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Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

wow! this chapter was really emotional, just like I was. Update soon.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

love the update!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 08:51 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Very emotional update. Keep them coming please.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Great chapter!

Reviewer: V06 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Awwww poor spike!!!! I love this fic!! So well written!!!! Please continue!~

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

I am not sure how you may have wanted to portray Buffy here..To some she may had sounded judgemental. I DO think she could have had much more tact in what she said..but

I understand her frustration in trying to deal with William and the kind of person he is. Someone who bottles everything up inside and seems so cold, it sometimes takes harsh words to get through to them. I am catching the drift that Spike had to become this way for survival..(maybe?) The point is..the situation that he and Buffy are in with this sweet little girl..he is going to have to deal with Dru's death head on..and he is going to have to become much more sensitive and involved if he insist on raising Dru and Angel's child. That's not to say Buffy is perfect either. I can definatly see a few character flaws there as well. Great update guys!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

great chapter

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter six - We are all in this together

great chapter

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Guys, I just loved this chapter. Jeez. Thanks.

Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Wow. Awesome ending line. Wonderful, wonderful, *wonderful* update. I love the arguments - this Buffy and William are so vastly different and their distaste/lust for one another is so delightfully evident.
Great chapter.
-Alyx

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

great chapter. Glad he said what he said to her. Not everyone grieves in the same way. She needs to get that throught her head. Good job. Look forward to updates.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Wow when are those 2 going to get together.The truth is neather know one another.but from where I stand,they want to.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Buffy's self rightchous ( I know bad spelling) act is getting annoying. I get that they are both greiving, but what she seems to think is that if that others way of grieving is not recognizable to her, they are not grieving at all. He was a dick to leave her alone with the baby for a week so soon after Angel and Dru's death and right after they slept together, but to call him heartless was over the line. For someone who deems herself so intuitive, she hasn't gotten a clue as to who William is and why he acts the way he does, she just takes everything as face value.

So I am glad William proved her wrong and kinda put her in her place. I am liking this story though so far, I wouldn't be so passionate about character development if I wasn't, so please update soon!!

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Great chapter. I like seeing William all teary eyed and drunk and I like that Buffy is figuring out that she gets turned on arguing with him. I'm sure that means more bantering between them to come :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

I really liked how William opened up to Buffy and the end of the chapter. Great update!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

Ha, Miss Righteous got some of her own medicine.

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

oh! that was a good chapte, made me cry , make me cry som emore realll soon! please.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

How sad.. so poignant.

Please continue.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

'The talk' indeed. Buffy tried to tell him what she did feel, and she did see what William felt. Poor William. Maybe it's harder for him because he can't show his feelings so easily.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Pour another one barman

poor william :( - loved the chapter though, the UST is jumping off the page

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter six - We are all in this together

Thanks for the update-- I've been missing this story, and both of your individual stories. Looking foward to more!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter six - We are all in this together

I love William bonding with the baby. Sweet.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter six - We are all in this together

At that moment, he had made up his mind to give Willow a pay rise. *gg* Poor Buffy; it's all too much for her for now. But William managed it good and found out he even loved it. Looking forward to see them figuring out what together means. :)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter six - We are all in this together

So sweet, I love the idea of Spike/William with a baby. The emotion your trying to show, is really jumping off the pafe, so very well writen, you gals are doing a great job ;)

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