

Date: 06/30/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: Origins
Oh wow, this doesn't seem good. How are they going to stop it then? If you can't kill it, what can you do? I don't want Spike or anyone else hurt because of the demon's essence. I hope they figure something out before it's too late!
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Date: 06/30/2006 - 01:48 pm Title: Origins
Mmmmmh-hmmmm when Buffy's demon is fighting against Spike telling the story of the first slayer than it is important that he tells it. End of the line? That would be pretty bad indeed. So they have to find a solution without killing the demon. Yet I wonder if Spike claiming Buffy back would do the trick b/c it's only her... but there was something in the first spell. I have to read it again. Maybe it would work... Till next chapter!

Date: 06/30/2006 - 08:43 am Title: Origins
Great chapter

Date: 06/30/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Origins
Ta! Itīs out, finally. I canīt wait to see how you will let them react when they find out how to stop the demon - through a claim - right?

Date: 06/30/2006 - 02:12 am Title: Origins
Good update!

Date: 06/30/2006 - 12:31 am Title: Origins
Yes - NOW do you see what Wilow's lack of knowledge and preparation has wrought??? Now do you see what your arrogance has wrought, Giles? You're more of a spellcaster than Willow - if anyone should have done a spell to release Spike's chip, it should have been you. And, you never should have allowed her to do that spell without checking what spell she was using!!
Your friends truly are going to get you killed one day, Buffy - especially since your Watcher uses them as excuses to be lazy.
Remember the language of the spell about *bounding*. Read over the spell now, guys, and it should be obvious what needs to be done. Buffy needs to submit to being bound in some manner, or the only other choice is to kill her to prevent the demon's escape.

Date: 06/30/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Origins
Nicely written-- no real surprises, as you did a nice job of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I liked the "end of the line" for Slayers-- that was a nice touch.

Date: 06/30/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Origins
Nicely written-- no real surprises, as you did a nice job of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I liked the "end of the line" for Slayers-- that was a nice touch.

Date: 06/29/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Origins
Excellent chapter and explanation of what's going on. Still waiting to see what else Willow did to screw up things.

Date: 06/29/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Origins
Great update! I'd like to smack Giles and Xander upside the head with a big stick. More please.

Date: 06/28/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
Wow, I'm proud of Buffy, the real Buffy. I hope they make it through this. I would hate for whatever it is, which I'm assuming is the Slayer coming out, to destroy them or their relationship! I can't wait to find out what Spike wants to say.
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
Oh my.. Buffy is still suffering of what she did to Spike, whatever he says. Well he isn't okay and Buffy saw it; even it wasn't really Normal!Buffy's fault that Spike got hurt. But Xander.. he'll never trust Spike because Spike got Buffy and not he, Xander. Xander should act like a friend but he doesn't. Loved Buffy's speech. And now Spike will tell.. in the next part :)

Date: 06/28/2006 - 09:29 am Title: Laying Down the Law
aha..... so what i was thinkin might just come true..... love the update!!!

Date: 06/28/2006 - 02:56 am Title: Laying Down the Law
Very nice! I've had some catching up to do on my reading since I'd been away on vacation. I really like where you are taking this story-- I loved the tender moments they shared as Buffy shared her blood, and the way she recently stood up to her friends was amazing! Wish the writers of BtVS had her do that and not worry about the Xan-man so much! Looking foward to your next chapter!

Date: 06/28/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Laying Down the Law
Boy, the tension is killing me! Coem on, I would like to know what you have in store for Buffy.

Date: 06/27/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
Aha! I knew it would all come down to that pesky first slayer! Can't wait til Spike spills all the beans (I still think Willow's got some 'splainin' to do too). As much as I know you need him for plot (and cause we all need someone to hate - other than Buff - at this point) I hope Bitch-Buffy knocks Xander around a bit before all is put to rights - he's just SOOOOOOOO annoying! He'd learn so much more if he'd shut up and listen once in a while. Well, back to your wonderful tale.... I still love it and look forward to the next installment. Sure hope Buffy can keep her Slayer cool through Spike's explaination. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.

Date: 06/27/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
ICan we maybe find some tape for Xander's mouth???

Date: 06/27/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
Nice Chapter, I am looking forward to what Spike has to say about the whole deal.

Date: 06/27/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
I'm really glad Buffy's finally come around and is supporting Spike. You've built up a truly delicious plot line in this, can't wait for the next chapter!!
And hopefully in the near future, Xander will get eaten...or maybe just bitten a teensy bit

Date: 06/26/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Healing
I forgot to add Joyce last time: she cares about Spike too, not only Buffy and Dawn. But that's it. Okay, Anya was worried too. ~ To the new chapter: Loved Buffy going through the motions. .. hopefully things will start to get better; if they are able to prevent the next danger (the council). And if you didn't guess: Loved the chapter :)

Date: 06/26/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Healing
Evil! Can't wait for more!

Date: 06/26/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Healing
Is Buffy gonna end up dying if whatever's in her doesn't leave? I hope no one else gets hurt, especially Spike. He's suffered enough and so has Buffy, the real one, in a way!
Great chapter! I hope it goes well for them! I can't wait to find out what's wrong. Hopefully they'll stop whatever's in her and get it out!
By the way, when's Spike gonna be able to claim her back again as well?

Date: 06/25/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Healing
Wow great update. Love the embarrassing moment for Joyce while Spike and Buffy got all erotically stimulated (God I love Anya). So happy that they made it through that little episode without Bitch-Buffy making an appearance. Hope Spike gets to spill his knowledge in time for it to actually help without getting his butt kicked again in the process. Keep glowy-Dawn close! Thanks for sharing. more please.

Date: 06/25/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Healing
Wonder what Spike has to say.....

Date: 06/25/2006 - 08:31 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
Thank goodness for Joyce or Spike would be suffering at the hands of more than just a possessed slayer. Love this tale (even though I get all teary-eyed every time Buff stomps all over Spike with such evil glee). Glad she's giving him blood - hopefully it will give him some insight or at least some sort of defense against UberEvil Buffy when she decides to come out and play again. So, is Willow every gonna fess up to what she did with the spell so they can figure everything out, or is she gonna wait until someone dies at the hands of the Buffy-bitch? With Dawn's green-glowy help, I'll bet Giles and Anya can figure out how to help Buffy kick her evil twin right out of the ozone! Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.