Reviews For Heartbreak Hotel
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Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1- Preparation

You can't end it like that. Please more.

Author's Response: More to come, never fear! So far, I've been super mused-up with this story, so the next chapter shouldn't be too far off. Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 02:49 am Title: Prologue

I like it :D

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: Prologue

Keep going. Souunds great.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Prologue

love it. great start. sorry you're going through writer's block with your other story. that sucks. i know exactly how that feels myself. anyway, can't wait for more of this. post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Prologue

I love the start :) I think it is worth to continue :) So? I hope you'll do it; I'm gonna read then.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Prologue

Interesting! :) I'm a sucker for stories that has Spike as a big star of some kind and Buffy a normal gal... ;D Keep going keep going!

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Prologue

I'd be interested in reading more.

Reviewer: kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Prologue

real good so far... looking forward to more to come!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Prologue

why did the romance start on that day? It sounds like they didn't even meet... unless that part is in the next chapter?

Reviewer: Weaverslayer1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Prologue

Great start. You have my attention. Can't wait to see how the story develops.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Prologue

wow this story kicks ass. i love it so far and i really cant wait to see how it progresses. i really cant wait to see wat happens next for her and read about wen spike comes, i hope its soon. please update as soon as u can, i cant wiat to read the next chapter and see wat happpens, thanx

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Prologue

The Whip? Very cute. Great start so far. Only one chapter so far and it is already promising. I will definitely be looking for more of this one while your other one is on hold.

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Prologue

I'd love to see this story continued! It seems very interesting. Please more soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Prologue

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Prologue

when i read the first lines i thought "oh no... now i know how it ends!" well... silly me! of course there will be a happy end!! it's spuffy, and, as you said, fluffy!! lol
it's the in between that matters... and you're doing great! i loved the interview... with a self confident buffy, a a great duo... angel and cordy are fantastic together!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 02:54 pm Title: Prologue

Got me hooked. Please continue, please.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: Prologue

Nice start...fun and fluffy.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:58 pm Title: Prologue

This looks like it could be really interesting! Looking foward to more!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Prologue

Great start! I really like the premise. Can't wait to read more. :D

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Prologue

Interesting. I'd like to see where the Spike element comes in. Will there be snarkiness? I hope so, I love Snarky Spike! Update soon, and hopefully there will be more Broken soon, too.

Author's Response: It depends on when my muse returns to me. I'm sorry for the pause in updates. As for this story, I'm glad you like the idea and thank you very much for your input ^^

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