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Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: No Harm Ever Came From a Kiss

Do you dance ballet? You seem to be quite comfortable with it in the plot's context.

I think this is an amazing story, even if Spike's a bit of a dickhead. He's always fun that way, right???

spuf

Author's Response: I use to dance ballet until I had to stop due to medical problems I always wish I can start again but it would be hard. I'm very glad you like it. And trust me Spike only get worse.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

love this story.....

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Awesome!! You rock!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Interesting so far.

Not that I know a lot about ballet but I seem to recall that it's for short people. Just like modeling is for tall people.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Don't understand ballet....seems like a way to torture your poor feet ;)

Hmm hope you don't make Spike all remorsfull and shit as the story goes on, I would like a more "Godfather" feeling to it. I would imagine it to be very hard to quit such a business as Spike is in.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Great development so far and I would love to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

OK, WOW!!!! I really am hoping for an update soon, as this really has my blood pumping. It promises to be a very seductive story, and I am enjoying it so far, and thanks

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:57 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Wow, awesome story you've got here. I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens when she finally goes with Spike.

~Diana

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 11:50 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

This is really a fantastic story! You have managed to create a situation where there really is no plausible way out of this mess for her. I feel so much empathy for Buffy..but at the same time, I am excited to see what is going to happen between her and Spike. Looking forward to the next update!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:26 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:08 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

I love this story realy *really *much! please update soon, can't wait the next chapter!:D

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:06 am Title: The Meetings

I love this story realy *really *much! please update soon, can't wait the next chapter!:D

Reviewer: Spuffygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 09:12 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

More this story rocks!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 08:22 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Well an't that a pile of crap.So buffy has to go to Spike,as his Misstress.So in short a war between the Gang bosses can be stopped..Well moving on----Next.Update soon,this is shaping up to be,Mmmmm.

Reviewer: Sarie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 05:31 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

OMG amazing chapter! Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen when Buffy meets Spike again.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:49 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Oh. Oh oh oh oh oh. I've got to say, I loved the note. Will Spike continue to allow Elizabeth to dance?

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:51 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

i really loved her reaction, definitely what buffy would have done, minus a few kicks to the head! i really love the plot for your story and i can't wait to read more! please update soon. i can't wait to read when spike and buffy meet!!!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:36 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Very interesting plot. I don't think that I have ever seen something like this. Good start so far.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 01:46 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Really like this story and look forward to reading more. Spike has got himself an unwilling mistress and Buffy has sacrificed herself for the sake of her mother and sister. The next meeting between the two blondes will be interesting. Kinda like an arranged marriage, only this one is a prelude to one. Look forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 12:31 am Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Amazing chapter! ;) If only Buffy knew that Spike was gonna treat her like his queen, as you'd said, but I don't think she's going to believe him so easily at first either.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 11:57 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

OH GOD! You have to update, you have me chewing nails (mine)! I just hope this story has dark chapters. I just love dark chapters, even, if they make me cry. They make the story more interesting and at the end , in most stories, the bad guys or bosses, feel bad for what they've done. I just love those types of stories. You have to make Buffy a tough girl. Like Spike said, she's a challenge. But she has to have some weak points, too. Everyone does. I think that he wants to break Buffy's spirt and when he does what's going to happen to her and him? what is he going to do about it? I think, I'm not sure. Is drusilla in this story? I hope so, she makes stories more fun... more interesting. She brings the monster in Buffy, I think?! I just can't wait for Buffy to meet with Spike. How tall is Spike anyways? Make him tall, for once, please! with cherry on top! Harmony should be in this story, too, Even though I hate Dru and Harm. like I said it before they make the story more challenging. Good luck.

Author's Response: Your comment made me happy so much because never before has anyone asked so many questions. Now I'm going to answer them as much as I can without spoiling anything. Buffy will be a a challenge for Spike and there is going to be a darker Spike later in chapters...I;ve never written him as a dark character so I'll definately try my best. In my other story its more past dark and even when I was writing it I cried. Drusilla is in this story but as Spike's sister, thats the only spoiler kind of thing im giving and yes I will probably portray Spike as much taller because I hate when others portray him shorter than Angel, it bugs me too. I'm glad you like and I'll try and make sure you and the rest of the readers like it. Thank you.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: In the End You Do it to Protect Those You Love

Poor Buffy...but not for long I hope...I mean lets face it people there are worse things in life than having to sleep with Spike...sign me up now

Author's Response: Hell if I find out where those sign ups are I would jump at it too. Spuffy sex probably won't happen immediately after she becomes his mistress for a few reasons but things will definately heat up next chapter...I better stop before I give away too much.

Reviewer: Janelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: The Meetings

Love this story, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Ebontier Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: The Meetings

You know...I'm put off by your description. You say that Spike needs to 'tame' Buffy. I find that offensive that her independence and failure to fit into the mold of the perfect wife/mistress means she needs to be 'tamed' or somehow trained to exercise appropriate behavior...

Author's Response: I am sorry that my story/descriptioon offended you in anyway. The only angle that I'm going at is because of Buffy's want to be independent she's not going to fit with the being agreeable to what Spike what ever wants of her. Throughout the story she's going to fight with him because he's trying to sadly tame her so she'll be able to ease into his lifestyle more easily. Though I'm trying not to give away the story too much but Spike will find he likes the Buffy he fell for the first time he met her rather than his tamed version of her. Again I'm very sorry that my description of how he wants her is offensive and I hope that I what I just said kind of made it better. Spuffy_obsessed P.S. Thank you very much for your opinion.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I think I'm starting to slowly but surely fall in love with your story. ;:) I still stand by my comment earlier about a beta but otherwise I love the story. :) It's amazing! Oh I'm gonna enjoy the action when you get to them soon.

Hope to hear from you soon!

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