[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm rooting for Aimée, I hope she gets Angel. I want to know what's gonna happen between William and Elizabeth and their first meeting. I have a feeling she's gonna be stubborn and not going to want to have anything to do with him at first. Great update, can't wait for more.
Can Snyder fall off a horse and break something? Sorry, I still have residual anger for him from the previos chapters lol...
Author's Response: *lol* Well, I guess you'll have to wait and see to find out what's going to happen next, although yeah, Elizabeth will be a tad stubborn at first, but it won't last that long.
About Snyder? Well, that's a very good suggestion that I might consider in future chapters. ;)
Thank you for your kind comments!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
It's a shame Darla and Synder's plan worked, for now away. I'm really enjoying the plot. I can't wait to find out what happened to William and don Rodrigo in those missing twelve years. Good update.
Author's Response: Yep, it worked for now, but they'll get what's coming to them in this new portion of the story. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2006 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, I need to know about Wiliam soon....and can I be the one to cut off Snyder's.....****........please......LOL
Author's Response: You'll find out about him in the chapter I just posted. *lol* If I need someone to cut Snyder's ......****........, I'll be sure to ask you. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 7
This keeps getting better and better, I so wanna know what happened to them. And now that they're gonna be all growed up, we're closer to getting Spuffy (or would it be Wuffy?) goodness.
Author's Response: It will be Wuffy and yes, we're getting closer, hopefully they'll meet in the next 3 or so chapters. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
Darla and Synder sure are a villainous pair. You really gotta love to hate them. Poor William, I can't wait to find out what happens to him. Great chapter.
Author's Response: *lol* Yes, they are. Thank you, sweetie, and you'll find what happened to him very soon. :D
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 6
Death to Snyder and Darla...........post soon please on Williams fate.......
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you, and I'm about to post what happened to William. :D
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
boy darla and snyder are really getting on my nerves
Author's Response: *lol* I'm glad they are, that means they're coming across as I planned. *eg* Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Grr.. I really don't like her. I feel bad for Angel, and I just hope Snyder doesn't do anything too bad to William. Wonder what Giles is gonna say when he finds out.
Author's Response: You'll find out very soon. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2006 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter 5
I like how the plot is progressing. I'm glad William's father is still alive out there somewhere. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, cariño. I'm glad you're liking it so far.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh I hope the Don kicks some ass.........will take awhile I'm sure......but I hope he comes back from whatever plan you have for him and gets to kill both of them..........
Author's Response: Oh, I really think he will kick some ass, eventually. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Even though I know where the story is going and what might be happening I'm still extreamly intrigued by it. Love the way you're writing it.
Author's Response: *blushes* I'm glad you're liking the way I'm writing the story and even more that you're intrigued, even if you know what could happen. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
i wish that we could get rid of darla and snyder
Author's Response: We would get rid of them, just not for the moment since I need them for the story. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
eeep the plot thickens...though i can't rightly remember if in the original story "darla" was so evil...i remember that her character loved "rodrigo" very much...but i may have been mistaken... anyhow... great update!! thanx so much!!!
Author's Response: Mmm, maybe she wasn't that evil, but she wasn't precisely in love witn Rodrigo either, in my opinion at least. ;) Thanks for your comment. .
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4
love it!!! keep going...you're doing great!!! can't wait for more... and as in the novel, hard times are awaiting william...poor boy... :( thanx for updating!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, there'll be some hard times awaiting William.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
good update but i wish that snyder wasnt in this story and i wish that william's father didnt die
Author's Response: *lol* Thanks. About Snyder? Well, I couldn't think of anyone I'd hate more for this character, so that's why I chose him. And William's father won't die, but you'll find out what happened to him until later in the story.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm almost dreading to know what's gonna happen next. The talk that William had with his dad went great and now it's all gonna go bad for a while. At least Giles promised that William would always have a home with him. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I promise I'll try to make my best not to draw the angst too much. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
More please......very interesting turn me want more.....
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you! I just posted more. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I liked the father/son bonding between William and Rodrigo. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I'll try to update soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see how this will progress...good start so far, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
I've always hated Snyder lol.. I like the beginning very much, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: *lol* Me too. I'm glad you're liking the beginning, I hope you enjoy the rest as well. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great confrontation between Rodigo and Darla. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked that!
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep it going!! loving it so far!! thanx
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're still enjoying. :D
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2006 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter! I love historical dramas. You doing a great job with story so far. Can't wait read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I'm delighted you're still enjoying the story. And I love historical dramas, too. :)
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