Reviews For His Little Wife
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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Dinner

Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Dinner

loved it. great job. spike is so sweet in this. angel is still a big boob and hopefully he doesn't interrupt the life that buffy has created for herself and katie. i know he's her husband and all (and she will have to talk to him about where they stand) but angel is a boob. I know i said that but it's true. lol. great job. post soon.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Dinner

Like the story. You don't have to get them to hop in bed right away. We know they'll get there eventually. They need to build up a relationship first and she still has to decide what she should do about Angel..She needs to talk to someone about what's been happening between Angel and her. This is a very good plot. Don't be rushed to do anything. There's so much potential in this story.

Reviewer: spike's belle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Interaction

more UST please. Like Buffy seeing a naked spike or something.....

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Interaction

Great chapter! Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 07:26 am Title: Interaction

Very good! Please, more! You´ve got to have a look at your narration time, though, you´re mixing up past and presence sometimes, where it doesn´t fit.

Reviewer: SpikeLover213 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 03:56 pm Title: Angel

MORE! I WANT MOOORE!

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Date: 05/14/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: Sunnydale

Great chapter!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Sunnydale

Intriguing beginning. At this point, despite how abhorrent Angel's actions were, it seems as if he feels some very real remorse for them. If he is suffering from PTSD (as mentioned in the summary) and he and Buffy truly felt love for each other before his difficulties became apparent then I don't know if you'll be able to create a scenario where love can grow between Buffy and Spike without making her seem like a trollop. I'll be interested in watching you develop this though. More soon please.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Sunnydale

love this story. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Im_Bloody_English Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: Sunnydale

Wonderful start, I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll go with this, update soon please.

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Sunnydale

Great start, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Sunnydale

glad that spike was introduced so soon. loved the interaction. please post soon. i loved it.

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Date: 05/12/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part

wow. this is different. i love it. great job. please post soon.

Reviewer: Suzanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2006 - 06:19 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part

Cool start, looks like this may be intriguing. Just a note though, you have a few typos where you are confusing "where" and "were" for example,

It had been enough, they where in love and nobody looking at the two of them then could ever have guessed that this would be their fate.

and

Too many memories where between those walls and she hated that a few actions could change all that, their little family was splitting and she is unsure how to fix it, if that is even possible.

I'm not trying to be hurtful but since this is your first Spuffy fic I just want to make you aware that this detracts from your story, especially since the plot has gotten off to such a promising start. I'd hate to see it plagued by typos. I look forward to what you have in store for us.


Author's Response: Please, if you see it, pull me up. I stopped writing 3 years ago and this is my first time back :) I would much prefer you tell me problems, so that I can sort them out.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:32 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks. This is my first time writing Spuffy and I'm a little nervous! Hope you like the second one too! Nikki

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