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Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:00 pm Title: Moving In

Oh PLEASE don't let me wait too long for the next chapter, I am really loving it, so please hurry. Great job and thanks

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Moving In

haha...I hate being short too! I hope they get closer! It seems like her dream is a premonition. I wonder if it's gonna be Angel or Riley who does it! I hope it doesn't end bad for my favorite couple! I can't wait to read your enxt chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 09:58 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Fantastic job with the balcony scene , so very erotic and I loved how you wrote Spike , dark , seductive , threatening but so possessive!
I hope you update soon , i'm completely hooked. :)

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 09:45 am Title: Chaos Part I Roughing it up

Powerful and captivating !

Reviewer: Peanut Butter Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

good chapter. Can't wait till she moves in, I hope you update soon. Still a little surprised no one came out after her, but hey still really good.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

wow that was hot. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that buffy starts to have feelings for spike and that she comes to love him. also i really hope that spike starts to be more caring to buffy and that he controls his anger around her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chpater. thanx

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: Little White Lies to Keep the Dark Truth Hidden

Just discovering this and I love it ! Wonderful writing !

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

wow still grinning spike persona is great please dont turn him into some whipped milksop. I like him nasty.
Story is wonderful, dont let anyone make you change your story it is your story to tell. Thank you. more please and soon

Reviewer: Livia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I just can't tell you how much i love this story. It is just amazing. And again I love the dancing. Please update soon.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Wonderfully done - the story is smooth and flowing. That and the slow seduction of a young, innocent Buffy is practically intoxicating.

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:28 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

AWESOME!!!!!

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 06:29 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

omg that was wonderfull!:D great job! can't wait to see the next chapter,updte soon please!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Gotta love a hot balcony scene...cigarette anyone??...roll on the next update, cant wait to see the sparks fly when she moves in...felt a bit sad for our girl in this chapter...I think she was very humiliated...hope Spike is gentle( but not toooooo gentle)*tee hee*:)

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Chaos Part I Roughing it up

I am really lovin this fic...wanted to review both chappies, but have to make this quick so I can keep reading!!....love Faith in this, very glad she isnt still carrying a torch for our man though*phew*...I dont know how he can win Buffy over but I guess we will all ahve fun watching huh:)

Reviewer: Amarysso Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:40 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

This was great! Luxferi is right: the smuttier the better! *lol*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:32 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Hot chapter with Spike asserting his rights to her body and showing her what he plans for them in the immediate future. Poor Buffy, and innocent who is warring with her situation. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This one was great.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:00 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I can't believe Spike didn't go after her! I hope he at least checks on her in the morning... not that she probably won't jack him in the nose or something.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Yes you did take some of the lines of dead things.But I believe you when you say its going to get more intense When Buffy moves in with him ,next chapter.And that is what i have been waiting for.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

i am loving your story! i can't wait to read more spuffy and more fighting! that's the best part, unless someone gets really hurt, anyway, please update soon? i can't wait to read more!!!!!1

Reviewer: Irrishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Chaos Part I Roughing it up

Well memby we are going to get somewhere!"

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I feel bad for Buffy. Spike shouldn't lose his temper like that. I think that Buffy should off struggled more to get out of Spike's arms. Why didn't he (spike) run after her? I can't wait to read chapter 9, please update soon. I love Spike's attire. when is this moving day?

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 10:47 pm Title: Chaos Part I Roughing it up

awesome chapter. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

i am officially in love with this story. i love that while spike is still a hardcore bad boy (which is SO hot) he still obviously has a really sweet and gentle side (which makes it even hotter). keep updating!!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Top Notch scene....fantastic!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

absolutely loved the intimate scene...you did a fantastic job on it

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