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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: Coffee and followers

Nice to know that Spike is making arrangements for Buffy's arrival. I wonder since Spike is tailing Buffy whether or not he would consider putting a tracking device or getting the signal to a tracking device to her vehicle and/or cell phone. (Been watching too much T.V.) Liked the chapter, more please!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Coffee and followers

The plot thickens...cant wait for Buffy to move in...I hope Spike lets up on her a bit and allows her to find her way...mind you Spike is not known for his patience, god love him!!...keep updating and I will keep reviewing:)

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Little White Lies to Keep the Dark Truth Hidden

Oh this just keeps getting better and better...I am now going to read chapter 6...keep up the fabulous updating:)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 01:47 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Spike takes care of business fast and is making Buffy his own personal business. In a way despite the business agreement where Buffy is forced to be Spike's woman, I like that fact that he is dealing with Buffy directly to come to terms with her. Am glad that Dawn and Lorne are protective of Buffy . Can't wait to see how Buffy deals with her moving into Spike's estate and how she deals with her new surroundings. Good chapter!

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 01:10 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

I enjoyed the ballet references although persons with no interest in it may be lost in the details. I found it a bit at odds that all of Buffy's requests and those made on her behalf (kept well, no other women, will get married afterward?) were 'obeyed' by Spike except for the obvious. If the final intent is true and they will be married, why the need to have her on as a mistress? Why not just get the two hitched?

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

O yeah one kiss never hurt ,Yeah right.!"

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

love love LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant waite for more please put the nexy chapter up!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

i love this story. i took ballet from the time i was 4 till i was 19. even went to a performing arts school for junior high and high school. i am very impressed with your use of correct terms.. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

The man is hot, being a prick only makes us want him more, especially when eventually Buffy will break down his defenses, we know he can win her sexually, after all "no body does it better", but the real quest is how she changes the monster in him. Great story, I am loving it, please, I repeat PLEASE update soon. Oh and thanks

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Please, keep updating! I love how this story is starting! I'm dying for another chapter of our favorite couple!! I'm really excited to see how you're going to depict the progression of their relationship and how their love will blossom from their awkward beginning.

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

lovelovelove it! keep with the updates!!

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Woooh, exciting! Lovely fic :D

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 06:48 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

One point, le petit is male. If you want Lorne to call Buffy 'the small', it'd best be 'la petite', ^_^ Otherwise, excellent chapter. I'm like the "consideration" Spike is showing.

Author's Response: Thank you...no wonder I'm failing my French course.

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:11 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Buffy should not be falling for him, they should first be enemies ! Or at least thats what I think but hey its your story ; )

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:02 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

You're welcome, sweetie! *blushes* It's been a pleasure so far working with you. :) And guess what? I learnt new ballet terms! Cool! :D

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:57 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Hey, great story, loving it and the frequent updates! Keep 'em coming! :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 01:20 am Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Loved the title of this chapter. I didn't really like how you did the ballet terms, having them at the end like that. I think that it took away from the chapter by having to scroll back and forth. Maybe you could work in more description of the movement into the writing or have the terms at the end of the section. That being said, I think that it is good that Buffy has something that she is committed to and passionate about. And I thought that the conversation between Buffy and Spike went much better this time. I know that I'm going to love this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

good update

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Could that man be any sexier....god my womens rights sisters are ready to stone me but *yummy* take charge Spike...sign me up I say and make it quick...love the story and really love the fast updates...keep going I cant wait to read the rest...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Wonder what will happen when Dawn gets home. Hank is such a coward! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

I am hooked, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

wow1 this is good ,can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Ya know Buffy...It could be worse..Spike could be some crusty discusting old man..lol Definatley could be worse.

Sounds like Spike wants to treat her right..but does he realize that he is going to fall in love with her? I know Buffy won't see it coming from her end..

What's going to happen next? Hmm..Lots of things could happen..I am thinking that Riley and Angel could step in and complicate things a bit..JUst guessing..Oh..and Dawn is going to be causing some serious trouble for ole' Hank I am betting.. : D Great update..Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Wonderful chapter. I loved it!
I love this idea: Spike treating buffy like his queen.
Oh I just can't wait to read more.
Bloody Hell! You've made butterflies tickled my stomach when Buffy's dad left them alone. I was jumping almost. THANK YOU FOR MAKING SPIKE TALLER AND FULLER. I think he looks like a god. With those high-cheek-bones and sensual lips not to mention his Ice-clear-blue eyes and his messy Plantinum Blonde hair. I just imagine him as my god! lol. Update soon. Great job

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Juicy start and interesting beginings I hope you add more . Your writing style has flare and I really wanna see where this story goes. :)

4 stars

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