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Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 02:27 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Very sweet.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed... thanks hon.

Reviewer: Ekips Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 02:22 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Great Chapter. Now I`m going to sit in the garden with my husband - drinking a glas of whine :-)

Author's Response: Oooooh, I envy you. I can't wait till my hubby comes home for the holidays so we can do the same - although it will be in front of the xmas tree. Enjoy your afternoon and thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Spikes GaL Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 02:15 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Oh what a great story !!and a lovely chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you hon, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Nice..

Author's Response: Thanks sweety.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought it was excellent! I loved the songs tooo!! It was so romantic. Your story is truely addciting!

Author's Response: Tee hee, well I'm glad you're addicted to my story, it's a healthy addicition right? Glad you liked the romance, and I'm sure you'll enjoy 19 as well once I'm ready to post. Thanks for the review sweets, toddles.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 01:30 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Awwwwwwww. Shmoopy, shmoop, shmoop. Complete with cuddles and old people. This chapter was very sweet. It even reminded me of dancing with a boy I liked it high school; I held him as tight as I could as if I could make the memory last even longer. So sweet. I await to see how the evening of bliss plays out. Ahhhhh, William.

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, sticky sweet with sugar all over. It does kinda bring about old memories huh? Had a few like yours from high school myself. I do hope you enjoy the rest of their evening together, it will be full of spuffy luvin. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 01:19 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I've been checking all day and here it is at last. I am such a hopeless romantic - I loved it. Beautifully written chapter - thank you. You are right to have meaningful relationship they have to have more than they have had in previous chapters. Had a smile all over my face although from what you have written I'm not sure it's going to last!!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more. xxxx


Author's Response: Awwww, glad I could have you smiling and not to worry, the next chapter or two will be all well and good before things start to happen again. So glad you enjoyed the romance, I couldn't help myself, I felt they needed it. Thanks for such a lovely and wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Oh I really really liked it, sweet, mushy, romantic, can't get enough of it. Let them have a few chapters of mushy-romantic before the angst comes back. Please?

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I think at least one or two more chapters like this and then, unfortunetely its back to RL for them. So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: cinnamon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

wow, no wonder that was your favourite chapter to write! really great chapter and listening to the music at the same time totally rocked, it was all soooooooooo sweet - can't wait for the rest of the evening!

Author's Response: Tee hee, yeah it really is my favorite. Glad you listened to the music and enjoyed it... it will really help to set up the tone for the rest of their evening together. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:38 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I just loved their mushyness! Update soon please!

Author's Response: *giggles*, me too, what can I say. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Yay! Loved this chapter--I'm a sucker for the romance, can't get enough of it :-) It was so sweet, exactly what they needed--and the music blended in was a great touch! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hee hee, I think we all have a little romantic in us all, so I'm glad you enjoyed their time together. Yes, they most definetely needed this in order to move on. So happy you liked it and thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:15 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

good chapter. Romance is always good.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I felt they deserved this little break. Hope you enjoy 19 once it's up.

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought it was a lovely chapter, just the right amount of romance without it being 'ove the top'

Author's Response: Very cool, I had hoped to balance it as best as possible... no one likes too much syrup on their pancakes after all. Glad you enjoyed and thanks so very much for the great review.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Loved, loved, loved the chapter! It was so romantic and just what they needed to realize this is not just a passing attraction, but love in the making. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you hon, you are so sweet... you frip honey, hon *giggles*. Glad you enjoyed the chappy, and yup, they now understand this is more than physical attraction.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:54 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Wow... what a romantic romantic night *sighs blissfully* Actually I love the chapter you wrote, tney do need that connection, makes whatever they feel for each other more real. If anything it serves as the best catalyst for William to start working for what he wants, instead of being "Oh she'll never be mine..."

