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Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to see what the prophecy says. Good chapter.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

more please

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 3

They were beginning their life together and nothing was going to get in their way. Uh-huh... but Giles' prophecy sounds as if it won't come true so soon! ~ Till next chapter.

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

Cute story! Can't wait to read more. Sorry this isn't a long review but I have to go. I promise I'll write a longer review in later chapters. I love your writing style though - very geniune.

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yikes! Is it bad? or good? Update soon.

Reviewer: aoife mc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

just read the whole thing, absolutely loving it!!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 09:04 am Title: Chapter 3

great... juz great another prophecy.... oh well here comes the twist... love th update and waiting for mroe!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2

OMG ahe's so cute!!!! love it and wating for more!!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

good update

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very sweet chapter.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

If you're still looking for a beta: See the links in my LJ where you can try to ask for a beta if you haven't found one: http://cordykitten.livejournal.com/89210.html ~ To the story: And Spike thinking of Angel or the Immortal as a father? So he must know th at vampires can have kids. So he won't be surprised that he's the father. No, he wasn't ;-) From that moment on Courtney knew she would get anything out of her father she wanted. This was going to be fun. *grins* loved that :)


Author's Response: thanks for the link for help with a beta and thanks for the review too I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Libby 2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love your story so far. I didn't really spot any mistakes and I think that some of the other reviewers are being too harsh on you. My friend doesn't have a beta because people either don't have time or don't respond. So I'm saying that you should keep writing even if you don't have a beta yet. You have an awesome story going.

Author's Response: thanks for your review, im glad you like the story. I have up to chapter 7 written cause they are posted on other sites but I just joined this one so there are not many on, I do try to keep the story as well written as possible by using spell check etc. but sometimes errors creep though you know you sometimes do need people to look through it. Thanks for your review, you seem really nice

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1

gotta love spuffy parent fics. please hurry and update again soon :).

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

The others are right about a beta. Would be good if you had one (most every writer has an editor). Because it is a fact: It is very hard to see his own mistakes ad hoc. And even the spell check doesn't find everything. I'm not English so I wouldn't spot all of the errors you make. Therefor to the more important things: Your story! ~ Florida is very sunny, right? So it's a good thing that Spike has the Gem of Amara then! Too bad when we had a dusty vamp, right? :) Loved the first chapter so far! I'm looking forward to see how Buffy will react.

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

this is very interesting please continue updating, i can't wait to read more x

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start. I saw a few mistakes. But honestly? I don't care. ; ) They did not take away any enjoyment from reading the chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed reading this chapter very much. And in my opinion, your writing isn' t so bad that I won't continue reading the story. I think you'll do fine if you get a good beta and continue reading other examples of excellent Spuffy. You can learn a lot that way. ;) Also, take your time with the chapters and don't be in a rush to post (not that you are...). Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

good so far looking forward to more

Reviewer: Willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a good start, interesting plot. You do need to have a beta read over your work though, even the best writers have a beta. Also, please make all you notes in the A/N, the comment about the ring should nto be in the body of the story, Please dont get frustrated, I am only tryign to help, this has the makings of a good story .... Good Luck

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

please update this is so good !!

Reviewer: mas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

i agree with sam. I know you are probably young and a new writer, but there is no excuse for posting something that hasn't been edited well or written well.

I don't want to discourage you from writing, but you might want to get your stories read by someone else and use spell check before posting at a site where die hard Spuffy fans converge.

Good luck

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, this story needs a lot of work. it's not written very well and it has way too many errors. one look at the first chapter makes me not wanna bother with anymore. i really think you need a beta if you're going to continue to write fictions.

Author's Response: do you know anyone that could be my beta??

Reviewer: Ellie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

AWW! I love it! Please update! You have me hooked after the first Chapter : )

Reviewer: VJ SNA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting...Evil tease :) Keep it coming

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