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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Falling Deep

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And just thinking: If Spike (or William) owns his restaurant: Won't he be likely get notice by his former clients? If they go to the restaurant... ah well, that's nothing he can change. I wonder how Buffy will deal with it if it comes to that.

Author's Response: It has it's possibilities, but most of the business he got came from wealthy women of LA. Not to mention a chef rarely comes out of the kitchen.... so for those two reason plus the fictional aspect, I'll just say it's unlikely.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Loved the romance of this chapter. Think it was perfect to show Spike that she wants the man, not the image he puts on like a shield when he has to "work". Excellent writing.

Author's Response: Yup, that was her purpose too, to get past SPike and reach William, figure him out and where he stands when it comes to her. Thanks for the lovely review sweety.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Falling Deep

Absolutely love this chapter. You can feel the depth of their intimacy & emotions. Beautiful writing.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it hon, I wanted readers to know how deeply they feel about each other. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: Falling Deep

LOL I love SL, addicted to it *ggg*
Five awards? Congratulations! That needed screaming :)
And now the evening gets a wet end as it seems. :) Buffy's little kissing play? Seems like Spike is given the control to Buffy, seeing if she really wants to kiss him. (Oh boy, sure she does.) Good to see too that both Spike and William are seeing a future for them with Buffy. And Buffy? She is doing the right thing, asking Spike how far he wants to go. It binds him even more to her. (Good questions Buffy did raise when thinking. Will Spike tell her? We'll see. Will she be able to overlook his position? We'll have to wait to see I guess.
And Buffy telling him she hired him today for his company? It should show him what he means to her.
And loved his slip of tongue, almost saying "what Buffy means to him" or calling her "his". And another step: Buffy calling Spike 'William', the man, not the gigolo.
One more non angsty chapter? Good :) The angsty ones will come soon enough.

Author's Response: Yeah, he did hand over the control, mostl b/c he's in love with her, and doesn't want his job or duty to be involved when he's with her. Yeah, she did want his permission... mainly b/c she didn't want SPike... she wanted to know if William would want her. Yeah, those questions Buffy have are legitmate, as to her getting any answers or William offering any information... can't say yet, sorry. Yup, one more chapter before the drama commences hon. Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Falling Deep

that certainly shocked me but im glad she did it, you have an amazing talent for writing keep up the good work :]

Author's Response: Well, she wanted to get some truth from him, not Spike.... so the night was planned with that in mind. So glad you enjoyed it hon, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Falling Deep

Wonderful chapter and congratulations on the awards. They are rightly deserved.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks hon. I had to write this chapter somewhat fast to have it posted by saturday, little time for editing. I'll talk to soon sweety.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

gawd -sighs dreamily- that was very beautifully written

Author's Response: Thanks hon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Falling Deep

Oh my goooooooooosh! That was so sweet! And that SONG! I remember that song, and you're so right. It fits so perfectly. And the timing was spot on. Just wow. Really good chapter. Beautifully written.

Can't wait for more!! :) I'm looking forward to William's reaction to what she said... ya know, the next reaction after the one he just had. lol!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it hon... they needed these moments, this night. William's reaction, well.......... he's going to engage it carefully the next day, that's for sure. His feelings are new and therefore fragile. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

*Sighs dreamily*

Yeah, like I'm gonna sue you for making me wish that I had that.... *whines* maybe I will at that! lol!

Such a lovely chapter. I too love the songs of the 50's and 60's. My parents grew up in that era, so I learned to appreciate it from them.

Once again, lovely chapter. :)

Author's Response: *Giggles*, well, I figured a warning was necessary - especially if someone was at work. reading it Glad you liked the music, I find it very romantic myself. Thanks for the reivew sweety.

Reviewer: caegey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Falling Deep

This is definitely my favorite WIP I'm reading at the moment -- and I'm reading a lot!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Squeeeee, I love to hear that, it makes me and my muse jump for joy. Thanks so much for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Iza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: Falling Deep

Really lovely atmosphere, I could picture them just like in a romantic film (who doesn't like a stormy weather and the intimacy and comfort it creates once you get home ?). And it's so nice to have not only the writing and the imagination, but also the music ! Many thanks to you, you just made the perfect sensuous and dreamy ending to a hard working day... PLUS : big congratulations for all these awards and nominations, they are truly deserved !

