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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

I loved William and Buffy's talk. And I enjoyed reading William's musings at the end of the chapter. Can't wait till the London trip. Fantastic update!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

They seem to be friends now, more so than before. I hope it goes well! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Yes! And now we have some forward progress! When two people who are stubborn with baggage hook up, it takes a while! But I think they are figuring it out. I like that they apologized to each other. I like how William indicated he hurried back to see Buffy, but left it hanging there-- saying it without saying it, so as not to push her away. I love his internal dialogue when he sees Buffy and Ella together. I wonder if Buffy's internal dialogue is the same-- she mostly sees William as a sexual partner, but I wonder if she'll see his fatherly qualities this next week in London. Please, oh please-- update soon!!!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Yay he asked her,now moving on.

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

More soon please!! I can't wait!!
Great chapter! I really enjoy both of your works!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

And I'm certain she'll like seeing London. Lots of touristy things to do.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Awe, at last they were able to honestly talk (a bit). And both want to make it work. I cross my fingers for them (and hey, it's hard to type with that) ;-)
So a week in London? I wonder what that will bring. Till next chapter!

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Awwww Great update!!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Aww poor man cannot live without her.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Loved it when William asked Buffy for her and Ella to go to London with him! Great chapter!

Reviewer: sabrina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

hurry plzzz!! keep writing. god, i luv this fic sooo much. u must keep writing. i get so happy when u write another chapter. its soo fun 2 read the chaps. keep going!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Ok... Seem to be making those baby steps... into a real relationship. They did kinda do the Cart before the Horse..

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

How did I miss the posting of this chapter!!! It's a dandy too! I like that he gets mad and kisses her. I like the 'awww' ending. Gotta go read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

I love this story! :) You're weaving a rather enchanting tale.


(However, this chapter doesn't seem to be as polished as the rest of them, there's a lot of grammatical errors)

Author's Response: Sorry posted unbeta'd chapter. Have posted the beta's one now :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

Well, she didn't take anytime to think about it, but who would? I'm sure Spike doesn't have to worry about losing them. He doesn't even know if Buffy is really interested in Riley, and I'm hoping she isn't. Great chapter, ladies=)

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

yea! very much liked this chapter, cant wait for the chapter in London!!

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

I'm glad he asked them to come to London with him. Good update.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 15 - Are you still drunk?

I like the way you're writing William as possessive and insecure, it makes him appealing even when he's being a jerk. Asking Buffy and Ella to come to London with him is an excellent plot development, and they'll be together in a much smaller space. This story continues to flow smoothly, and William and Buffy's inability to admit their growing feelings makes me laugh.

Reviewer: michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

Sorry. It's been a while since I visited this site. Your story is still a hit, at least in my eyes. I love this story so much. I love the possessiveness of William. A very hot William.

Reviewer: Xti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2006 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

I hope Riley turns out to be gay or something. The idea of Buffy and Riley together makes me seethe.

I love your story though.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

I like possessive william!!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

How much did I just adore this chapter?! We went from ridiculous bickering to the sweetest scene ever. I needed that tonight. Hopefully the three will wake up just as peacefully as everyone fell asleep.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

awe that was so great. the end was sweet. please hurry and update again soon and if you can a little more spuffy and ella in the next chapter. more family time :)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

As utterly unfeminist as it sounds, I kind of like growly, possessive Spike (in a mutually consensual, equal partnership, of course)! :) A great chapter-- he's able to see what it is he really wants. Maybe both parties will be willing to bend a little, to make forward progress.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Taking back what's mine

The ending was so cute. I hope Buffy wakes up first to see him cuddling with them and doesn't jump right to the yelling.

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