I really enjoyed William and Buffy's confrontation. Loved the ending of the chapter. I look forward to finding out what happens when Buffy wakes up. Great update!

glad will made a move. it was driving me crazy with all the sexual tention. know it's not as easy as this and i really hope buffy doesn't resort to dating riley cuz...gross but loving it anyway. post soon.

Gosh...I just hate it when people who like each other don't see that they do or are in denial and make up all kinds of excuses for why they don't or shouldn't. I can't wait for them to wake up and see the truth! Update soon please!

I liked the play on the word "Mine"...Nice way to work it in! Now..If William could just say he is sorry when she is awake and he is sober.....Not only that..but he needs to open up and tell her how he feels! Love the way it ended though..with William crawling into bed with Buffy and Ella. Very sweet family moment. Great update!

Hmm I can't believe he would actually drink that rat piss Jack, I mean he is upper class Englishman he could afford the good stuff.

write some more now!!! jk
Like the story, i generally hate riley, but as long as there is no "Biley" or G. I. Joes, it's all cool.
Have buffy, willow, and william go clubbing in the city.
and for the love of god, write william so friends.
And possibly transforn a little bit like spike, i mean he does like the Sex Pistols. :P

I really enjoyed reading William's musings. Looks like Buffy's really in for it now. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic chapter

Lucy-- You've got some 'splainin' to do!!!

Very nice chapter. i agree with William's inner workings-- he needs to tell her how he feels. Maybe they can quit yelling, almost-kissing, etc. Maybe she can forgive him and not think him such a prick, and maybe he'll be able to kick the testosterone down a notch. If he handles this next bump in the road a little more gracefully, and if he tells her how much trouble he went through, and maybe if he threw in an apology for his earlier behavior on the phone, he can get what he actually wants-- Buffy in his bed. Great stuff!!!

Uh Oh...Buffy is playing with fiiiiirrrree.. lol Let's see how much William hits the roof in the next chapter! Great update ; )

That was a good update even though it was short. loving the fic.

Hehe...serves William right. After the way he treated Buffy. Though I must say, I don't want Buffy to date Riley. When is William finally gonna admit that he like her too?

Great chapter! Update soon please!

I like that they are both going for one emotion to another so very very quickly ... :)

Both Buffy and William are hurt now. I wonder if they'll take about it. ~ And Buffy telling Riley he can use the ballroom? William will be against it, I'm sure. *reads on* Oh yeah.. I was guessing right. Till next chapter to read Buffy's reaction. (After all it is not her house; she should have asked first.)