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Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Ohmigod.... can't believe how cruel you are to leave us hanging like that. What a cliffie! Nonetheless, another wonderful chapter. I particularly loved Spike's excuse to leave Harmony (hysterical). I can't wait to see what Lorne recommended and how it will play out among Buffy and Spike/William. Just wanted to reiterate how much I'm enjoying this story and what a wonderful , creative writer you are. Please keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: Sorry, got to be cruel to be kind sometimes. It'll be worth the wait I promise. I'm tickled you like TE so much. I can't believe how much people are enjoying it this much, considering it's my first fic. But plow on I shall, it's long from over yet. Thanks for the lovely review and your kind words - hugs.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Whew! What a relief! I couldn't really blame more Spike, but it still would have been icky. He has never really gotten any clues that the encounter ment more to Buffy than just a paid night. Can't wait for what's behind that door. I'm so curious about Lorne's plans!

Author's Response: Oh yes, it's not a spike/other story, not mine - ewwwww. True, he doesn't have any reason to think otherwise about Buffy viewing it as business, but its still early and a lot can happen. I think you'll like whats behind Buffy's door, its going to be most sexy indeed. Thanks for the great review sweety.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Ohhh!! The Cliffies! I hope Lorne knows what he's doing! Will their next meeting be great? I hope so! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I'm a little evil at times with the cliffies, but its so that we can get straight to 'business' so to speak, lol.. Still I'm glad you liked it all the same. Lorne has a fine line to walk since he wants his friends together but doesn't want to interfere with 'fate'. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Aside from the fact that you made my weekend by posting yet another awesome chapter I feel it necessary to rename you. OUT with I'm Bloody English and IN with Clara Cliff Hanger. Dang girl ... not to mention that I about WMP (that's wet my pants incase you don't know ... just made it up) when I saw chapters 14 & 15 posted ... evil you hit the send button or some such thing two times. SOL

No complaints from me though because I always read each chapter at least two times ... gotta make sure I get all the juicy details.

BRILLIANT way to get Spike away from Harmony's clutches !!!! You have such a wicked sense of humor. And I'm sittin' here wondering what "the whole nine yards" could possibly be for their next encounter. (like he left anything out during the last one???????) (OK maybe roses)SOL

I'll just keep remembering ... I trust Lorne, I trust Lorne, I trust Lorne (AND you do know that translates as I TRUST YOU!!!) ... I absolutely cannot figure out what you have in store and I've tried to piece it together ... William would rather something more romantic, element of surprise, going to take the best of Spike's acting ability, tons of props ... GAD ZOOKS.

And he is already at her door.... AAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!

At least in her dreams she seems to have resigned herself to the fact that she truly cares for him ... just a matter of time.

Rock on sister!! THANKS AGAIN !!!



Author's Response: LMFAO, Clara Cliffhanga, yup thats me. Ah well, wouldn't want to give it away now, not when the shock can sink in along with the nights festivities, right? Oh Lord, don't ask me what happened about posting it twice. I think it was a glitch in the server, cuz I had to edit a part of my a/n and then wham, it posted it twice. Yeah, Harmony doesn't want to catch anything, and besides, he loves spyphillus more than her right? LOL. Glad you trust me too, I would never let my readers down. String them along perhaps, but I'll deliver, thats a promise. That's good you've been trying to figure out whats behind door # Buffy - I do hope you like it. If not, I'll try and make up for it with the sex. Oh yes, Buffy's dreams are getting her to realize some things - but she's still a tough cookie. I'll try and make her crumble over the next 2-4 paragraphs. Thanks for the awesome review my friend, talk to you soon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

It would be a total kick in the pants if the guy Willow has in mind as a blind date for Buffy is actually William. lol!

