

Date: 05/22/2010 - 03:25 pm Title: chapter 1
OMG!!! I love this song. I have wanted someone to use this song for Spike and Buffy fanfiction for the longest time. Great job!!
Date: 02/04/2006 - 02:00 am Title: chapter 1
Ok this is just... bad. Sorry, but it is. It's pretty obvious that you didn't read through it before posting , otherwise you'd have at least spared the readers the most obvious typos.

Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: chapter 1
This story has the potential to be really good. I would be wiling to beta it for you, if you'd like to make changes and repost. It is a little difficult to read, but I love the song, and think it could be a really awesome fic! Keep writing.
Author's Response: how do i out spaces in between paragraphs

Date: 02/03/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: chapter 1
Hey you. Did you preview this? Cos it's kind of hard to read, with mostly bold text and no paragraphs. It really gives the fic a bad look, which I'm sure you don't want. If you make these changes, and maybe let a beta look at it, I would really like to read it. Now - well I didn't get very far. Not trying to be mean, just giving you some advice. Good luck.