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Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Free at Last

great updates

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Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: Seeing Things

How sad for him. How could she betry him like that. Hope something bad happens to the evil old man. Love this story, eben if it's so sad.

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 10:31 am Title: Seeing Things

Fascinating and gripping story. look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 10:10 am Title: Seeing Things

Aww..man..Poor William! Betrayed by his own Mother! So from his explanation..he is in ghost form most of the time since his "death" ...but since Buffy's arrival, he is corpreal? Man, I hope that William wises up to the old man, until it's to late for Buffy.. Great update!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 02:19 am Title: When Morning Comes

Just got caught up with this story, it's really good so far! Looking foward to seeing who the woman is. =)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:33 am Title: When Morning Comes

more please

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: When Morning Comes

I love this story :)! Love at first sight, yes, but not so easy at the beginning, it's what I prefer ;)! The mysterious priest is right: William has given Buffy a taste of something she has never felt before; but she has done the same to him. And I ask myself some questions... The mysterious priest, who calls William "son"... And if he was, really, William's father? It could be possible. After all, he was not enough a priest to respect life, and he could have had a mistress. William's mother, with her knowledge of black magic, could have interested him. And concerning William, I am anxious. His story reminds me another story. If he could be free of this house, and get out of it, he has been there for a hundred years. And if he became older, with a terrifying speed? Argglll :(! It would be horrible, I crave for an happy end! And I crave for the next chapter too! Good job! :)!

Reviewer: Sophie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 04:30 am Title: When Morning Comes

more please :D :D

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:03 pm Title: When Morning Comes

Can't get enough of your fic! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 03:31 pm Title: When Morning Comes

I can't wait to see what happens! Please update as soon as you can! Thanx ~Raven~

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 10:32 am Title: When Morning Comes

Buffy really let loose on him...It reminded me of the episode on BTVS where Buffy beat the hell out of Spike when he tried to stop her from turning herself into the police..( Can't remember the episode name though)

Great update..I'm looking forward to more : )

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 09:07 am Title: When Morning Comes

My first time reading through this fic. I love it. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Cold Comfort

Wonder what brought on Buffy's fever? Just a normal flu? Anyway, I like the way William is taking care of her..you can tell he has a kind soul. *good thing* Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Cold Comfort

good update

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Cold Comfort

Another great chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Cold Comfort

i'm very ingrossed in this story, so glad plotline is different from usual , what a great story, Looking forward to yur updates.

Author's Response: thanks, hopefully i can keep you hooked!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:30 am Title: Solitary reflections

Ahhh..the chapter I have been waiting for..the KEY chapter that brings everything together and makes it all make sense. WoW...What a cool idea you have here. William thinks that he has to have Buffy fall in love with him...but really she has to be willing to DIE for him..I hope that William begins to question that nasty Warlock. Thank you for getting us out of the dark! GREAT story!

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Solitary reflections

Great update and we finally learn more about William and the whole situation. That damn priest. Keep up the great work.

~Diana

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Solitary reflections

this is getting better and better. Love the suspense. So the wicked old priest is there with William. Feel so sorry for the other 2. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Solitary reflections

Interesting tale you have here. I am anxious to see where you take it.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Solitary reflections

good update

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Solitary reflections

Tres creepy and more dots are being connected. Definitely getting chills down my spin at the shape that's taking form now. ~turns a whiter shade of pale~ Great update.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Solitary reflections

Buffy doesn't know how much danger she really is in! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

Three updates since I've last been by and each one better than the last. This fic is great. I feel so bad for him, but where did everyone else go? Can't wait to see what happens next.

~Diana

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Bring on the Rain

This story is truly heart-breaking, yet. . .enthraling. I love it! It's so completely different from anything I've read in my entire life - truly unique! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanx! ~Raven~

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