the story's moving along. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yep, we all know what's to come. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 11
great update
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
Glad to see Angel is telling Darla what he is going to do, not what she is telling him he should do. Poor Buffy. She doesn't know yet her sister is such a -itch. :ooking forward to next update.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think she forgot that Angel is a man now, not a little boy that she could manage as she wanted. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
I kinda feel bad for Elizabeth. Poor girl’s naïve thinking she‘s going to marry Angel and her life‘s gonna be perfect. But then I remember we’re all Spuffy shippers here and everything’s a-okay again lol.. I do wonder though, if Angel’s gonna still want to marry Aimée once he sees Elizabeth. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter 11
Interesting developements in this update, the plot is moving along nicely. At the moment I can't help but feel bad for Elizabeth. But I have no doubt when she and William get together she'll be eating those words about Angel being her 'one and only love.' Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, cariño! And those words will come to haunt Elizabeth in the future. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh, don't worry Buffy......it's might get bad, but I think ithe good after will make it forgetable.........LOL, Sister witchy poo better back off the Willam, or I will write myself in and kick her long gown evil tongue little ass back to boston and have her making tea bags....LOL
Author's Response: *lol* I love your nicknames for Aimée. ;) Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter 10
I love this story please post another chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 10
I love this story please post another chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And another chapter has been posted. :D
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aimée is not very happy, it seems. And I must say I understand her on one point: hearing Joyce "going on and on over the wonderful marriage Elizabeth was going to have with Angel", yes, it would make me scream too. No need to be Joyce's second daughter for that... But let's agree on another point, little Aimée may be a shemer, but a shemer with good taste, particularly concerning some awsome blond we all know. So, what's the plan, Aimée dearest? Marrying Angel and cheating on him with the beautiful boy's next door in question? And if the truth is revealed, William known as the real heir of Don Rodrigo, God, Aimée would be crazy. All that she wants in one man: money and charm... Ghaah... Definitively I can understand the girl ;)! BUT! Don Rodrigo is alive and there is Elizabeth, and... See what you have done to me: I'm babbling-writting, head full of questions... You said that there's going to be a little William/other in this story, well, reassure me, not too much ;)? But, in fact, knowing Aimée could make William appreciate more Elizabeth. Aimée...how ironic, meaning "beloved" in french ;)! What can I say, apart "good job"?
Author's Response: See what you have done to me: I'm babbling-writting, head full of questions...
*lol* I love that my story does that to you. ;) All those questions will be resolved in the next... maybe, 5 chapters or so.
And believe me, there won't be much William/other in this story, I'll try to make it as painless as I can, for you and for me. It's not very nice having to write it.
Thank you very much for your comment!
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh she can look, but I will break her fingers if she touches, LOL........lovely chapter......and I can't wait for William and Elizbeth to meet.....and little Miss A....get hers, LOL along with a few others......
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you! Although I think you might want to prepare to break her fingers, because she will touch. ;) But don't worry Elizabeth and William will meet very soon. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 10
Yikes! I sense much badness (but an interesting plot) ensuing because of Aimee's glimpse of William. I feel bad for William. William's life has already been full of so much tragedy and now Aimee's gonna get her evil clutches into him. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Good update.
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you, sweetie. Yeah, much badness is still to come, but hopefully it will be intermingled with good things. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 10
Love your story, I grew up in Texas and am familiar with the area you are writing about. The humidity is killer. Great reading!
Author's Response: Thank you! Might have to consult you a bit about the area, then. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2006 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
more please
Author's Response: Thank you!
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[Report This]Date: 02/15/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wonder if Aimée's still going to want to go through with her plans on marrying Angel. Can't wait for the first William/Elizabeth meeting and the beggining of William's revenge agaisnt Snyder.
Author's Response: *lol* Well, guess you'll have to wait and read. ;) William and Elizabeth will probably meet in two chapters or so. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh, crap. She sees Spike. Glad Giles knows what really happened to him. I'll trust you to bring things to a spuffy ending, after you put us through a bunch of angst.
