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Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Ten


Oh.....*sniffles* sadness on both sides. I liked the old lady telling him he better make it up to buffy. *grins* i can so picture that, and him being all contrite.

And chasing buffy down was wonderful but I loved how you had buffy knock him back a peg when he said "do you know who i am?"

great fic sweetie!

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Nine

god...the pain you manage to infuse the characters with is just palpable. Like you could reach out and touch it.

I have to say if I were Buffy, i'd have done the exact same thing. And good for her for going out to dinner. If anyone deserves some downtime she does!!!

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight

wow...the tension was perfect. And poor Alicia, hearing that and not really getting what the arguments about but that your name was included and then thinking that you probably did it. Poor kid. *hugs alicia* I'm glad buffy's there for her!!!

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Seven

that was sad. brilliant but sad. I don't think he's a bad person just hasn't a clue, but he's starting to get one isn't he?

loving it still. :)

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Six

*giggles* ooooohhh and the women weigh in!!! I love it. Poor spike getting it from all sides!!! Hmmmmm wonder what's in store for our battered hero?

too great!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

Spike has really changed for the better :) ~ Loved Alicia's talk to her father. ~ Thanks again for the update :) No time left now, sorry if I'm short.

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Five

Wasn’t that just spit-in-your-face, kick-you-in-the-crotch, fantastic?

that is a perfect line to sum up being pissed, feeling bad about being pissed and yet...still knowing you have the damn right to be pissed.

I'm loving this so far :D

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Four

aaaaahh that was brutal. And painful. Poor Buffy but I'm glad she didnt' back down, and she made him feel guilty for his treatment of her.

And the "ba ba black sheep" *grins* pure genius sweetie!!!

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Three

*giggles* i loved the wanker in black comment. Could that have been angel perhaps? *grins again* and man..i hope buffy catches him and laura and gives him hell!!!

on to the next chappy!!! (and if you're not sure ask Rose if i'm not insane ;) )

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Two


*grins* i love buffy. She's me!!! foot in mouth and blunt and totally well meaning. And Spike, smooth for sure but the undercurrent of loneliness that makes you want to hug him. I get the same feeling from...........*gasps* James.

the loneliness factor that is. Like he loves the spotlight just like you depict but when he's not in it he's...alone. Even with someone there. Except maybe family. *shrugs* never met that guy, but i've seen/read alot of interviews and have a couple of friends that have met him and that's just the vibe i get.

And yep..i just want to cuddle the man, and your spike!!! :)

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter One

Hi Brat!!! I am just now reading this on the recommendation of Soul of the Rose at my own LJ.

I'm going to review every single chapter and they will be NICE, sweet, kind, and loving reviews dammit!!!

I just went through the EXACT same thing for one of my fics that has been going on here and I for one totally support your creative freedom and applaud you and say YOU GO GIRL!!!

That and I like it so far. :D So...look for more reviews from moi!!! And um...why aren't we friends on LJ? If I find you, i'm going to just so you and i can tell others to politely...take a leap. :)

*grins* i'm evil huh?

Author's Response: Hi there! This review made me crack up lol. Thank you :) You're so sweet! I hope you like what you read...and hey, I don't know why we're not 'friends'. We so should be :)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

I'm glad she didnt put up too much of a fight, I like where this is going ....

Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

Wow. Really powerful chapter. Huge emotional leaps are being taken along with enormous risks. Your character development is just phenomenal, Brat! You never fail to suck us into the story & make us care so much about the characters & everything they're going through. Well done, as always :D

Reviewer: saettie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

YAY! okay now wheres my spuffy?? grrrr. okay i want it to be realistic, im talking to myself on a review gosh im weird

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

lol ! i love it !! please try to update sooner !!

Reviewer: Camille Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

Great Story

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

Great job!!!!!!!! It is so good to see him stepping up to the bat.........anxious to see what is next thanks

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

YAH!!! im glad sam is going to let spike get alicia

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

I'm so glad Sam is giving Spike a chance to prove himself. Wonderful conversation between the two of them. It was good to see Spike face Sam on his own. Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

oohhhhh, she's so in love with him and can't even realize it. I love it!

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two

*sniff* I loved this chapter. Spike's speech really tugged at the strings in my heart, he was so sincere and I'm really glad that both Alicia and Sam are willing to give him a chance.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty two

Spike speaking for himself, not letting Buffy defend him with Sam. set the stage for the adult conversation with Sam. Excellent job on the dialogue in this scene. You could really feel the anger and disappointment from Sam, as well as the maternal need to protect Alicia. Spike groveled just enough while staying in character.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty two

WOW! Another great update! I'm glad Sam wasn't too difficult for Spike to talk to. Now bring on more happy Spuffiness please!!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty two

and i thought that was going to be harder. i love that he's changing. can't wait for more, will he backslide or will he be good? can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty two

Excellent follow-up! Love how realistic you are with this story and how Sam is not the bad guy coniving and constantly glaring, she's a real person too who's been hurt and reacting because of it.

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