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Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter Two

She might be a kitten, but he's a tom cat...lol

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Very touching and so appropriate today, Valentine's day. I a bet there is more to come?

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 08:50 am Title: Chapter One

Okay, quotes from my favourite author...well I just have to read on...lol

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter Twelve

ok, you got me hanging here, I believe there is more to learn about our Spike, and how he got so screwed up. I know they will see the light, anyway, great job and thanks

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Okay, I may not be a fan of this Spike, but some of the other reviews are starting to annoy me at this point. First of all, you're allowed to write whatever you want and if you felt like writing Spike like this, well then feel free. It may be based a bit on James Marsters, but I know for a fact that he's really not like this. I don't why everyone thinks that he is. He may like his women young and his girlfriend may be kinda young, but it's not like he sleeps with random chicks every night. He's a good father to his son and I think the boy even lives with him sometimes. He's even taking care of his neice. I don't know if it's a permanent thing, but I just haven't cared for some comments that a few people have said about him. From just meeting him a few times I already know that he's not like that and I think some people are getting Spike and James confused for the same person here. He's really nothing like the character at all. Anyway, I'm enjoying the story and I like that Angel was so supportive in this chapter. I always did like him. Keep up the good work=)

Author's Response: Yep, you're right, it's fiction, it's ultimately just a story, a Spuffy story! That being said, I liked writing Angel in this, he was cute and fun :)

Reviewer: bb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

When I read the first chapter of this story, I was slightly bothered that you seemed to be writing Spike as a thinly veiled version of James Marsters. I convinced myself that I was wrong, but from some of your comments to reviews, it appears that that's exactly what you were doing. And frankly, I'm finding it disturbing. What I find most disturbing is that you've included his child. (And the fact that it's a girl here doesn't make it any less obvious, by the way.)

This is not about me not liking real person fic. I've read quite a bit of RPF in my day. But if you want to write a fic based on JM..go ahead and do it, and label it an RPF rather than a Spike/Buffy fic. I have no problem with people liking or disliking JM's personality or choices. I'm neutral on the guy myself. But I think writing a fic that is so obviously modeled on JM, and then making his poor fatherhood a primary point of the story....I know for a fact that I'm not the only one who has interpreted your fic this way. Say what you like about his dating habits or sex partners, but leave the kid out of it, please. Not cool.

This is not a flame, and I'm not a JM apologist. You're a talented writer and I enjoy reading your fics.

Author's Response: I know that it wasn't exactly vieled what I was doing and I wasn't about to deny it when asked. There was a story there for me and I wished to explore it. What's the saying "Art imitates life"? I think writing a fic and using his name as well as his sons name would be more of an offense than using Spike and Buffy. Then it would just be straight out propaganda wouldn't it? I'm not saying how "This his how James should live his life", I'm exploring an idea. It's what I do with all my fics. Most every writer puts a little of themselves in a fic, or a little of people they know...that could be considered the same thing in way, then too, wouldn't it? But thanks for the review.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

* hugs Brat* Excellent chapter! Even though I'm not a fan of the character, it's refreshing that Angel is basically a nice guy with some good instincts in this story. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE that even though she's still not resolved on anything with Spike, that she believes him to be one too. Great chapter!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Very good. Just like I knew it would be. =)

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I have to admit, I did suspect that you may be basing this Spike on the real deal. After having met him, I was a bit dismayed to discover there was quite a bit that I didn't like about him, so I completey understand the conversation that Buffy and Angel had about fantasies and ideals. I'm getting the same gut feelings toward this characterization of Spike that I did upon my meeting. Not very tolerable at all.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Cute - Please write more soon ! Thanks!

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

more soon pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh, I love that Angel was getting to the heart of the matter! Smart and insightful. Just what she needed to hear, since she's been dwelling on everything Spike is not.

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

im so glad she isnt hooking up with Angel, and that she realises Spike isnt all bad, cant wait to see the next chapter posted

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

good update

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

So glad that you updated. Loved both of the chapters. I hope that Buffy will talk to Spike soon. He should get that much for not trying to manipulate her to get her back. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

that was sweet.......

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

love it!! can't wait for more!! thanx

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

This is really sweet! I love this story

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Awesome awesome chapter! I love the dual view points and I loved how Angel was a sounding bard. I'm totally addicted to this story. Talk about redemtion. Almost makes me believe this might actually be possible!

Author's Response: lol thank you

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Can't wait to see what's gonna happen when Spike and Buffy talk. Great update.

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

That was great, I think Buffy stumbled onto something there :)

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I am loving this storyline. I was reading some of your reviews and some actually stated they would stop reading because of Spike being put in such a bad light. I feel that the subject matter has hit probably a little too close to home. Facts are , some men cheat., some men feel the need to date young girls in order to get their ego's stroked or prove their virilty, or what ever crap they feed themselves to make it sound good to them.
I say don't let it bother you or stray from your original storyline.
Though I have to admit it does sound alot like James Martsters in there. No one can tell me a 43 year old man has anything in common for the long haul with some 20 year old. Been there, done that , bought the t-shirt.
More updates!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) That helped me ..you don't know how much! lol. And, yep, I did base Spike on James..mostly, and I completely agree with you about a 43 year old with a 20 year old...I can't imagine they would have a lot in common. Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: Snozberry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Sniff... Is it wrong of me to want Angel and Buffy to get together? You write them as good as any B/.A shipper would.

A friend of mine just left the fandom and is pressuring me to read her stuff. I'm so confused right now. Thats 2 of your fics now where I don't want them to get together.

Author's Response: Were you reading B/A and switched to B/S? I've written B/A/S before..can't not have my Spike, but I like Angel too :)

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Awww, what a sweet guy Angel is,it's nice to see him painted asa good guy for a change too, I hope Buffy and Spike can resolve their issues.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Yep.. Spike is going through the motions now. (But is was better that Buffy didn't call back. He needed time to think (and worry a bit). And Buffy wasn't speaking of Angel's niece when talking to Angel.. she spoke more about herself. :) Loved the last sentense... so Buffy has hope at last.

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