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Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 11:58 pm Title: The Meetings

Okay. Chapter 10 is still not showing up, yet there is an actual REVIEW for it here. How did that happen? And where did chapter 10, the chapter you are obviously updating right now, go???? Confuzzled. :-(

Author's Response: Don't worry I am as confused as you are. I contacted the administrators about it but have yet to get a reply.

Reviewer: Reiskye Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 10:39 pm Title: Bathroom Apologies to Eyeliner Tears

Is the woman from his past Cecily?

Reviewer: Syl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Moving In

This is a great story and we are all anxious to read each new chapter but I''ve noticed that there seems to be some delay in uploading each new chapter. This several hour delay doesn't seem to be happening with other fics posted to this site. Perhaps you could check with the site owner to see what the problem might be? I love reading the new chapters and it is frustrating to have to wait several hours for the new chapter to become available.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Moving In

love it!! cant waite for more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: danielle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Moving In

I LOVE IT!!!!!
please write some more i really want to find out wot happens
thanks

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Moving In

I like it....the story sure has potential

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 10:09 am Title: Moving In

Thank you for the great update. I loved your insights into Buffy's heart and mind , and the dream sequence was very well done.

Reviewer: stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 05:49 am Title: Moving In

good story

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Moving In

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WAT HAPPENS NEXT. i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that spike and buffy get together for real and that they become happy. also i really want spike to treat buffy right and let her be her own person. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Moving In

Nice and cozy a closet can be. Well maybe not Buffy's since she could probably drive a mini car in it but still her and Spike alone in a small area gives all sorts of ideas.

Very good chapter, glad that Spike kept her safe from the evil bag, hope he keeps her and her family safe always. More Please!

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Moving In

I love this spike. He sounds so...so strong, so handsome, the word i'm looking for is Masculine. I can't wait to read chapter 10, i wonder what's Spike going to show Bufffy? mmhm. Oh, well, i'll probably have to wait and read, until, you update, right? right.
Awesome chapter. I love the way you keep on with your story. Slow, yet, detailed to the last end. I love this in the stories I read. Good Job! One question. How tall is Spike? I hope his over 6'1. In all the stories they make him sound puny next to Riley (eww) or Parker (double ew) and 'Angel' (i DON'T LIKE HIM, HE HAS A BIG FOREHEAD, LOL. HE DOES!). Update soon, please, for us. (**,) Dreamy look

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 12:45 am Title: Moving In

Yeah! I like it...actually, I love it. Will be waiting eagerly for the next update. Thank you.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Moving In

more please

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:09 pm Title: Moving In

Yes- cliffhanger. But, they are a good tool writers use to hook us readers. :-) Good chapter. Interesting view of Spike, and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you for a wonderful update!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Moving In

O spuffy you are evil.Not only do we have a big cliffhanger,but we have to wait .forever to get another chapter.Gerrrrrrrrrr.!"O well I will wait like a good girl.Why because I am hoocked.I so want to see how this is going to play out.And I have to say I just finished Winter Storm.That is why I was drawn to your fic.I have to see how you are going to play it.so you have me hoocked.

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: Moving In

At first I was wary of reading this story. I've read some sort of like it, ones where Buffy is forced to be with Spike and I didn't care too much for them. Now that I've begun to read this story, I LOVE it! I'm so glad that I decided to read it. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Moving In

i hate being short too!! i love this story. please dont wait too long to make some juicy updates!

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Moving In

Ohhhh i am loving this story!! I love all powerful and controlling Spike... especially when you know he may become less controlling and start to love Buffy! Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Moving In

Ohhhh i am loving this story!! I love all powerful and controlling Spike... especially when you know he may become less controlling and start to love Buffy! Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: Moving In

Gotta love a tall amn...nice chapter...hope she starts to feel more comfortable, I mean lets face it there are worse places to be!!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Moving In

Really, if Spike wouldn't be such an ass with the damn smirk on his face...Buffy could have really gotten hurt and he doesn't show concern? Ask her if she's ok? That would win far more points with me than a smirk. Spike's a dummy. "I'm gonna MAKE her love me". Schyeah...that'll be the day.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Moving In

That dream was chalk full of things to come...I hope and I hope not all at the same time. Spike is like a walking contradiction..He is clearly after Buffy's love, but is he willing to REALLY love her in return. What is he wanting to come out of this relationship? Is Buffy suppose to be one of many..or is she special? Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: Moving In

This story is my new favorite. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Moving In

So Buffy moves in with Spike. I wonder how long he'll give her to get "adjusted". Great chapter!

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Moving In

Ack! Juicy cliff hanger! Can't wair to see more just dying to see what happens next here :)

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