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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Uh oh.......what's gonna happen now? It seems like William has given up. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Dumb Buffy! I wish she would just for once give William the benfit of the doubt. I hope she does some groveling in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

William just doesn't think.....Great chapter!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I can sympathize with Buffy to a point. But she likes to forget that his life also changed dramatically after Angel and Dru's death, and while she has to adapt to a new way of life, he has to adapt to new feelings and wants developing in him...I still don't quite understand her reasons for flying completely off the handle, but she sounds like she's trying to find reasons for not having any sort of relationship with William. She says she wants to be loved by him, but she hasn't shown it to him at all...its not all about him showing his feelings, she has to step up to the plate at some point.

I'm really tryin to refrain from calling Buffy an out right bitch in this chapter, because they are both still under a tremendous amount of stress with the death of their loved ones and having to raise a child, then to add whatever feelings they are developing for each other...but she really was unfair to Will in this chapter, he was trying to do what she has hoped he would do, talk and explain his feelings, and she just inserted her own words in his mouth...for reasons that have no real basis...I could go on and on, but I really can't wait to see how you guys work this out. :)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Argh!!! Screams of frustration are filling my home now-- but only because you guys did such a great job of writing this sceen. Buffy can be so stubborn, and she can make herself feel so worthless. Great job on cranking up the tension about 1000 degrees; hopefully, better communication will ensue. Too bad that "fine" wasn't what she needed to hear.

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I know everyone else was mad about this chapter but, I can't hate Buffy. I was put in her position, minus the child and dead siblings. I liked a guy who only wanted the sex, and for me to be there but didn't want a relationship. It hurts and from that hurt comes the anger. You start think that everything he tells you is for the soulpurpose to get youn into bed, so I wouldn't have let him speak either. He needed to tell her before now. She feels outta plsce in a whole new contry and is unsure about her whole life around her. He's just going to have to be more ......verbal if he wants to let her know that he does feel something. In this situation he's not going to be able to show her by making love her her, it will still feel like sexthat is taken out of convienace, or to take her to a party, that would feel like he's pretty much saying she's there she can go and look good on my arm. I'm really rooting for him to get his ass back there and to fix this.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

we are so stubborn, aren't we? people that is. we'll cut off our noses just to spite our faces, like buffy and william are doing. everyone is insecure, lonely and wanting to connect to someone. hope they get their heads out of their asses and get it together.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

WOW - such emotion, great chapter, I can feel the sparks coming off the page

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Um, anyone else want to slap Buffy for being an idiot? Ok, she wouldn't let him talk, she was shoving words in his mouth, interrupting him everytime he tried to say anything. Couldn't she have just shut up and listened to him for once before jumping to stupid jealous conclusions?

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

SO not funny leaving me like this! More soon PLEASE!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Wow, Buffy is being a first class bitch unloading on William like that. They're both under a lot of stress, and in a new, scary situation. Their communication skills are crap, and they both are easy to anger...I don't know when you're going to get them to sit down and really talk about how they feel about one another, but I hope it happens soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Faith is right: How is she supposed to know these things if you don't tell her? *sigh* They are fighting again. If William is clever he won't go at all to the dinner and try to talk to Buffy instead. Buffy is hurt and lashing out indeed. I'm not sure William knows why she is doing it. ~ Looking forward to the next part; hopefully it will get better again then. William talked to Faith and told her what Buffy means to him. It would be time he tells her.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

buffy is so impossible to deal with but at this point i understand her anger and frustration with william and herself. loved it but please fix this mess that's become of buffy and william. they fit so well and it's just sad to read about them fighting over a misunderstanding. yeah, maybe william did treat buffy as though she was inconvinient in the beginning and maybe buffy did the same thing in a small way but not so much anymore. loved it. please post soon.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

She's so off base and such a drama queen. What an idiot. She wants it to be like this so she has an excuse to go back to the States where it's easier. Just go and run, Buffy. You never wanted this, anyway.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

SHE REALLY MAKING ME MAD!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Ouch, me thinks Buffy overreacted just a wee bit. While she might have a point, maybe, she still needs to get over the tense jealousy and the best way to do that...sleep with Will! :D I like my solution ;) Or maybe he should just grab her and ravage her, just to prove that he likes her and not skanky faith. Just a couple of nice suggestions ;)

lol

Keep it up, great story!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2006 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

There she gos.-----Againj.Lord that girl can sabatoges herself like no one else.She never stops and thinks befor she leaps.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Loved the chapter! Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: fallen_angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Buffy's got a nasty temper.

Reviewer: kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Brilliant ... adding a skanky Faith to the mix. Should shake things up a bit eh? I'm just going to patiently sit back and wait for this to play out and pray to God that you throw some serious Spuffy in here too. ARGGGGG

Reviewer: Survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Taking Faith to a benefit while Buffy's with him in London? Badly done, William!!
Love this story. Please update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Uh-huh... seeing William in his office did go wrong. But maybe it was good that Buffy was there in that moment. First because the met in Angel's office and got to mourn a bit. Second because of Faith. It's better Buffy found out now. If William had mentioned it later the day would she have been more furious? I don't know. But maybe it was good she did hear it from Faith. Well because maybe she sees it different then William does? Though I don't know. Yet William is an idiot. He should have thought what he does. With not telling Buffy for once and Buffy took it very bad. I hope William did not only hear what she had to say, I hope he could 'read' what she wanted to say. And that he won't go with Faith if he wants to keep Buffy but take her instead. Then if he doesn't do something about it Buffy won't stay. Not the way he wants.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

loved it!!!! uh oh. this is does not look good for our couple. post soon.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Good Lord! Another nice show from Buffy. These two are ANGSTY! They need to get a grib...on each other.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Convenient

Loved William and Buffy's talk in Angel's office, it's just a shame such a tender moment ended in an argument. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter!

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