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Reviewer: michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:40 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Excellent chapter!
I can't wait to read more!
Updata soon! (",)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:09 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I really like your story but I do have to say this: You need a beta or you need to check your story yourself. I hope this doesn't offend you, it's only meant as constructive critisism. You forget words quite often. You also use words like -your- when you want to say -you're- (another ex.: their when it should be they are). If you look your story over, you can rid a lot of these mistakes.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 10:14 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I like the ballet dancing angle! Can't wait for Spike to find out.
I'm always up for a good mafia story too...
I hope you update often.
spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:42 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Love how Buffy is already daydreaming about Spike! Great chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:55 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I love that Buffy is a ballet dancer! Ballet dancers are so graceful, and beautiful..They all seem to have the inate tranquility.. I can see a character like Spike in this story being even MORE taken when he sees her dance. I imagine that Spike will fall for Buffy very quickly. At least I hope he does.. Loving this story..keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:48 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Great chapter. I actually feel sorry for Hank (just a little)

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:45 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

great

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:33 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

It was fun to meet Willow. I really want to know how Buffy will react when her father tells her. I hope to meet Dawn and Joyce soon.

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:33 am Title: The Meetings

cue dramatic music LOL

Good first chapter, cant wait for more

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:46 am Title: The Meetings

i really hope that buffy can kick some ass in this story? please? i am loving your first chapter, especially reading about buffy's reaction to the whole situation.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: The Meetings

Well that was a start!"Mmmm we shall see.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: The Meetings

good so far

Reviewer: PK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: The Meetings

ooooo, sweet start, im gonna enjoy this ride. Great work, your becoming one of my favorite authors to read.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: The Meetings

I loved it. I can't wait to read more, as the story develop.
HA! GO Buffy. I'm glad she didn't fall for Spike's charms. Men are to damn arrogant., They think they can get anything just by snapping their fingers. I'm glad she's not an easy girl, like in most of the other stories i've read. Keep the good work up. update soon!

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: The Meetings

more updates! this story is really good, and you are an amazing writeer. i can tell you take time to think out the smaller details. i love the bad-boy persona spike has too..its really hot!!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: The Meetings

First chapter was great! Spike seems like someone who always gets what he wants. I wonder how easy it will be to talk Hank into this arrangement.. I would think that out of respect Spike would just about have to promise an engagment to make something like that happen. To Mafia..Family means everything..* don't ya watch Soprano? * lol Just kidding : D I'll be watching for any updates !

Reviewer: jazz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: The Meetings

More! More!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 12:38 pm Title: The Meetings

Love this fic already! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 12:07 pm Title: The Meetings

Great story so far. I would really like to read more.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 11:10 am Title: The Meetings

Very intriguing start, it sounds like a very good story. Please continue! Just one thing though, you might want to look into getting a beta... just a few spelling mistakes here and there, nothing big. :)

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:37 am Title: The Meetings

I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 07:56 am Title: The Meetings

Great start I really like this story...gotta love a bad boy Spike...keep going:)

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