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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 02:45 pm Title: Cruel Misconceptions

I Loved it, could Riley not be any more dense.

Author's Response: LOL, he's a dork, I don't like him at all. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Cruel Misconceptions

I've got 2 teens and their 8 friends to get to their High School Homecoming dance tonight ... with a before party that I insisted upon cooking for ... and all of them are spending the night (my house is tiny).

This week has been horrendous (sp). I couldn't find anything to do between dropping them off and picking them up tonight ... AND THEN I SAW THAT YOU POSTED !!!!!

CAN I SAY THAT YOU JUST MADE MY NIGHT, WEEKEND, WEEK !!!!! CANNOT WAIT TO GET THEM GONE AND READ YOUR CHAPTER!!!!

SEE YOU AROUND 8:30 MY FRIEND.

THANKS IN ADVANCE !!!

Author's Response: Hi sweety, glad I could make your day. I'll talk to soon. Hugs

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings

Well done :)

Author's Response: Thank you again hon, glad to see you happily chewing away at my fic.

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: Arrested Development

Whats going 2 happen next, I need 2 know.
Please update soon.

Author's Response: Soon my dear, soon, I promise. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 09:43 am Title: Breathless

You sure nailed the title on the head - I'm feeling pretty breathless here :P

Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks hon.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 08:15 am Title: Lady In Red

One more thing - Lorne says: "You're enough to make a man change his religion". Do you mean orientation, perhaps? Because 'religion' just leaves me confused...

Author's Response: Yup, he means his sexual orientation. Sometimes people use that phrase, change your religion, in snark reference. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 08:14 am Title: Lady In Red

Looks like Spike is *already* getting sparks of feelings :P

Loved it :D

Author's Response: You bet he is, thanks.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 07:48 am Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

Loved it :D

Author's Response: thanks again.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 07:43 am Title: An Alternative

Very interesting idea. I like it already! :D

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, glad you like.

Reviewer: tina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 02:30 pm Title: Arrested Development

omg that was intense but u really need to update soon i want to read more it is just so good

Author's Response: I will try hon, I couldn't do much after the flu bug hit last week - so I'm playing catch-up right now. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 11:51 am Title: Arrested Development

sob that is so lovely please up date real soon ....

Author's Response: Thank you sweety. Hopefully soon, had the flu all last week.

Reviewer: HELTERSKELTER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Arrested Development

hurry!
I mean no pressure
but, pressure!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review sweety, I'll do my best to post soon.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Arrested Development

I liked the chapter very much. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much hon, I appreciate your review.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Arrested Development

I just had another thought that I had to get out ... I really believe that Lorne and your Muse were actually brillant in choosing the (what some may say cheesy) cop uniform. He HAD to show up in something that was a big stretch and probably sexy/cliche ... something that would take playacting that Lorne/muse knew would ultimately fall apart quickly. He couldn't show up all suave and debonair ... that would NOT have crumbled as easily and if it were easier for him to pull off and he could stay in character easily then they would not have had the revelation that they did.

Did I just babble that whole thing?

It's late, but I just wanted to put that out there. You really are more brilliant than you are giving yourself credit. Or, maybe your Muse is so tapped into Lorne that you have no control. heh heh heh

Author's Response: Yes there were some who thought the cop thing was cheesy - and they would be right. But I'm glad you saw it for what it is in the bigger scheme of the story... an obvious 'act' (situation) that needed to be 'seen thru'. I could have picked something else, but at the time, that's what the muse decided on, so if some don't like it that's ok - can't please everyone, nor would I try. It simply wouldn't be MY story if I did. Thank you sweety. I don't know about being brilliant - but I hope I have my moments of it lol.

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Arrested Development

Just wanna say ... thanks for another great chapter!
I don't know what more to say... after reading some of the (tones of) reviews (sorry, there're too many of them...and it's really late here... or really early!)
Can't wait for your next update. Your muse & you are a good team ;)

Author's Response: You're welcome sweety, and thanks for the wonderful review. I hope to post 16 soon. Get some sleep, and sweet dreams.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Arrested Development

Great chapter. I'm so happy that they both finally came to the realization that they feel more towards each other than just physical chemistry (although they definitely have a lot of that) even if they can't verbally express it yet. I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship. Gotta say... cop uniform... kinda cheesy, but I'll take Spike/William any way I can get him. Yum.

