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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Voices in the dark

The baby monitor was a good way to allow William to hear what was going on in Buffy's head without another big emotional confrontation. Hopefully he will make an effort to be a little more attentive to what Buffy is going through as well as what he is going through..

Great update!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Voices in the dark

I'm so glad William switched off the baby monitor before he heard the ending of Buffy's conversation with Willow. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

I love this story, but its a technical point i'm making-if Willow was employed by them as a nanny,she wouldn't barge into the bedroom, its just not done, she would knock & wait

Reviewer: vs_in_nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Great chapter, great story. Please keep it up. Thank you for sharing this.

Reviewer: krusty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Excellent

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Oh, interested to read more!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Giggles on the interruption by Willow and Ella. Good chapter with the apologiy and can't wait to read more on William and Ella as seen by Buffy and visa versa.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Love your style of writing.. Very cathing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Update soon.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Love this fic!! Really enjoying the banter between Buffy & Spike

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Babies truly do have that kind of radar-- A form of birth control unto itself! Great update-- I'm always so happy to see this story when it's updated. I missed you guys and your great stories. Keep it coming-- I like the sexual tension between these two. I like that you are starting to thaw the icy William, and how you are showing that work is what he does, because it's what he's always done, when someone has passed.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Big emotional break through for William..Glad to see Buffy approach him first with an apology though.. Hey BTW...Willow's timing SUCKS! lol You would think with the salary that they are paying her, she would learn to knock..hahaha

Thanks for another great update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Awe, what a way to say sorry! One that William understood. :) So he's not mad at Buffy. Mmmh the contrary :) But the tray didn't survive it *gg* ~ loved it!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

I'm glad William and Buffy talked some more. Loved the Spuffy moment at the end of the chapter... it's a shame Willow's timing was so bad. Great chapter!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Hey, look at me, I'm reviewing...lol! I felt all bad that I've been reading the story and haven't left any reviews. I'll try to make up for that. Anyway, you ladies are doing a great job with this one. I was also wondering about Willow barging in like that. I don't think my boss would appreciate it. And she ruined the Spuffy moment, so not cool. Okay, done now, love the story=)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

He was accurate with that comment about apologies not being a wipe to hurt him over again. She seems to get stuck on a track, and isn't completely fair to someone she barely knows.

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

"the door flew open and there stood Willow with ella on her hip" did willow grow up in a barn, does she not know how to knock ,especially on a bedrm door. I'm mad at her , she spoiled the moment i had been waiting for ,why don't yu give her a girlfriend to keep her busy . I hope yu update weekly because this is one of my favorite stories., yu guys are great.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Dam Willow's timing.How you love to leave cliff hangers.Well we know buffy has feelings for him,and it gos without saying Spike has feelings for her.again ,Dam willows timeing,

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

Okay, what kind of nanny crashes into her employer's bedroom? If she were mine, I'd fire her. It was funny though. Good chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 8- Room Service

*lol* That last bit was fun, even if we didn't get more Spuffy loving. ;) Wonderful chapter, full of emotion. I'm glad William opened up a bit more to Buffy and it was nice to see that she was actually thinking before talking this time. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: goofymama99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

please update soon. i hate seeing them so sad and at each others throats.

Reviewer: amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

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Could you please email me when you update? thankyou so much. this story has the starts of a great thing.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2006 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Just started reading your story, waited until a few chapters were up so I could decide if I wanted to continue or not. I do want to continue and see just how these two polar opposites get on with blending their lives together. I'm really enjoying reading about "William" and how he has to re-learn life that is not revolving around his job like most men do.

Buffy on the other hand lives for the moment without any pretense at social proprieties. I was glad that she was not just a flighty airhead but someone who for all her appearance can see the reality of a situation in front of her. I say this when I read her assessment of William wanting a woman to be a convenience and drop onto his very scheduled and busy lap. I had to really admire your story when I read that. Most busy career men do want a woman (mostly trophy wife or mistress) to drop onto their lap and not really put much into substance or personality.

Well said more than I intended with my opinions which I reaserve the right to change down the road.

Thanks for a delightful read to date and I look forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Can't wait for more!

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