Overall, great chapter, I've enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: Wonderful, I'm ecstatic you enjoyed it. I agrfee, they need this time and connection to be made, especially for William's sake. It's time he convinced himself he is worthy and started to fight for what he wants. They may be small steps at first, but it will change quickly and for the better. Thanks for the awesome review hon, I always look for your review and your keen insight.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:52 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

OMG!!! You did an amazing job with this chapter! I loved all the extras you included, the Spike pic was droolworthy, the banner is lovely, and the music was perfect. The imagery William and Buffy dancing under the stars is so romantic. *sighs dreamily* Can't wait to read about the rest of the date. Fantastic update! :D

Author's Response: Squeee, so glad you enjoyed it, it really was my favorite chapter to write so far. I just loooooooooooove that music, it stirs the heart and weaves magic. Thanks for the wonderful review, you have me grinning ear to ear sweety. Oh, and of course glad you liked the pics too.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:51 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I didn't think it was to mushy , i positively loved it,you did a great job and I agree they needed to connect this way . Can't wait for more .

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I felt they did too. I mean rushing straight for the bedroom didn't seem fitting. Thanks for the lovely review sweety.

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

it was really sweet!! I cant wait to read the next chapter... *cough* smut pretty please *cough* :))

Author's Response: LOL, i like that... *cough* smut pretty please... too funny. Ok, ok, steaminess straight ahead in chapter 19, promise. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Cobweb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:48 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

As promised I'm reviewing you on here sweets, and what can I say but awwww! They really are great together, I love the tracks you used, and listening to them while reading gives this a whole new depth (the pictures helped a great deal too *grins*)

As always yet another great update, cant tell you how much I'm enjoying reading this story and looking forward to the next chapter - keep up the fab work *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks so much hon, I'm glad you enjoyed the music and the atmosphere it helped to create - oh, and the pics of course thanks to karbear57 and kitty. Talk to you soon and take care.

Reviewer: nina1074 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Well that cinches it. My dating pool has effectively shrunk and I now know WHY my last two dates were more Riley than Spike. Damn.

That was so much fun! With the music and the romance. It was lovely and the imagery was so vivid! I was actually sighing with a goofy grin. Wouldn't it be nice if....yeah. This is why fic exists. Le Sigh.

Your writing is just beautiful. Really. You have woven such a beautiful story - and while yeah, using Buffy/Spike as a background and keeping some of their canon traits - it is still about two lovely people trying to find something special.

This fic is special and so you are you. Only a lovely romantic at heart could tell such a fine story and you my dear, couldn't fool anyone anymore. Hopeless romantic you are, and ...

Jeez. Thanks for infecting the rest of us. You Tyhpoid Mary of Romance. :)

You are the best. XXOO
Cheers!
Nina

Author's Response: Ohhhh, I do hope you find your William/Spike soon. I can just see you with that goofy grin on your face girl... god knows i had my own perma-smile while writing it. What can I say but you're right, I'm a hopeless romantic when it comes down to it. My parents were both 22 years old in 1950 (I was a 'ooops' child) so I grew up listening to that stuff, and well coupled with the fact I married my soul mate - who is also a hopeless romantic, it came out in my writing. I'm so happy you liked the chapter, my muse is blushing and gushing from your sweet review and kind words. Thanks so much for making my day with your lovely review hon, toodles.

Reviewer: caegey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:38 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I love the mushy romantic bits! I've been waiting for this update with bated breath for days and it was worth the wait!

Author's Response: Awww, I'm blushing now. So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the sweet review.

Reviewer: Farah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 11:25 am Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Awww! This chap only left me wanting more...

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you want more, and hopefully I can post 19 soon. Thanks for the great review sweety.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 05:50 am Title: Surprises

interesting update. I wonder what exactly she has planned for him. Buffy isn't one to go from upset to ok in a few episodes, let alone a few days. :-)

Author's Response: No, she's not, you're right.... but when faced with the possibility of being in the wrong, well, let's just say, for the sake of fiction, she actually has a head on her shoulders - teeheehee. Indulge me sweety, cuz I think you'll like the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:46 am Title: Surprises

Lorne, Spike, a chocolate massage... oh my god I just got my keyboard all sticky. I got my finger in my bellybutton in anticipation of the next chapter.

Author's Response: LMFAO....... leave the bellybutton alone!!! What can I say, our sense of humor is, well, like family.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:37 am Title: Cruel Misconceptions

Yay, Rileys gone! He made me so limp anyhow. It was a rollercoaster ride of emotions. What a chapter.

Author's Response: LMAO, too funny... thanks for the review .

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