

Date: 04/16/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
Oh this story is very intriguing. More!

Date: 04/16/2006 - 08:45 am Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
This story's economy of detail and unfamiliar scenario present an early sense of intrigue. Yet, even so early, with no explanation about her 'illness' (?) and his overpowering actions and words, still, there is that definitive promise: Spuffy.

Date: 04/16/2006 - 03:51 am Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
I LOVE IT! Defrinitely want to find out why he knows everything about her and what exactly she is dying from! please, i really hope it won't be in pov the whole story, that bugs me? if it is, i don't care, I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!

Date: 04/15/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
good update

Date: 04/15/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
sounds very interesting. can't wait for more. please post soon. great start.

Date: 04/15/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Prologue & Mystery Man
Mysterious start too. I'm not sure who the man was.. *reads on* Spike was it. And he wants Buffy? I wonder why... so he knows everything about her? ~ Love the begin of this story :)