Author's Response: Yep, there will be a very Spuffy ending, and sadly, yes, there'll still be a bunch of angst, but Spuffy loving is coming very soon, so hang in there, Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
I agree with the last review, Aimée seems the perfect stepdaughter for Darla. It would be interesting if Willow goes to Galveston with Aimée... Well, she seems pretty kind, and Elizabeth deserved a real friend... As Willow ;)! Angel... Who is he really? The son of his mother or the son of his father? Wait and see... And I can't wait to see who's knocking at Giles' door, even if I have a little (Oh, very very little...) idea ;)!
Author's Response: *lol* Yeah, they're very similar. Willow will go to Galveston soon, but not with Aimée. Angel? Well, you'll find out soon. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2006 - 08:11 am Title: Chapter 9
Looks like Aimee is really gonna be a force to reckon with. She kinda reminds me of Darla. Can't wait to find out how the cliffhanger turns out. Great chapter!
Author's Response: *lol* Yes, she will be. And to some extent they're pretty similar. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hmm wonder who's at the door. Can't wait to see what's going to start happening now that they're all going to be back at Galveston. Really hate Snyder.
Great update.
Author's Response: *lol* Well, you'll find out very soon who it is and what will happen. ;) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
good updates
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love this story. William is a pirate. I like that! Of course we all want William and Elizabeth together, but I feel sorry for Angel if he winds up with Aimee, unless he's turned into jerk like Darla. Looking forward to future updates.
Author's Response: I like it, too. ;) You'll find out soon enough what's going to happen with the main characters. Thank you so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh more more more.....whose knocking on Giles door......and I hope Elizabeth gets swept of f her feet and her ugly sister by nature is left growing old married to a brutal man who puts her in her place, LOL.....
Author's Response: *lol* Patience, patience, all your doubts will be responded shortly. If things go as I want them to go this weekend, I might post the next chapter on Monday or Tuesday. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I was thinking I was the only one who speak spanish through this site. Reading as many comments about watching this Soap Opera make me wonder how many of you are Mexican (since it's a Mexican Soap operah, with Mexican authors).
I love the story as all of you and I cannot wait for you to keep it up.
Thanks,
Ash.
Author's Response: *lol* I guess you're not the only one. I'm not Mexican, but Guatemalan, but yeah, we see many Mexican soap operas here and this is one of my favorites. Hope you continue to like the story and thank you for your comments!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's sad that Aimée is jealous of Elizabeth, who is happy to see her sister after all these years... Let's hope that these two will find an agreement (concerning... guess who) ;)! Relieved to see that William was lucky when he was young too! A pirate? It suits me ;)! And Elizabeth: dear it's a bad idea to fell in love with a photograph... It seems Mommy dearest has done a good job to brainwash her daughter. Hank was maybe a bad husband (cheating on his wife, tss tss) but he wasn't a bad father: he thought his children should be allowed to choose the person they want to marry. Joyce should learn to use her brain. If her marriage was a failure, maybe it was because it was settled... Like she has planned for Elizabeth... Hum, yes, I think it's obvious I don't like Joyce very much... I'm curious to see what you reserve for our 4 young people... May I add it's always a pleasure for me to see properties crash down ;)?
Author's Response: I agree that it's sad that Aimée is so jealous of Elizabeth and it would only get worse. Yep, William as a pirate suits me too. ;) Elizabeth will understand pretty soon that it wasn't the best idea to put all her illusions in Angel. Joyce isn't too likeable in this story, so I understand completely. And you'll have a more clear idea as to what I have in store for them in the next 5 or so chapters. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2006 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh, yeah baby......let's se if Angel is the same innocent at heart he was....or has his mother turned it black and heartless as hers......Snooty Summers can have Angel.....for William will have Elizabeth and she'll be better off for it.....oh my....more soon please
Author's Response: Well, Angel is not so bad, at first. ;) Hope to have another chapter ready to post this week. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Woo hoo! William the Bloody is back and lookin' for some revenge. I'm really loving the story so far. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more. :-)
Author's Response: *lol* I'm very happy you're enjoying the story. I hope to post another chapter this week. Thank you!
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