Anyhoo, really can't wait to see what Lorne has in mind for these two. Great chapter, evil cliffhanger and all. ;)

Author's Response: Wouldn't it? LOL, we'll see, we'll see. I do hope you enjoy 15 once it's finished, and thanks for the great review sweety, glad you enjoyed 14, cliffie and all.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 08:01 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Much happier chapter here. Keep them coming.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety. Oh yes, time for more spuffy luvin, lol.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

great update as always. knew lorne was playing matchmaker. hope it goes according to plan and they do not screw it up to much. funny how spike got out of his shag with harmony. wonder what scenario lorne has planned for buffy and spike

Author's Response: Thanks hon. Yep it was a shorty, but with good reason. Lorne wants to see them together, but without interfering too much with what should happen on its own. Thus the scenario he set up. I do hope you like it. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: secret guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Can I just say more, please? Soon?

Author's Response: You got it, I'll be hard at work. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

gotta love Spike and his crafty ways of getting out of Harmony's clutches lol. Great chapter, babe.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you liked the excuse - hey, he loves syphullis more than her right?

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Hee, I can't wait to savor the delicious chapter that will surely follow. I'm awfully curious as to what the whole kit-and-cadoodle entalils. I loved Willow in this chapter and I'm curious wondering who Oz's friend is. Anyway, thank you for stopping Spike and Harmony as you did, loved the 'illness' bit. I could perfectly picture Harmony being all tongue-tied and unsure of what to do. As always, wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: THanks hon for all your help. I was so tired and annoyed with my damn muse - he even had me accidentally calling you a ho on IM. When I get hold of him, I'm gonna throttle him. Oh yes, I wanted to give a few glimpses into future possibilities, but that's as far as I can go. Gotta leave that flexability open ya know? I couldn't resist the disease thing, reminded me of when Spike told Harmony, I love syphillus more than you, lol. Thanks for the review sweety. Talk to you soon.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Ok, I can hardly wait for the "plan". I just know I am going to love it, because what ever Spike does, it has flair and oozes with sex appeal...soon, pretty please and thanks

Author's Response: Oh, honey, the sex appeal is going to be delish. Of course if he wore a paper bag, he could make it look good. Thanks for the great review hon.

Reviewer: HELTERSKELTER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

stop reading this. you should be writing.
no, I mean it! gogogo.
damned cliff hangers.

Author's Response: LMFAO, I know, I know, but I do have an obligation to answer reviews. I like the personal touch it adds, and I get to know everyone out there while they get to know me. Ok, I'm off to answer more, then I'll get cracking. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Whatever could that humming reference be about? I would check with my own inner slut, however she ran off after the last paragraph with a giggle and shriek. I have the feeling she will be spending the time between now and the next update wondering what is waiting for Buffy at the door.

I am loving Lorne's little matchmaking and the additon of Willow/Oz. They are alwasy a warm welcome in any fic. So cute they are. Plus, I am eagerly anticipating the great dumpage of Riley. Mwahahaha!

I should be all with the raised eyebrow and pouty face over the cliffhanger but....I just love this so much it is always worth waiting for. Great lead in to what promises to be an exciting next chapter!

Speaking of the next chapter, you ARE furiously hunched over your keyboard putting final touches on it after not having slept in four days and forsaken eating, right? Good girl.

Cheers !
Nina


Author's Response: LMAO, your inner clut ran off with a giigle and a shriek - too funny. Glad you like the Willow/Oz addition, they're always so fun and cute. Oh yes, RIley will get his, in more way than one - but not in anyway what you might think - I'm cryptic now, *giggles*. You know I had to do the cliffie - it's going to be too much fun writing this next chapter to give it away during 14. Oh how I wish I could say I haven't slept b/c the muse kept me awake, but alas, a break was needed after I wrote part of 15. I needed a trip to the masseuse and a pedicure/manicure. Pampering my muse and me will do much good. Thanks for the wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

*breathes a sigh of relief* I'm so glad Lorne got to Spike in time. Loved the excuse Spike came up with to get out the Harmony situation. I enjoyed Buffy's conversation with dream Spike. Lorne is being so cyptic, I can't wait to find out what scenero he's cooked up this time. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Oh yes, trust me, if there was Spike/Other, I would have put that in the warnings. Nope, no Spike/other here, not in my story. LOL, I kinda liked the thought of scaring Harmony off with a disease... remember when he said I love syphiluus more than you in an epi of btvs - kinda where I got the idea. Yup, Lorne is still being cryptic, but that's b/c he doesn't want to say anything to persuade either party - from what would happen on it own. Buffy is finally discovering some truths of her own in her dreams, part of the road that will lead her to William. Glad you like it hon, it's about to get steamy next posting. Thanks so much for the lovely review.

