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Reviewer: halfpastdead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Jolly Holiday

brill consept love it but you gotta update im gonna go nuts if i dont find out whts gonna happen plz plz plz plz with spike on top?

Author's Response: Sorry! I'm back now, so I should be updating every week again. I'm glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: xtc_anjel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Jolly Holiday

glad to see that you're still updating,dying to find out what happens to spike and meret, and what teh mirror does!

Author's Response: I've been out of town and uber-busy with school stuff, but I should be all settled again now. Sorry about that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Jolly Holiday

Ack! Spike, when the insightful witch tells you to take Buffy, take Buffy! I know, I know it would have defeated the point.

Good action sequence. Now we just have to hope zombies don't know the best ways to kill a vampire.

Author's Response: Yeah, there's a definite brain and heart disconnect in this chapter. I'm so glad you like the fight scene. Those tend to be some of my favorite chapters to write! Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 09:15 am Title: Jolly Holiday

The action in the cave was well choreographed and vividly written. The multitude of zombies was frightening, and I got a real sense of panic in the scene even after Spike's amusing realization about biting them. I'm looking forward to how you extricate Spike and Meret. I hope Tara's warning about Spike rushing off without Buffy wasn't foreshadowing...

Author's Response: Yum, zombie flesh... ;-) I love writing fight scenes, so it's really nice when you guys say you like reading them. Thank you!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 09:03 am Title: Jolly Holiday

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 08:59 am Title: Loose Ends

So, grabbing that jar has finally had consequences. How long will it be before anyone but Meret catches on? This was another tight, well written chapter. Anya was especially funny and sharp.

Author's Response: Anya is so much fun to write! I promise I won't stretch it out to farcical levels (I hope), but I can't promise that the others will clue in immidiately. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 08:51 am Title: Likeminded

Excellent Spike characterization in this chapter. You captured his emotional restlessness well. Barging in on Dawn at 2 AM with a plan and concert tickets was in character, and the entire chapter was detailed and entertaining.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 07:14 am Title: Jolly Holiday

R&R yesterday.. loved it, even with the cliffhanger :)

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks!

Reviewer: Helen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 02:31 pm Title: Loose Ends

Ooh exciting. Giles is up to something, I'd guess the nastiness from the jar... I really love Meret :) Wonder what the mirror does? Great writing, am enjoying the sequel enormously!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm afraid that I'm going to drag out a couple of those threads for a while. ;-)

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 06:23 pm Title: Loose Ends

Uh oh. I don't trust this Giles. I hope Meret gets over her fright and spills soon.

...Was Ethan's Eyghon tattoo on his wrist?

Author's Response: I'm sure it's still there, under the bandages. Maybe. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: Loose Ends

Well you tried it and when it works the other way around better for you: Then write the whole story and post it after completing it :) ~ Huh? What's the what with Meret? What did Giles do that upset her? Mmm Giles doesn't know... But maybe it has to do with the box. Vianne's Mirror? Anya knows more... Well looking forward to read what Spike's running away will bring him.. and what has Merit so in fear. :)

Author's Response: Writing it all before I post means that if I paint myself into an inadvertant corner, I can go back and fix it. This is kind of like working with no net, but I also know I stress out about it too much. Oh well. Compromise! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 09:35 am Title: Loose Ends

great chapter. Spike should have paid more attention to the way Giles was acting, that's gonna come back to bite him.

Author's Response: I plead the fifth on the subject of that speculation. :-D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Leroy Jenkins Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: Likeminded

Um, so the filing system is either an ingenious entertainment or the bubbly residue of an author's mind too preocurpied with the fictional world. Either way: Good job!

Author's Response: I can neither confirm or deny the above accusations. ;-) Hey, it seemed amusing at the time! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2006 - 12:49 pm Title: Likeminded

Sorry to hear that you had a writer's block and was struggling.. Spike did it too (struggling for what to do) but it seems as if he found a solution for him: Something to kill, a good fight :) Loved the part with Dawn, was too funny :) Looking forward to the next part :)

Author's Response: I think it's just this section of the story. I know what I want to happen, but ordering the events in a manner that makes sense and doesn't make me want to heave is being a pain. Bleh. Maybe I need a good fight too. ;-) Thanks for the review!

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Date: 06/14/2006 - 02:53 am Title: Likeminded

Oh dear, Spike on a rampage, The guards wont know what hit them.

Author's Response: Best way I can think of to blow off some steam. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 09:52 am Title: Likeminded

great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 08:59 am Title: Likeminded

Enjoyed the update.



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Reviewer: xtc_anjel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 08:57 am Title: Boiling Point

Hey, this is a great story! I hope you are still updating, looking forward to the next chapter =)

Author's Response: I am, but writer's block is playing havoc with my brain at the moment. I promise more will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Boiling Point

Buffy's flirtatious behavior was amusing, but Spike's anger was understandable. The idea of everyone having access to his emotions and memories is appalling. I like that he feels remorse, but Meret shouldn't be over sharing. That little Buffy fantasy was embarrassing. Another entertaining chapter, I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm trying to make Meret's connection both a blessing and a curse, so I'm glad you're liking it. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Boiling Point

Hee! That last line was hilarious! Loved the chapter, loved the dynamic between Xander and Spike, it was nice to see them kind of bonding. Poor Spikey, all confused over the guilt he's been feeling. Hope Meret forgives him soon enough. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Spike's version of male bonding as swindling Xander was too good to pass up. Glad you're liking it. Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 05:09 pm Title: Boiling Point

Oh my, baaaaaaaaaaaaad Buffy, distracting Spike *gg* And Meret is playing this game too *grins*. But Buffy was included. Wow.. and Spike exploded. He was driven to far, huh? Loved it :) And he was able to let some steam off and yet earned some money for Dawn ;-)

Author's Response: Yup, I am slowly but surely driving the poor vamp mad. By the end of the story he'll be gibbering worse than Drusilla. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Boiling Point

Enjoying the update.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: Debriefing

great story. i loved in league with serpents and i love this. i adore Meret. update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will, as long as I can convince the muse to cooperate.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 10:56 am Title: Debriefing

darn i love that Meret.... love the update and waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 10:33 am Title: Debriefing

Sineya accepting Spike's entree into Slayer dreams is an interesting twist. Buffy's dream was vivid, and I enjoyed Spike's mental admonition at her lack of real detail. Why is Meret so amused at all the goings on, what does she know about what's to come? I'm looking forward to learning her role in this mythology. This was another entertaining, well paced chapter.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the pacing. I was worried I was covering the same ground too much with Spike's report on the dream. Thanks!

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