

Date: 10/30/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Falling Deep
I just loved them together! What's going to happen next? Doesn't he still need money? Update soon please!
Author's Response: Aren't they adorable? I just loved writing these last couple happy chapters, and I'm glad you enjoyed it hon. Yes, he still needs the money, and as for what happens next...... al I can say is the angst will pick up after the next chapter. Sorry, no spoilers here hon. Thanks for the lovely review.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 05:48 am Title: Falling Deep
Delicious , just delicious , dear ! The perfect follow-up after the beginning of what looks like the most gorgeous , romantic , sexy evening they ever had.
Their return home under the rain was a lovely moment. And of course they're making love , truly , completely , and it's beautiful emotions that you're offering us.
I'm ready for a bit more angst to come , since i guess that the spuffy love will win in the end.
Thank you for another wonderful reading.
Author's Response: Awwwww, I'm blushing. I'm happy you enjoyed it, truly... couldn't have a romantic night without some intense loving. Ther serious stuff can wait till the next day. Yeah, despite the upcoming angst, it will be a most happy ending indeed. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Falling Deep
Very sweet and sexy. Loved the walking home in the rain. Loved that Buffy leveled him by using his given name. A nice chapter to read after a long weekend away with the in-laws. And I loved your author's note-- It's nice to know there are other thirty-something moms out there who think there is a serious squeel factor in all this stuff at times! ;)
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it hon, yeah, Buffy really did floor him on that one. *giggles*, as mature as I am, I'm not ashamed to admit there is most definetely a serious squeel factor when it comes to this stuff. Hey, its a tension breaker/escape for me. THanks for the lovely review hon.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Falling Deep
FANTASTIC! Buffy crying out William's name was PERFECT! Really pulled it all together to show how much they mean to each other even though they are still trying to "feel the waters" of their emotions for one another! Can't wait for more (even though I know there's angst ahead). They were so cute with each other after they got back to the house, both kinda walking on emotional eggshells. more please!
Author's Response: LOL, I couldn't resist her doing that. He had to be given a 'crumb'. Yup, they know they mean something to each other, but hey, still waaaaaaaay too early in the game to go all 'proclaimy' with the feelings. I'm happy to hear you're willing to get through the angst - cuz ya know when they make up it's gonna be hot. Thanks so much for the wonderful review hon.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Falling Deep
The rainstorm and the drying off at home were well described and set the stage for the erotic, romantic bedroom scene. You painted a vivid picture of the raging storm and the electricity coming and going. I'm looking forward to these two finally having a talk about their emotions and William's job as an escort.
Author's Response: Oh that is sooooooo good to hear. I agonized over creating that scene, trying to get enough, yet not too much, of the right amount of description of everything pulled together. Okay, I'm glad you liked the chapter hon, but I don't want you to be too disappointed about what doesn't get talked about the next day - especially since I adore your reviews and hope you stay the duration of the fic. WIthout offering too many spoilers, let's just say that this heavy revelation combined with new and fragile emotions, William's sudden decision to quit the biz and desire to not say a word, 'remain in the dark', until all is settled......... well, there's a lot of factors (also the time frame they have known each other is really not that long) that will come into play as to what they will and won't talk about. That being said, just trust me sweety, the upcoming angst is necessary for the development. Buffy is way too 'thinky-girl' right now. She needs another 'shove' so to speak. Thank you so much for the review sweety and I do hope you continue to enjoy, yes, even the angst.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Falling Deep
Yay! She used his name!!! His real name!! I love the happy chapters--and this one was especially excellent!!! :-)
Author's Response: Tee hee, yup, she got him there. Glad you liked the chapter hon, thanks so much for the great review.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: Falling Deep
Oh, this was so nice. I love reading it. You did a great job. And btw ... you´re muse is male?!?! *gg*
They are that great together, they really belong together, why do there has to be more angst???? Couldn´t you let it be this way?? No, I know, than we don´t need to read this any longer. But I´m happy to hear that the next one will be a happy one too. So I´m happy with this and when there is coming too much angst I have to read these ones and think of the better times they had together.
Hope it was understandable, if not ask me. *gg*
Have a wonderful day and I go to bed now. Smooooooooooooooch.
Caro
Author's Response: Oh yes, my muse is a male... he comes at the most unpredicted times and has his wicked way with me. Also, I have a 5'10" cardboard standup of him to in my living room, lol. Oh, I understand your feelings on the angst, I do. Just keep the good times in mind and know that making up can be just as much fun. If it gets to be too much for you, there's always the option to skip reading for awhile until things get better. I'll miss you but understand if that's the way you go. Just come back or my muse will cry. Thanks for the lovvely review hon, *hugs*.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Falling Deep
Alright! Chapter 19! Yay, had something good to read when I checked today!!
Love the story!
Keep 'em coming, can't get enough!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it hon. Hopefully I'll have 20 ready by the weekend, we shall see. Thanks for the review.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: Falling Deep
This is such a great story! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
Author's Response: THanks hon, I'll do my best, promise.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:22 pm Title: Falling Deep
Oh very sweet, indeed. I like that song as well. Seems they are both trying to say something without saying it. Torture.
It was a lovely evening of follow-up to their very romantic date. It all so wistful. Makes my heart sing and sad at the same time. You wrote their emotions so beautifully and managed to make even their insecurities to be sweet.
Just a lovely chapter. I can't wait for the next.
Cheers!
Nina
PS. I am catching up from being out of town, so forgive my cross posting, but the last chapter of LiL totally rawked my socks. Dude, you keep on with your bad self. That was HOT!!! *glee*
Author's Response: That's exactly it, trying to communicate without words and confessions. Tee hee, thanks, I'll keep rockin on then, can never have too much spuffy luvin in my opinion. THanks for the awesome review sweety.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Falling Deep
Yep, still have chills, LOL! You're very welcome for the help hon, always there for a fellow Spuffy author *At least one of us is able to get some damn writing done, GRRRRR......* . Like I told you the other night on the phone, this chappie is absolutely amamzing. You have taken all the raw emotions of Spike and Buffy and brought them to life keeping us drooling for more. I am anxiously awaiting to see what you have instore for aour fav couple and am always here to lend a helping hand when you need one. Kuddos!
Author's Response: Tee hee, echo?