Reviewer: carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:53 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

What i don't quite understand is why Spike/William still feels the need to go and talk to his pimp to arrange his meetings with Buffy. I realize he's the boss, but I thought the goal for both, Spike and Willliam, was to move away from the business to a more personal relationship. I don't see, from Spike's perspective, why he could gain from asking Lorne's opinion and then always following his command.

Author's Response: I'll explain, Lorne owns the escort service and so he makes all the decisions/coordinations. B/c of his ability, it lends itself to keeping customers happy. Lorne coordinates everything, and in some cases (to include Buffy's) b/c she hums or sings, he know what's best for her. Spike is Lorne's friend and future business partner, but not as far as the escort service. He's an employee only, just a worker, so he does no sheduling - everything goes thru Lorne. In essence, they aren't like street prostitutes who walk off with random buyers (turn tricks), everything's arranged b/c of the escort service's high status - think of Heidi Fleiss. I hope I cleared it up, I'm a bit brain dead this morning. Thanks for the review sweety, and I do hope you enjoy my plans for the next chapter.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:50 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Well I didn't want to read another story now *yawn* but I couldn't resist :-D
Good choice of words from Harmony.. made Spike remember and stop in time. But because Spike was so eager to 'get over Buffy and boink Harmony' he has a problem now. I don't think Harm will be pleased. OH! Very clever.. Harmony will believe it and not be mad when he leaves now. ~ Very interesting dreams Buffy has; she noticed Spike acting different, more personal. And the main factor for her is that he sells himself (that speaks against a relationship). ~ Now I'm curious what Lorne has planned that should turn out so good for Buffy and Spike to find together ... mmmh I'll have to wait :). ~ And I wonder too who the blind date would be, Oz friend.. ~ Maybe the 'one' at the door has something to do with Lorne's plan? Looking forward to find out :-D

Author's Response: LOL, you're so funny, I always love your reviews. Oh yes, Buffy's dreams are getting more personal - making her see things she may not have been ready to deal with yet. And of course now Spike shows up at her door when she least expects it - that was part of Lorne's plan as well - sort of a double element of surprise. Thanks for the review hon, talk to you soon.

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting

Great update. Haha, Spike makes me laugh... great excuse he came up with. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: LOL, you liked that huh? I honestly couldn't think of anything that would 'scare' the dumb blonde away, so tada, disease. Thanks for the great review hon, see you next chappy.

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 02:25 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

OMG! is it reunion time?! please say it is! pleeeaase, pretty please (oh, the chapter? loved it!)

Author's Response: LOL, well, we're getting close. Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 04:48 am Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

Ack!!! He's going to be too late! Great updates! Loved the last few chapters (read them all at once) and have to say that I enjoy the fic a lot. Thanks for it!!

Author's Response: That's wonderful, I kow I always enjoy it when I come back to a story and have a few chappys to read in a row. I'm only sorry I left you w/ such a cliffie, but very happy you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for the great review.

Reviewer: ReneesFic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

For a moment there, I thought Spike was going to be so drunk that he'd accidently drive to Buffy's house instead of Harmony's.

Author's Response: LOL, that would have been pretty funny. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

Okay... I'm keeping the faith. Good chapter! Nice cliffhanger...NOT!!! Update soon!

