

Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Just going back and checking for Author's comments...and saw the first and last posting... all I can say is....
WHAT!!
I am flabbergasted by how people can twist the meaning of a FICTIONAL story!
Brat..I do not know you personally, but you are one of my favorite Fanfic. authors...PLEASE do not let this kind of crap get you down, or scare you away from your creative abilities. This is a FANTASTIC story..please just go where your muse takes you! ; )

Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Boy, some people really have their knickers in a twist. :)
I love what you're doing with this fic and look forward to reading more!

Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I never knew James was a closet pedophile and a dead beat dad. How dare he be attracted to young attractive women instead of the geriatric.
This whole fic screams of Spike bashing which is fine but to say Spike is based on James is going way too far and in bad taste.
If this isn't the case then a statement should be made where everyone can see it because people are coming up with their own conclusions and things are being said.
I'm a long time Spuffy fan, and I haven't read Spuffy fanfiction in a while. I was alerted to this fic through word of mouth and buy more than one person if you don't want things to spread I think you should do damage control.
Author's Response: Based, inspired, whatever you want to call it. It was an idea and I ran with it. If others wish to look at it as me making a statment about James and his life, then that is their deal, not mine. I'm making a story here, not writing a biography. The story is MINE, the characterizations are MINE. Everyone is inspired in their life to write, draw, sing etc about someone or something. Doesn't mean they write, draw or sing a biography. It's NOT a biography. People are going to make speculations no matter what, can't really help that. Apparently it's still not 'gotten' that this is a STORY, not a BIOGRAPHY.

Date: 02/16/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Aww, deep down there is something decent in him. Again I have to say that I like Angel in this, it's a bit weird that his neice's name is Alicia though. It's just a small world. I completely agree with what he said. I need my fantasies, I don't wanna find out that someone I idolize is a complete jerk. Great chapter=)

Date: 02/16/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
i am loving the spuffy teasing! i can't wait to read more of your story! i am loving where this story is going and i hope that spike and buffy get together soon? please update soon!!! please update soon? i am dying to read more!!!!

Date: 02/16/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love this story. Keep up the good work.
This is the best line I've ever seen!
“I think that might entail peeing on you.”

Date: 02/16/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Trippy, Angel's niece having the same name... Good chapter! =)

Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
i love it !! and there an update !! i love it !

Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I'm really enjoying this one, Brat! I'm just getting caught up so I have missed a lot of the drama, but I'm hoping that it won't lessen the enjoyment you get out of writing. I know you bring us a lot of enjoyment so keep up the good work!

Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
keep up the good work

Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
good chapter. update soon please.

Date: 02/16/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
poor spike :) .... Really enjoying this fic, great work Brat

Date: 02/16/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
ahhhh...the famous Spike guilt complex, gotta love it :D Love how you update so often :D Keeps me from biting off what's left of my nails :D

Date: 02/16/2006 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter as always. Keep it up :).

Date: 02/16/2006 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great update! Thanks-- this was the nice little mid-day pick-me-up. If I beg extra nicely, could we get another chapter tonight? Pretty please?

Date: 02/16/2006 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh.. when Angel arrived I feared Spike would react more bad. It did go well... Buffy could thank Alicia (Spike's Alicia) for that :) .... more? ;)

Date: 02/16/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Spike and you will like each other once he’s done … doing whatever it is he’s doing.”
“I think that might entail peeing on you.”
LOL....I got a great little laugh out of that line! This was a nice chapter..I can see Spike actually trying to open up a bit. I think the self awarenss is definately kicking in..Let's hope that it sticks around.
Thank you for the update hon!

Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
A threesome for lunch. Interesting that the niece and Spike's daughter had the same name. Can't wait to see where you are going with that.

Date: 02/16/2006 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
ROTFLMAO, and this is said teasingly so please no one get offended......
But I'm a fanwoman......left being a girl and LONG time ago.........I just had a comical moment of needing to say that........
Brat great chapter and I can't wait to see what angsty road you take us....for it's always a great bumpy ride...

Date: 02/16/2006 - 10:23 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another great chapter... more please!

Date: 02/16/2006 - 10:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I like how Angel is trying to clue Buffy into something here.
Sometimes men can see things women cannot (shocking ain't it!)
Anyway, the story continues to amaze and please me!
spuf

Date: 02/16/2006 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
hmm is there more to this alicia thing or is it just something to make Spike stop and think about his lifestyle again??
good update

Date: 02/16/2006 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I hope all these good reviews keep you writing, cause I'm really liking this story. Keep up the good work.

Date: 02/16/2006 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
My heart breaks for Spike. He is just so lost right now. He was making me so angry at the beginning of the story, now I just feel sorry for him. Glad you didn't make Angel evil.

Date: 02/16/2006 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Awww, poor Spike. He's really had is world tilted off-kilter lately. I'm glad he's making the genuine effort with Angel. And I'm continuing to like that you're writing Angel as decent and intelligent.
Meanwhile, Buffy's as clueless as ever.