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Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

The man is hot, being a prick only makes us want him more, especially when eventually Buffy will break down his defenses, we know he can win her sexually, after all "no body does it better", but the real quest is how she changes the monster in him. Great story, I am loving it, please, I repeat PLEASE update soon. Oh and thanks

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Please, keep updating! I love how this story is starting! I'm dying for another chapter of our favorite couple!! I'm really excited to see how you're going to depict the progression of their relationship and how their love will blossom from their awkward beginning.

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

lovelovelove it! keep with the updates!!

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Woooh, exciting! Lovely fic :D

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 06:48 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

One point, le petit is male. If you want Lorne to call Buffy 'the small', it'd best be 'la petite', ^_^ Otherwise, excellent chapter. I'm like the "consideration" Spike is showing.

Author's Response: Thank you...no wonder I'm failing my French course.

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:11 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Buffy should not be falling for him, they should first be enemies ! Or at least thats what I think but hey its your story ; )

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:02 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

You're welcome, sweetie! *blushes* It's been a pleasure so far working with you. :) And guess what? I learnt new ballet terms! Cool! :D

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:57 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Hey, great story, loving it and the frequent updates! Keep 'em coming! :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:20 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Loved the title of this chapter. I didn't really like how you did the ballet terms, having them at the end like that. I think that it took away from the chapter by having to scroll back and forth. Maybe you could work in more description of the movement into the writing or have the terms at the end of the section. That being said, I think that it is good that Buffy has something that she is committed to and passionate about. And I thought that the conversation between Buffy and Spike went much better this time. I know that I'm going to love this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

good update

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Could that man be any sexier....god my womens rights sisters are ready to stone me but *yummy* take charge Spike...sign me up I say and make it quick...love the story and really love the fast updates...keep going I cant wait to read the rest...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Wonder what will happen when Dawn gets home. Hank is such a coward! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

I am hooked, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

wow1 this is good ,can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Ya know Buffy...It could be worse..Spike could be some crusty discusting old man..lol Definatley could be worse.

Sounds like Spike wants to treat her right..but does he realize that he is going to fall in love with her? I know Buffy won't see it coming from her end..

What's going to happen next? Hmm..Lots of things could happen..I am thinking that Riley and Angel could step in and complicate things a bit..JUst guessing..Oh..and Dawn is going to be causing some serious trouble for ole' Hank I am betting.. : D Great update..Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Wonderful chapter. I loved it!
I love this idea: Spike treating buffy like his queen.
Oh I just can't wait to read more.
Bloody Hell! You've made butterflies tickled my stomach when Buffy's dad left them alone. I was jumping almost. THANK YOU FOR MAKING SPIKE TALLER AND FULLER. I think he looks like a god. With those high-cheek-bones and sensual lips not to mention his Ice-clear-blue eyes and his messy Plantinum Blonde hair. I just imagine him as my god! lol. Update soon. Great job

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Juicy start and interesting beginings I hope you add more . Your writing style has flare and I really wanna see where this story goes. :)

4 stars

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Do you dance ballet? You seem to be quite comfortable with it in the plot's context.

I think this is an amazing story, even if Spike's a bit of a dickhead. He's always fun that way, right???

spuf

Author's Response: I use to dance ballet until I had to stop due to medical problems I always wish I can start again but it would be hard. I'm very glad you like it. And trust me Spike only get worse.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

love this story.....

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Awesome!! You rock!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Interesting so far.

Not that I know a lot about ballet but I seem to recall that it's for short people. Just like modeling is for tall people.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Don't understand ballet....seems like a way to torture your poor feet ;)

Hmm hope you don't make Spike all remorsfull and shit as the story goes on, I would like a more "Godfather" feeling to it. I would imagine it to be very hard to quit such a business as Spike is in.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Great development so far and I would love to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

OK, WOW!!!! I really am hoping for an update soon, as this really has my blood pumping. It promises to be a very seductive story, and I am enjoying it so far, and thanks

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:57 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Wow, awesome story you've got here. I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens when she finally goes with Spike.

~Diana

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