Author's Response: LOL, that's what my muse had in mind too - one of those movies where a storm enhanced everything going on between them. I couldn't resist the song, it was too sexy not to have it in there... again thanks to Dusty273. I'm glad this chapter made you feel good after a hard day sweety. Thanks so much for the congrats and the beautiful review.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:25 pm Title: Falling Deep

Always makes me smile brighter, when I see updates from you.. And a good one too... Big thank you flowers-in-a-bunch (don't really wanna try my luck in spelling to the correct word for a selection of flowers.. Hope you know what I mean... lol)... to your muse and you, and looking forward to more :-)

Author's Response: Glad I could make you smile hon. ooooo, I love flowers, thank you. The muse always itches to get writing when he here's himself being mentioned. THanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Falling Deep

whew!!! very romantic and sexy!! I really want them to make it!! I can't wait to rerad more!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it hon.... you know they'll make it in the end, hey, it's spuffy. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: Anya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Falling Deep

wow, that's all I can say.
More soon please.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks sweety, I'll do my best to post asap.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Falling Deep

another great chapter. and as we al know theres
no smooth sailing for our fav couple

Author's Response: *Grins*, thanks sweety. Yeah, no smooth sailing. It's too early for them to go off in the sunset... but you know they will in the end.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: An Alternative

I am thouroughly enjoying not only the story but the beauty of the writing...more please

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you hon. I'll do my best to write more soon.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: Falling Deep

Yeah, we just know Buffy's going to get extra-thinky before too long...

Nice moment...I hope she doesn't hurt him in the days to come.

Author's Response: Doesn't she always? But it makes for good drama. Well, I can't say she won't hurt him, but it works both ways too. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: bobette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:43 pm Title: Falling Deep

Wow, without a doubt this chapter is the best i have ever read for being totally in touch with the ideas of a new love. the longing, hope, uncertainty from the characters was breathtakking to read. i also loved the atmosphere you created and over all i just love this fic

Author's Response: YAY, I 'm ecstatic you liked the raw emotions running through our couple's minds. New love is always like that isn't it? And of course the circumstances surrounding them makes for walking on eggshells, at least for now. Thank you very uch for the wonderful review sweety, glad you're enjoying the fic.

Reviewer: Cobweb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: Falling Deep

EEEEEEEEP! that was brilliant! brilliant I tell you, jesus woman you sure know how to keep your readers entertained, no wonder you've won so many awards for this!! Loved the song, loved the atmosphere you created in this chapter, all in all I just ADORE this fic *grins like a loon* more soon please :D

Author's Response: Tee hee, thank you my friend, so glad you liked it. Glad you liked the song and the feelings involved. I'll talk to you soon hon.

Reviewer: eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:25 pm Title: Falling Deep

Great chapter, it had everything, the romance, the mushy bits, hot moments, love moments, great, hope your muse keeps you busy

Author's Response: *Giggles*, glad you liked the combination - I didn't want it to be too uch of any one thing. Thank you so much for the lovely revew hon, and yes, I'm sure the muse will be most busy here shortly.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:21 pm Title: Falling Deep

*dreamy sigh* I loved the chapter, you alreay know that, and I loved reading it again. It was the perfect transition from Spike and Buffy to William and Buffy, the change from business (if it ever was that) to love was seamless, felt magical and real and deeply meaningful. Lovely chapter, now hurry up with the other, because I want more. ;)
hurs, Mari

Author's Response: LOL, girl you're too much. Thanks for all the help... oh, you know I'll be contacting you once 20 gets underway. Glad you liked the chapter - it was a 'touchy' one.

Reviewer: HELTERSKELTER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought you'd posted a new chapter.. I love this one, but- anti-climactic! hahahah...

Author's Response: I did hon - but I had to remove it momentarily due to problems.... it's back up now, sorry.

Reviewer: bobette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: Surprises

i just love your characters and the way you write, it brings a whole new depth to the story and one that i cant wait to read! i love how you have portrayed Spike and Buffy in this and YAY for bringing Lorne in!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks sweety, I'm glad you enjoy their personalities, especially Lorne's... he's such a dear. Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Rauwolfia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I finally got a chance to sit down and get caught up on this story. I have to say thank you for the sacrifices I'm sure you've made while writing this story. The biggest one being sacrifice of sleep no doubt, having to do some of it after the children are in bed, as you said in one of your notes or responses, now I can't remember exactly where.
We're the lucky recipients of all those creative juices that flow from that wonderfully creative mind of yours.
Anyway, I want you to know that I for one appreciate that, as this is one really terrific story. I was up almost one whole night getting caught up, (bad girl :-) and boy did I have some good stuff to read. You really do put a lot into what you write.
Thank you for gifting this story to us, it gives all of us something really good to look forward to. :-)


Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for all the kind words sweety. It's really nice to hear that you appreciate the efforts of the muse and I. Yes, sometimes I do lose sleep, but at the cost of being able to have readers such as yourself say that you truly enjoy what I've written makes it all worth it. Of course I feel bad making you stay up late to get caught up, but on the same note, I'm thrilled you found it captivating enough to read it all in one sitting. I think you just made my entire week sweety, really. THank you so much for the beautiful review. I do hope you enjoy ch. 19 once it's ready to post.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

ABSOLUTE PERFECTION !!!!

Along with Grey's Anatomy on Thurs nights and Jolynn's -- Beneath the Shadow's of Evil, this incredible work of yours makes my week !!!

I'm gonna email you later. Hugs and thanks ... you really are talented beyond the telling of it.

Author's Response: Hi hon, so glad you enjoyed it - it's my fav chappy so far. Thanks for the review sweety - I'll get to answering your email hopefully tonight. Hugs and kisses.

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