

Date: 05/25/2006 - 08:18 am Title: Sixth
Sigh.
That was just -
FINALLY. Took her long enough. And I wish the show had been like this.

Date: 05/23/2006 - 03:33 am Title: Sixth
I like your version better.

Date: 05/21/2006 - 07:15 am Title: Sixth
Awe :) Loved the ending with both of them happy again.

Date: 05/21/2006 - 06:52 am Title: Fifth
Loved the description of both of them going through the motions... hopefully Spike will believe her.

Date: 05/21/2006 - 06:45 am Title: Fourth
I thought Buffy wouldn't be able to tell Spike what she felt. I'm glad she did. But she knew now what would happened if she hadn't.

Date: 05/21/2006 - 06:25 am Title: Third
Oh.. Buffy is so hurt. She isn't able to tell what she feels, she would rather let Spike go again. Good that Spike still was there when she fainted. I fear he would have gone for good now. But still Buffy didn't talk, just asked him to sit with her *sigh*

Date: 05/21/2006 - 06:17 am Title: Second
How is this saying.. You only now how much something means to you when you've lost it (something like that). Buffy didn't take it good and now Dawn decided to do something about: She wrote Spike and he came. Because Spike hoped again and yet he isn't sure if he'll go without seeing Buffy again. But now it's too late: Buffy has noticed Spike.

Date: 05/21/2006 - 05:34 am Title: First
What a sad begin... that was the slow goodbye I think. (And I cheated: I had to check how it ended before I read on.. because it was so sad.)

Date: 05/15/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Sixth
go dawn. see, little sisters are so smart cuz they see a piece of their older sibling that no one else ever sees. yes, dawn need a big slice of happy cake.

Date: 05/04/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: Sixth
i love this story.

Date: 05/02/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Sixth
I love this story so much, its one of the best ever. Beautifully written. Has me blubbering halfway through it too

Date: 05/02/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Sixth
oookay.... i'm happy now! :D
that was really good! of course, i really hoped for something like that to happen in the show... what u wrote is quite believable (given buffy bitchness... lol)... i mean, she let him suffer till the end but... in the end... he came to her senses!
great work!

Date: 05/02/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Fifth
no, of course she couldn't! could she? please, tell me she couldn't!
well, i know i've to read the next chap.... lol

Date: 05/02/2006 - 11:56 am Title: Fourth
oh boy! she told him!
...well... now i'm slightly afraid of the next 2 chapters.... not denial girl again, please!! lol

Date: 05/02/2006 - 11:43 am Title: Third
she won't shatter his heart again, will she?
it seems that unconscious buffy knows what she needs and wants...

Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Sixth
Great story pet, we really enjoyed it!

Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:27 am Title: Second
wow, that's better! lol
i loved how u described buffy's feelings after he went away....

Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:14 am Title: First
sooo sad!
please do tell me there's the happy ending? i'm gonna check that now! :D

Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Sixth
Great story! I love a strong Spike who doesn't want to be ripped apart anymore and forces Buffy to make a decision.
One thing: Last chapter, the word I think you meant to use is "ceasing" and not "seizing" in the line "Everything else seizing to exist except for that other."
Author's Response: thanks for the heads up. have edited. bad word. BAD. :)

Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Sixth
Very sweet. Good job. I'm glad Buffy finally got some sense knocked into her!!!!!!!!!!!