Date: 10/29/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Falling Deep
Yep, still have chills, LOL! You're very welcome for the help hon, always there for a fellow Spuffy author *At least one of us is able to get some damn writing done, GRRRRR......* . Like I told you the other night on the phone, this chappie is absolutely amamzing. You have taken all the raw emotions of Spike and Buffy and brought them to life keeping us drooling for more. I am anxiously awaiting to see what you have instore for aour fav couple and am always here to lend a helping hand when you need one. Kuddos!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you sweety for all your help. We'll getcha writing... just gotta get the muse going. Glad your goosebumps responded to the chappy, lol. Thanks for the review hon, talk to you soon.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 10:04 am Title: Falling Deep
Hmm, weird reviewing at this site, but ST doesn't let us "anonymous types" reviewing at this point so had to come here for it... Well, what wouldn't I do to please your muse, he's so my favorite one EVER!!! So to the point of this already...
Awww!!! My heart was about to burst while reading this! Just so damn great, powerful, beautiful, heartfelt (I'm running out of appropriate adjectives to use here...) chapter! You just keep delivering amazing chapter after another! What really gets me all green with envy and struck with awe, is that you write as brilliant "serious feelings" stuff as you do "hot-hot-hot smut" stuff! I find that quite rare, because majority of the writers I've read, are better at the other. I just have to humbly raise my imaginary hat to you and wish to have another chapter of your fanfictiony-goodnes soon!
Oh, I'm so behind in reviewing Lessons In Love (read that too at the ST and couldn't review), but don't you worry dear muse, that will be my next stop ;)
-Katriina-
Author's Response: Hi there friend. Yeah, the mod at ST had to temporarily block anonymous reviews... someone (spammer) kept leaving reviews for chapter 5 of TE that were nothing more than babbling random (crude)words that were direct links to porn sites. They kept rolling in like every five minutes.... so after about 35 of them, the mod had to do something until she can figure out how to stop it.
But I am so glad you liked the chapter enough to take the time to stop over here and review. It really means a lot, to me and my muse. And of course I'm pleased that you're enjoying LOL and LIL as well. They're posted here at TSR as well.
I am blushing five shades of red here. I'm glad to hear that the efforts of my muse are paying off.... in the dept. of describing the emotions as well as the sex scenes. I do try to pour as much as possible into it to get the readers to feel what they feel. So thank you so much for the kind words and the lovely review, hugs and kisses hon.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 07:08 am Title: Falling Deep
Oh I love this story soooo much. Thank you for writing such a fab chapter. I love the way you write Spike/William. It just seems so spot on. More soon please.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks honey, you're so sweet. Glad you enjoy the William/Spike thoughts... he's still insecure, but his conviction and Buffy's action will defintetely help him to be more confident.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 06:16 am Title: Falling Deep
...wow. Just wow.
Btw just incase you're wondering, that was a VERY good kind of wow XD
Author's Response: Tee hee, I'm happy you liked the 'heat' and emotions, thanks so much for the review.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Falling Deep
Great chapter, as always. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you enjoyed.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:57 am Title: An Alternative
This is to 'not amused' who I hope comes back to see if the author has a response to this. First, I hope she doesn't. It's not worth her time. It's a great story and I vote she continues putting her efforts toward writing and not thinking of you. Second, TAKE A F*CKING PILL! It's a story!! Nuff said.
Author's Response: LMFAO... well, I guess I have a definite allie. Thanks sweety for defending me. You're 100% correct, it is just a story... you can check to see my response to her. She's entitled to her opinion, but in the end, sh'e the one who may potentially miss out. Oh well, I can't please everyone. I will obey my muse and of course continue writing it my way. Thanks again so much hon, it makes me feel better about about it. After all, this is my baby, my first story.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Breaking and Entering
i thought this was going to be a really great story... but you've lost me at this chapter - for all buffy knows spike is a homocidal rapist... she has every reason to believe she is about to be raped yet she finds herself kinda turned on? way to reinforce the 'she wanted it' defence...
Author's Response: Well, not to be rude, but if you'd taken the time to read all the way through to the current chapter, your opinion may be different. There's one thing to be understood here, there are many woman who fantasize about being 'taken' by a man. This is fiction, spuffy fiction. It's not to be taken seriously or literally. If I were going to include rape then I'd have issued a warning. The part you read that is upsetting is only a single 'thought' Buffy had... and that's where it ends. Sorry you're going to miss out on the story. I do hope you find another out there to your liking.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:41 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
I just love this chapter, you're right this was sooooo needed aawwwww! you honestly took me to that little scene picturing all those black and pepper heads and our beautiful couple amidst all of it! nice pic of our yummy spike and i really liked the little touches you had cant wait for the next chappy!
Author's Response: Thank you hon, hey, I guess I', a romantic at heart... the next chapter is up sweety, hope you enjoy.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Falling Deep
Oh I love that song. :) Heard it many years ago and still manage to produce goosebumps everytime I hear it. And this chapter - woohoo... drown me in spuffy lovin'. more, please. :)
Author's Response: Hi hon, glad you liked it... I guess I missed the boat when the song came out but oh yeah - it fit the chapter. Thanks so much for the great review sweety... who knows, I might squeeze in another quickie for them come morning, *giggles*.

