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Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2006 - 03:11 am Title: The Purpose

I liked your story so far, but somehow, now that the thing it ran towards is happening, I find something very important missing, and that is emotions. Here is nothing besides the will to win, and that seems so weird, because I think there would be loads of it going on, but you donīt give any insight besides the obvious game taking place. Also, this is huge for Buffy, but you gave no thoughts or feelings of her away.
It makes it ugly somehow at the moment, I guess I have to wait for later chapters to find anything about emotional involvement........hopefully.....

Author's Response: i'm sorry you don't care for it so much, but at this point, they haven't really developed any deep feelings for each other....they are undeniably attracted to each other, but they're still very much focused on winning... as to not giving away buffy's feelings, there is a reason for it, and more than just the fact that i wanted to write that last chapter completely from spike's perspective....as he has no idea of her feelings or motivations....neither could you ;)....and finally....let's face it, the whole thing is kind of ugly...they're using sex to try to control each other...it's naturally not going to be pretty (sexy...but not pretty lol)...anyways, hope that explains a little bit, and hope you keep liking the story a little better from here on out...once the actual ritual is done, the emotions will start to build more :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2006 - 01:08 am Title: The Purpose

Come on, Spike, win!!! She's needs to be taken down a peg or ten. Please!

Reviewer: GoldenBuffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2006 - 12:34 am Title: The Purpose

HA HA, omg, Spike is evil, gotta love him. Can't wait to see Buffy's reaction. But I have a feeling the gams is yet to be won, and Spike is counting his eggs before they are hatched. Great update, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 11:54 pm Title: The Purpose

Yes, I'm the bint and I want to know how the game is played. >:)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: The Purpose

*pouts* You keep teasing us. And now I'm thoroughly addicted to this story. It's amazing. Please give us more very soon. ; )

Reviewer: bellefleur29 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: The Purpose

I think you're trying to kill---you are the ruler of the cliffhanger, soap operas could learn from you. I need to know more, what happens next!! Stop tricking me, I promise I'll continue reading if you give me two in a row.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: The Purpose

love the update!!!!!!! but please please please please please please please pretty please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: The Purpose

WONDERFUL chapter! But you are soooo mean to leave it there!!!!!!! I need more......QUICK!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: The Purpose

Great chapter! You have me on the edge of my seat! Please update soon!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: The Purpose

I get so excited when I see one of your stories has updated! Really good chapter! Looking forward to more. =)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 07:53 pm Title: The Purpose

This is quite the dance! I'm biting my nails not wanting either on in charge of the other but equals....you story though and I am hooked!

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: The Purpose

I can't beieive how long you are drawing this out....
Please...Please.... don't stop!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: The Victor?

You can't end it like that. We need to know what will is gonna and soon. The suspense is killing me.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: The Victor?

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 12:24 pm Title: The Victor?

Buffy made Spike furious... that is bad for him because he doesn't think clearly know. Mmm 'assume nothing'? Seems as if Buffy has won... yet your words and this Completely missing the almost imperceptible soft smile that crossed his lips. makes me wonder if Buffy really has won. ~ We'll find out later I think. I was fun reading; looking forward to the next one to find out.

Reviewer: adoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 09:29 am Title: The Victor?

cliffhanger much?evil...

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 04:34 am Title: The Victor?

Don't know if I really want either one to win... I definitely don't want Spike to be her "slave" ...

Waiting for the next update to see where the story goes.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:34 am Title: The Victor?

What? What? What? I bet he has to actually say the words huh? Ugh!! This story is killing me I tell ya!! It's really a good story! Can't wait for more! =)

Reviewer: Priscilla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: The Victor?

But Spike didn't say it! He just said, "Right. Right." How much does anyone want to bet that that was his loophole? Anyone?

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: The Victor?

Thanks for the quick update, but we're still pretty much in the same place you left us before! Great fight scene though! They should all be like that. Terrific story.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: The Victor?

Loved the battle you wrote, physical, mental and sexual combat! Spike is tricky, why do I get the feeling that Buffy made a mistake? Thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: The Victor?

Gaah! *whimpers* There should be a rule against torturing your readers. Please update soon.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: The Victor?

PLEASE !!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!! update soon......... waitng for more!!!

Reviewer: Missouragirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: The Victor?

Aw, c'mon! That's just mean, leaving us hanging like that. You've got me totally hooked, and I wanna know how this fight ends, so update soon! Pretty please?!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: The Victor?

you are a very evil woman jl. please more soon. i'll give you cookies. PLEASE!!!!!! and buffy should be smarter than that he didn't say the words. please more soon.

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