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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty eight

Yeah, tough Spike is vulnerable too. (Running when Buffy couldn't answer the question at once). Awe :) loved it! It was good Buffy took her time and think what she wanted to express. Spike loved it too even if he concentrated on a special declaration :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 10:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven

YAY!!!!! im so happy that shes giving him a chance. he better not ruin it. i LOVE this story and am so happy that i started reading it. i was so happy that spike told harmony off and that hes tryig to be a better person. i really hope that things work out woth him and his daughter and buffy and him. i relly think they belong together and hope that they get together soon. please update as soon as u can, im dyig to read wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven

I like this story. I especially like the oscar wilde quotes at the beginning of the chapters. don't worry about people giving you a tuff time about the whole JM biography thing. You're a good and creative writer. I like the storyline and the way you're exploring it. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Glad Spike put Harmony in her place! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Those last few paragraphs had me about sqeeling in delight! Thanks also for the recent update!!! It's good to have you back!

Reviewer: B_mac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Love it, love it, love it.

Keep 'em coming.

B

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Read this in one sitting and have to say I'm gonna follow it till the end - love it. I haven't read any of the other reviews yet (I will so that next time I won't voice what others may have already), that being said there's some truth behind certain facets of Spike's character in relationship to the real JM - as far as his taste for younger women and his 'like' for the drink. Be it known to all I am NOT bashing JM, never would. I am a fan but naturally don't hold him on such a pedastal as to be blind to behavior that I don't condone.
I love how you've created the typical celebrity and paralleled to JM's own life. His character development is great along with Buffy's. He seems to be quick to want to change now that he SEES the error of his ways, but I'm assuming he'll stumble along the way??? Glad that they finally kissed but am hoping that she'll eventually have to go home when her vacation ends and that things will continue from there.
Wonderful job so far, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty five

Look, I found it :D
great chapter, btw

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Kissing! It's about time, the UST was starting to kill me...another great update :)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven

YES!!!!!!!!!! The last 3 paragraphs have been well worth the wait. Not to mention Spike cutting Harmony down to size! To risk sounding like Bill & Ted, "EXCELLENT!"

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

YAY! Cool-dad Spike is awesome to see. Also, I enjoy that he made Harmony cry. Is that wrong?

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Great update. Liked the way Spike handled Harmony in front of Alicia. Thanks for updating so soon.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Aw, cute! I love it, more please!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Woo hoo!!! Spuffy kissage and Harmony humilation! Excellent update... I absolutely loved it! :D

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Awwwwwww!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Wow...I can't wait for the moment Spike gets the whole damn cookie, heck, why not the whole package!!!! I'm glad Spike handled himself so well and that Harmony was put in her place! I hope she won'r be a problem any longer!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next between Spike and Buffy!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Yeah Spike! You thought with you head instead of your dick (for once).

Thank you for that chapter and so soon. I loved it. I detest Harmony and love it when Spike puts her down.

spuf

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Yayyyyyy! Finally the crumb!!!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

*sigh* that was really really sweet. I loved the way he handled Harmony

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Yay! The Harmony incident went well :) This was even fun ;-) but not for Harmony. Loved your 'crumb' :-D Loved the chapter too.

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

awww. The last sentence is the best ever!!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

THAT was an o' so satisfying chapter..We got Harmony getting put in her place and humiliated by Spike..and then that was followed by Spike and Buffy's first kiss. Finally a little taste of Spuffy! lol Thanks for the great update : D

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

hey Brat great chapter....loved the Harmony put down, outstanding!!!!!!!
Hope this means some Spuffy action coming up,YIPPEEEEEEE!!
Well lovely to get two updates so quickly, how about three????????
OK

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

Awww..the beach scene is lovely :)...And i'm glad that Spike has finally stood up for himself and told the nasty Harmony where to shove it :)

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty seven

You are on a roll. Keep them coming. can't wait for more.

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