Date: 10/28/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Falling Deep
absolutely loving it still
Author's Response: Glad to hear it hon, thanks for the review.

Date: 10/28/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Falling Deep
I'm so glad Buffy and Spike are sharing these romantic moments before things get rocky. I loved how Buffy kept asking Spike what he wanted, she was so considerate and loving and I really appreciated that. I continue to enjoy the music you include with story, the song fit the Spuffy lovin' perfectly. Wonderful chapter!
Congratulations on your wins!!!! :D
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the tender romantic moments... the muse feels it necessary they connect on a deep level before things get out of hand again. Buffy really wanted to be sure that it was William that wanted her and to see beyond Spike. Glad you liked the music. I thought that song was so sexy and that Dusty273 was right, it would be perfect for the fic... so naturally the muse went for a raw moment to include it. Thanks for the congrats hon and the lovely review.

Date: 10/28/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Falling Deep
Wonderful chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you hon, glad you liked it.

Date: 10/28/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Falling Deep
Wow, another great chapter, definatly looking forward 2 more.
But I know the road is going to start 2 get a bit bumpy after the next chapter but hey i'm already hooked.
(U can't get rid of me now ; )
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you're hooked hon, it'll be worth it in the end... happy endings all the way around. Yup, gotta have some more angst, it's still too early for the to get together. THanks for understanding and the wonderful review hon.

Date: 10/28/2006 - 08:54 pm Title: Falling Deep
loved it soooooo much. it was so sweet and....and just full of sweetness!!! lol. i can't say that i'm surprised about the fact that more angst lies ahead with this story. BRING IT ON!!!! i know that it'll all be worth it when the story ends (which i hope isn't anytime soon) great job. more please.
Author's Response: Hopefully not the fluffy type though, lol. Yeah, angst will help the story along, and no, it won't be ending anytime soon sweety. Thanks for the review.