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Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 08:13 am Title: Chapter 5

great chapter

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 5

great update

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loving this story!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow... didn't expect that from Buffy.
Enjoying the story.

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

excellent chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh Yay!! Buffy kissed Spike! I really didn't expect that so soon..but he really did seem to be baring his soul there..So I think she did the right thing for that moment. Now..How do we get rid of Lindsey? Hmmm...I think that Buffy needs to start thinking about that ; D LOL

Great update!

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow... that was unprecedented. Now I'm just curious to see what will happen next.

And... Spike's rather chatty in this chapter, eh? :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2006 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

Spike did analyze Buffy well. He noticed that Buffy wasn't herself when with Lindsey (her clothes). So Buffy thinks she's lost now; but I wonder what she'll do.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

good update i loved it

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 4

heheh can't blame the girl I'd be lost to great chap!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

Looks like Spike's got the situation pegged pretty well..I hope Buffy's attraction to Spike moves her enough to make some changes in her life..

BTW..Whew you could feel the heat between them in that chapter! Great job : D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Time to kick Lindsey to the curb... but I doubt he will go away that easily.
Enjoying the story.

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

great chapter, really love this story!

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 4

Great update! ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

I knew it *gg* Spike is the brother stepbrother. A small world indeed. ;-) But Lindsey came with Buffy. I wonder what Spike will think of that. (Buffy having a boyfriend.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

good update

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

this is so good, but an evil place to leave it. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

i am really loving your story! your writing is elegant, i can't wait until spike and lindsey meet!! please update soon? love the story!!!

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh my... Lindsey's SUCH an ass!

This story is really intriguing. I'm curious to see how everything will play out and get spuffy in the end. You did a great chapter here, and I love your writing style. Keep going! Hope to hear from you soon!

Author's Response: Aww, Lindsey has his moments. Okay, he's really just an ass in this, but I do like him. He's just so hot, it's hard not to...lol! Spike is of course the better man though. I think my writing kind of sucked before, but it's getting better now. I won't be able to update as fast with this one pretty soon. I only have about two other chapters after this that are ready, but I'll try not to take forever with the updates. Real life can also be a bitch. Anyway, glad you still like it=)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

This should be an interesting dinner. I wonder if Lindsey is going to show his true colors while they are there? I have a feeling that Spike is going to detest him..lol... Great update : )

Author's Response: Nah, they're going to be the best of friends...lol! Yeah, there will definitely be some detesting going on. I think Lindsey knows better than to act like a jerk when there are other people around, but he's not very bright. That's all I'll really say about it. This was the the only way I could think of to have them meet again. Third time's the charm after all. Glad you still like it=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2006 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2

Even Riley is concerned for Buffy... and he is Lindsey's brother. Does this tell enough? And Lindsey even wanted her stay instead of letting her go and have some fun too (and made her change her clothes!). *sigh* What a boyfriend she has there. But the stranger was back ;-) And I'm glad Buffy did go and had a good time with her friends. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Riley will definitely be helpful in this story. Buffy won't always take Lindsey's crap. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter 2

excellent chapter, great work!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

good update

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

This story is great..but soooo frustrating to read about a character that lets a man talk her down like that.! I wanted Buffy to laugh in his face and saunter out that door! lol

I am betting that you will be developing her character along the way...give her a little ....spirit.. : D Wonder if a certain bleach blonde might help out with that? Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I know, it will be very frustrating. I definitely wouldn't take that crap, but Buffy has a lot to deal with at the moment. She won't be like that for long and Spike will definitely help her out along the way=)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

very interesting. Riley and Lindsey as brothers is a good idea since I dislike them both.:)

Author's Response: Well, I figured a lot of people didn't like them. I guarantee that Riley will be likeable in this story though. I get annoyed when I always see him as the bad guy, so I definitely won't be doing that. Thanks for reading=)

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