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess I crashed and burned on that one - cop uniform. But at least you enjoyed the chapter anyway. Yup, this is the first step for them in the realization department. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Arrested Development

i dont know about the other negative readers, but i liked this story. it could have been a bit longer, but that's just normal, me asking for more. sure the cop routinne is a little bit overdone, could have stayed away from that, but hey, still naughty fun, right? as always i absolutely love it, want more and anxiously awaits the disaster about to happen. were will we find our beloved couple herenext?
hugs and kisses

Author's Response: Yeah, not the most original costume, but it was fun to write. Not too much disaster ahead, but yeah, some stuff to work through for our couple. Lorne will lend a hand with that. Glad you enjoyed sweety, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: halfpastdead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 05:27 am Title: Arrested Development

Ilove this story i realy realy realy realy do i understand it all to well and i realy and truly love this chapter

i think the police mans trunchion could be put to work but thats just my inner slut ...sorry

please write more ooooo and the cocolate cake sounds like that could be pt to some fun useses

gods im rambaling bt i just had to tell you you hit the nail on the head with buffys problem

Author's Response: Heehee, I'm sure I could have came up with more smut, but I couldn't bring myself to allow more to happen just yet. I think I will put the chocolate cake to use, but not quite the way you expect *evil grin*. I'm so happy you liked the chapter sweety, and thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 05:09 am Title: Arrested Development

Oh, wow. Wonderful update. i bow in the dust before your feets.. lol.
And Yayii, now they seem to know there's more than just client/"Therapist(lol)" in the mix..
And a guy in uniform.. Just salivaworthy right there.. :-) And bonus when cuffs involved :-)
Really looking forward to more from you.. Great update

Author's Response: LMAO, you're so funny. Yes, they - or more importantly Buffy, realize there's more goin on here between them. which is of course exactly what they needed - props to Lorne. Glad you like it sweety, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 03:18 am Title: Arrested Development

Okay, I think I'm the bonehead here. When I read chapter fourteen, I was so excited about the front door cliffhanger, I didn't even check to see that 15 had been posted. Damn! On the bright side, I had a great chapter tonight. Angsty ending...whatever...romance isn't half as fun without some problems. I will not question your writing, especially when you served up a fantabulous scenario. Cops might be cliche, but I do believe they get the job done. Am I right ladies?!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, cops are cliche, but your right they get the job done. OK, well in this case he didn't, ooops. Glad you liked it and I'll be working on 16 soon. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Arrested Development

Evol authors and their evol plot devices. Just post another chappie soon and all will be forgiven. I plan on sticking with you the whole way, baby!

Author's Response: I'll get right on it sweety - blame the muse, he didn't want for them to get together. Glad you liked it though and thanks for sticking with me and for the great review.

Reviewer: Tam/spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Turn up the Heat

LMAO I see cordykitten came thru with the info in Deborah for you! Awesome that she has agreed to lt you continue to use it but then she's a sweet person that way.

Killer smut, girl. I'm enthralled *grin*

Author's Response: LOL, thanks hon. Cordykitten always has the answer... she's like the yoda of spikedom. Glad you enjoyed hon, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Tam/spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 01:33 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

The pic you have posted is a manipulation by deborahm (foodandart) if you would like to give her credit for using the picture. i'm a huge fan of her work. there is a much larger FULL VIEW!! manip of it at her yahoo groups site, plus tons of other fantastic James/Spike manips. If you would like the details to join her group, feel free to email me at raizingkain2001@gmail.com.

Am playing catch up, but thoroughly enjoying your fic!

Author's Response: Hmmmm, interesting. I'll have to email you. I found the pic at darkwaifs site and emailed her for the permission. I did join debarts groups, but this pic wasn't there. Glad you're getting caught up and enjoying it sweety, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Arrested Development

Urg... Why do people get all upset with the author? People need to stop being stupid and saying crap when you know the author will make you happy. It’s a lovely chapter. Bad stuff needs to happen go we can have the good stuff! Keep it up and just ignore the asses.

Author's Response: It's alright, I realize I can't make everyone happy. THere's a fic out there for everyone, and mine may not be everyone's type. But I do appreciate what you said, and it's true that in the end all shall be happy. Thanks so much sweety for the kind words and review.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Arrested Development

Thanks for the chapter :D . A little angst never hurt nobody, lol.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you feel that way, and hey, makes it that much more meaningful when they do get together. Glad you enjoyed it sweety, thanks for the review.

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