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Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

This story is very interesting... I wonder what Spike brought her!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 08:31 am Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

Oh this is getting better and better.More please.

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:04 am Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

wow!!! great !!! i love ur new chap !! i was wondering when Spike would see Buffy dance!!! really well done!! cant wait for more so please update soon!!!

Reviewer: PIRATESXOHMY Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 01:21 am Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

i loved this chapter

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

Well, at least he left the gift on the bed and didn't hurl it against the wall in anger - that's progress. So now that he's seen her dancing.... with Lorne, what will he say/do? Is he gonna be a jerk and forbid her to be in the arms of a dance partner or is he gonna pay attention to the fact that there is really nothing other than friendship and dance partners there. Sure wish Buffy could've read Spike's mind about the "almost hitting her" thing, it would of relieved some of her trepadation I think. More please. this is excellent so far.

Author's Response: Yeah I was going to have him hurl the gift but when I made the decision of what gift for him to get her I decided maybe that wouldn't be such a good idea. I will definately say he'll attepmt to be a jerk but Buffy will set him straight. Though I don't know I'm still in the process of writing it. I could completely change it. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

I wonder how this will go? I hope they clear things up! Update soon please!!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

Oh to see the err of your ways !!! I loved the little chat with Spike and Gunn, and I do think his "William" side is the ticket to show her his softer side. He will have to work for this one, and I love it. Great chapter and thanks.

Author's Response: I will say he's not going to show his 'William side' all at once. As time goes on it will filter out. Glad you like it. Thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Just Buy her something fluffy:

Can't wait to find out what happens! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Read the whole thing...and boy are my eyes tired lol. It's really a great fic though. I wasn't sure about it when I first read the summary but it turned out really fantastic. Honestly when I read the summary I thought either this is gonna be really great or it's gonna suck. Lucky for me though it was great lol. I also am enjoying ballerina Buffy, like you said most people make her a ice skater which is fine, but it was nice to see her doing something different. So thank you for sharing your lovely piece of work!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

When I first read the summary of this (sometime ago), I didn't think I'd like to ready about a mafia so I gave it a pass. Then I saw it again a few days ago and said, what the heck! I love it. I'm so glad I decided to give it a go. I love how you are instilling all the characters and their personalities into a "family" situation. I love that Buffy is attracted sexually, but determined to keep her heart cold, and how Spike is longing for someone to love him - just so much like BtVS. More please. I'm hooked.

Reviewer: roo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 02:29 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

u kept saying shows instead of shoes
but great story so far loved it

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:48 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

You kind of freaked me out when he raised his hand the second time but good job with the story so far!!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 10:58 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Great chapter! Not too thrilled with Spike right now!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 10:28 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

wow great update im hooked to ur story more please!!!

Reviewer: chance Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 10:27 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

hey lovin ur story so far its great!!!im glad Buffy's still goin to be dancing!!! please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 07:49 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

So glad to see an update on this story!!!!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 06:26 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

i love this fic. glad to see an update. cant wait for more

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 04:57 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

hey lol i dont hate u i think ur new chap is great and ur right at keast he didn't hit her. its great that Buffy stands up for herself!! im really glad that Spike is gonna let her continue her ballet!!! i love ur Lorne at the end of the chap he just seems to lighten the whole thing up , break the tension in the chap !! well i really hope u update real soon!!! coz i can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:04 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Good to have you back, and with a great addition, no less! Good update, and I'm glad that Spike didn't hit her- if you've ever seen the Soprano's- it happens a lot. Glad to see that Spike is better than that!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:34 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Sooo relieved that Spike didn't follow through and hit her. Buffy shouldn't have hit him either. Though...he has to understand that she is human..and she is under a great deal of stress.

If Spike would listen to her..he could actually learn some things from Buffy. In his line of work..would he really want to talk about killing people around his wife or children. I'm thinking not. Don't think Spike is used to having someone with a little more "couth" around..Great update!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

yay your back... Please keep updating I couldn't handle it if you disappeared again lol, are you going to update 'together they protect her' because these 2 are 2 of my favourite stories and i really wanna see how they end

Reviewer: rett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

i loved this chapter , whens the next update

Author's Response: Possibly tomorrow or the next day.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

GOD I AM SO GLAD YOUR BACK . I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH AND THE TENSION YOUR BUILDING UP IS EXPLOSIVE. I CAN'T WAIT TIL SHE DOES FALL FOR HIM SO SHE CAN EAT HER OWN WORDS WELCOME BACK AND I'LL BE CHECKING FOR MORE UPDATES.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it. Lol. Things though will definately be a roller coater for Spuffy that much I can say.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

No complaints here, it's your story. But I would be happier of you updated it more frequently.

Author's Response: Don't worry I definately will be updating more. Hopefully I'll post chapter 13 by tomorrow. Possibly.

Reviewer: Sheree Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Loved the update, cant wait for more.

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