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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: Thoughts on Dinner and Death

Love your dialogue, it's good. :-D ~ It's late again but I wanted to read. If the updates are slowly I will. If they are quicker I will fall behind, but I catch up eventual. ~ Everybody is on his place now.. Xander and Giles full of mistrust and William has to go. And Willow is helping. I hope Buffy will stick with Spike when it gets worse. ~ Till next time.

Author's Response: Hey Cordykitten :) I'm so glad you're on here. I intend to post slowly. This story has about 35 chapters, and then... there's a sequel! And a sequel to the sequel. It'll take a while. But I hope you continue to read & enjoy. Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. I loooove it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:37 pm Title: Religious Experience, with Donuts

Okay, Willow doesn't seem to be against Spike being there, human. Giles though.. is not very happy. But Andrew it *gg*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Unwelcome

Did I think Xander and Giles would be glad to have Spike back? *thinks* No, not really. What a nightmare.. Caterpillars following Buffy? And again at the lake. Then the past and there is little William, needing help. Mmm Willow too? (Not trusting Spike)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Coming Home

Spike isn't really 'there' yet. Becoming human seems to have him in a bit of shock. Oh, like old times (Randy) Giles' clothes. At last Dawn is very happy to have Spike back too. Wonder how the other will take it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Fruitless

The breakfast was fun. Indeed everybody seemed to be verrrry busy. The park seems to be like a magnet for Buffy. She's back there. Oh, as is Spike, human now.. and all groceries are forgotten. Spike is the first priority.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Wishes

Back to Buffy in London. She doesn't know what happened. I think if she knew she would regret not to have called Spike. So Buffy is (can I say?) a bit lonely even if she is with her friends? ~ And now she made the wish :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: City of Angels

Ah, the big fight.. Angel was a fool to try to take the Black Thorne out without help (except his few friends). And Spike died too (I know there is a sequel so I'm calm). ;)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Thoughts on Dinner and Death

Those bastards!! Slimy, no good, prejudicial, close-minded, can't see past their noses MEN!!

Damn good on Buffy to stick up for what she wants this time. And maybe it's time to move out on her own again. Take Dawn and William, and LIVE.

Loved Spike's story to Andrew. Also really liking Andrew in this. He's not exxagerrated to the point of annoying, like often happens.


Author's Response: Thanks again, Kim. I'm particularly fond of Andrew. Like Wesley did when he joined Team Angel, I'm hoping that Andrew's maturing... in his own way.

Reviewer: ane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 12:51 pm Title: Religious Experience, with Donuts

Just read all 7 chapters and really liked it. Although I did think Buffy was a bit out of order, not contacting Spike once she knew he was alive and had called on her. She still expects him to do all the running. I hope she's not gonna fall back into the old pattern of letting the Scoobs dictate her relationships.

Author's Response: I would have so contacted him. But Buffy... has issues :)

Reviewer: theslayer19 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 09:17 am Title: Unwelcome

This one is great. It figures those guys will always give Buffy a hard time when it somes to Spike!

I really likethat dream too. Very creepy!

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Date: 05/31/2006 - 09:14 am Title: Religious Experience, with Donuts

haha! I love this one! "We should have started you off with a twinkie or something.." LMAO!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 06:28 am Title: Coming Home

Spike Shanshued...definitely a shocking experience. Poor guy...not going to know what to do with himself as a human.

Author's Response: Well... not exactly Shanshued. Read on *wiggles eyebrows* Thanks so much for your feedback, Kim!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 06:26 am Title: London Flat

Ah, Giles...let her be who she wants, and who she wants to be with...

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 06:17 am Title: City of Angels

Intense chapter!!

Reviewer: Iworkerbee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 05:55 am Title: London Flat

What a cool story! I love the characterizations and plot so far. The dialogue is great too. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Coming Home

Great start to this story, definitely looking forward to subsequent updates.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Wishes

Great transition chapter, looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: City of Angels

Great writing, especially the imagery of Angel seeing just the dust before he disappeared into the sewers

Author's Response: Thank you, Opal. I seriously considered cutting that bit. Glad I didn't now :)

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: London Flat

I just started this little ficcie and noticed it certainly did not have enough reviews! So I intend on leaving a nice review for each chappie I read. .... great start to this fic!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: London Flat

It's too late to read all the chapters of this story or all the ones posted today, but I start with one today :) ~ I really have no time to read on but I wish I head. I like the start. :) They moved on, all together. Yet Buffy not exactly. She misses Spike... and she knows he's alive? But doesn't call. And Giles is disappointed because Buffy misses Spike? It's Buffy's life... ~ Looking forward to be able to read more :)

Author's Response: I disliked the way things were handled in the Angel S5 episode 'The Girl In Question'. I figured that if they couldn't contact Buffy, why should she contact them... Or, that would be how she felt about it.

Reviewer: theslayer19 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:07 am Title: Coming Home

This is brilliant! I can really feel the confusion and shock Spike is going through.

LMAO...Xander: "Why are you here? Why are you dressed like Giles? And more importantly, why are you here?"

So Xander!!!

Reviewer: theslayer19 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:04 am Title: Fruitless

Oh my goodness! That's all I can say. Oh, and this story is so enticing!!

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Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:02 am Title: Wishes

Oooo!!! I love the way you describe the atmosphere! I feel like I'm right there.

Brrr.

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Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:01 am Title: City of Angels

This one breaks my heart. But I know great things are to come!!!

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Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:00 am Title: London Flat

Great opening chapter! I love how all the characters are involved here. Wonderful scene!

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