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Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

i'm lovin ur story it's great!!! i love how spike gave Dru and Harmony the brush off for Buffy that was great!!
the end of this chap was great !! lol xander was really funny!! hope u update a new chap soon !! can't wait for more!!!!!!

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

really lovin it so far!!! great!!! can;t wait 4 more so hope u up date soon!!! please!!!! lol

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

LOL AWW !!!! i love xander hes so funny and im so happy that spikes not interested in anyone but buffy. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that spike and buffy get together soon and that harmony, dru or warren doesnt try to ruin it. also i hope that xander and anya get together i think that would be so cute. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens. thanx

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for creating a story that is not afraid to be Spuffy, and is a little off cannon with the characters interaction!! Now..you do seem to have Warren, Wesley, Anya and Tara more in character..BUT ..........

.I just LOVE the fact that Spike is not impressed with Drusilla and Harmony. I read alot of stories where Spike is "enthralled" with Dru...and I enjoy them and know that it's more in cannon....but it is REALLY nice to see a story where Spike does not have some deep attraction to her! Fresh breath of air..I am loving this story!~

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Tara/Xander exchange was very sweet. Also, i like that Buffy played the game- that was way cool. Thanks for a good update!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Horsey face Harmony, I love it! It describes her to a tee!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Great chapter! Hope Dru or Warren won't become a problem!

Reviewer: Aprillyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Love the story, look forward to more from you.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

never liked warren. never liked dru. loved the chapter though. great job. loved tha' spike wasn't movied one bit by dru's charms (tasteless charms! Ew!) anyway, please post soon. great job.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

I should read what I write and not only rely on the spell check, then I would see my own typos ;-) ~ On to the story: Hehe.. Buffy did indeed pay Spike back for his remark with one of her own :) Oh clever, Spike sent Dru and Harmony away very politely. I think he didn't like the way they acted towards Buffy. And Spike has really fallen for Buffy... he ignored Drusilla's attempt. ~ Loved the new chapter :)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Great chapter and I suspect that Dru and Warren are up to no good.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

i can see how tara can be good at that... and i'd like to be in xander place just now!!
i loved spike and buffy's interaction... i feared a bit of rejection from her, instead their light banter is just perfect. I hope that dru, harm and warren's evil plots will be dealt the same way, 'cos a little fluffy is needed sometimes! (and you're good at writing it!).
i will forgive you though, if u're going to describe long and painful deaths for them... lol

Reviewer: Lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

I love the story so far. Thanks!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

Now the personalities are kicking into gear...

Buffy! You little minx..."Energizer Bunny". You know his head's going to go all kinds of places with that remark.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

really love this story very interesting characters

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 3- The Energiser Bunny!

The plot is progressing nicely. LOL... I liked Spike's description of Harmony. I also liked how he dismissed the girls and completely ignored Dru's come on. I loved the Spike/Buffy interaction in this chapter, especially the way Spike reacted when he realized Buffy was checking him out. Great update!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2006 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 2- Service

Nice one, Spike. We wouldn't expect anything less.

Reviewer: Terra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

Great chapter, I loved the line where Spike considers sleeping on the carpet. And those table thingys sound so cool! And what a great way to set up an initially...frosty is the best word I can come up with, relationship.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

That's so awesome! I saw it coming, but that was hilarious! I laughed out loud- seriously. Also, Spike with Lilah... never thought about it. That had to be one evil couple. :-) Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

loved it. spike's in trouble now. lol. greatjob. please post soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

LOL... I loved the ending of the chapter. I can't wait to find out how Spike talks his way out of this. Wonderful update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

I think I'm already on the mailing list :) If not, you can me add for this one too but as I said I think I'm on and so far I didn't miss a chapter. ~ So thanks to Lilah and Xander our Spuffy pair met :) *gg* And Buffy did hear his remark. He would sooo be in trouble know wouldn't he be a customer :)

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

Hahahaha! That was great! Poor Spike! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 2- Service

What a first impression Spike just made! LOL LOL

I am sure that Buffy will pretend she didn't hear him and continue her job in the manner that she intended..but now she thinks Spike is a pig! Not going to make any future romantic advances easy for Spike.

Love the imagery of the hotel so far..*sigh* Makes me want to go on vacation NOW! : D

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