Author's Response: LOL, I know, cliffies suck, but I felt it was time throw in some drama. Thanks for keeping the faith sweety, and for the great review.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

I have faith. You've had me from the very beginning. I like the turn you're taking. It makes no sense, logically, for either of them to expect the other saw things as anything other than an arrangement. If you had to have a thorn in this rose, I'm glad it was Harmony. She was never much of a threat anyway. lol. I would, still, like to see Buffy draw out some protective, possessive actions from Spike though. I'm all about that side of him. You're doing really great with this story. Congrats on your nomination! : ) Please update soon! One more thing, I was surprised Buffy called to see Spike again so soon. Not only because of the huge expense, but because of her pride. I would have thought if she really wanted to face her fears, she would have asked Lorne for somebody else. Jump back in the saddle, as it were. The fact that she wanted Spike specifically speaks volumes. She wants to face her fears all right, but it's her fear of loving him; she just doesn't know it yet. As far as I can tell, Buffy is the one taking all the chances here. She had to overcome her fear and call Lorne in the first place. She had to bear it when Spike first arrived and not give in to her fear and embarrassment and throw him out and forget the whole thing. Spike needs to put something out there now. He needs to show Buffy she didn't do all that in vain. Of course, my way would be for him to get madly, insanely jealous over something. But, that's just me, sigh. . .
Anyway, thank you for a wonderful story. : )

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy the turn I'm taking, and your right, its unrealistic/too early for them to think the other saw it as anything other than a business arrangement. Harmony was the perfect choice I felt - cuz she's really not that threatening. You just may get your wish - when you mentioned wanting to see protective Spike, but it won't be for a couple chapters yet... I think you'll like what I have planned. Ah yes, it does seem rather soon that Buffy is calling him, I agree. But remember that, for the purpose of the story, she is very much a control freak. So the fact that Spike has been on her mind night and day when SHE thinks she should be having a normal, regular day (as if their night never happened/supposed to be a one time deal for her), that's what’s really cooking her goose, and when she called Lorne, she was going on night #4 in a row of all the dreams – which is a bit much for a control freak. Also remember that she doesn't want or need a man in her life (she thinks this) - so Spike is throwing a double whammy at her in that sense. She's not mad at him at all, she's angry with herself for not being able to control her thoughts and dreams about him. Oh and the expense thing... for the purpose of the story, the art gallery is successful enough that she really doesn't worry about that - I realize the money is no drop in the bucket, but she makes enough that oh, let's say she could see him 4-5 times a month and not break the bank. She asked for Spike again rather than someone else because it’s him she’s haunted by, not just any random escort, he’s the one who made her have several orgasms – a feat/task within itself for any man to accomplish where she’s concerned. And she’s not necessarily doing it just for the sex (even though that’s a major perk) she wants to prove to herself that it’s just business in his eyes as well as hers. And you’re absolutely right, it’s her fear of loving Spike, but it’s far too early for her to realize that for herself. Yup, she’s taking all the chances right now, but it’s not like Spike can stalk her either (although I wouldn’t mind if he stalked me). As far as Spike putting something out there... let’s just say he was jealous enough just thinking about her w/ anyone else (to include Riley), so when he actually does see her with someone else, and given Spike’s persona that likes to come through, it’s a safe bet you’ll be seeing quite a bit of possessiveness and jealous tendencies shine through – that’s a wee bit of a spoiler. I love me a jealous Spike who acts on it whenever I read, so of course I have my plans that I hope you’ll enjoy when that time comes. The plot coupled with the fact it’s my first ever fic means I had to weave some ‘facts’ into the story to support the plot, ie. money issue, in order to make it plausible, cuz in reality – this situation would probably never happen. It’s my first fic, so I’m learning as I go... I do hope to get better after this one and maybe a couple more under my belt before writing something of a more serious nature – which is of course my goal... to write a dark, horror style fic. Thank you so much for the wonderful review hon, you’re a thinker and I like that, cuz it makes me think how to better myself through the story. *hugs*.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

Great chapter. So happy that Buffy finally called Lorne to see Spike again (it's about time Buffy. I would have been on the phone as soon as he left). I am so hoping that Lorne gets in contact with Spike before he goes any further with that twit, Harmony. I can actually hear her perfectly, gratingly, annoying voice in my head every time she says, "Blondie Bear." That voice alone is reason to avoid her. Can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: LOL, I would have been calling the next day as well. That's exactly why I used Harmony - when you mentioned being able to hear her whining - plus I can stomache her better than anyone else I could have chosen. Thanks for the great review hon.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind

I'm still loving this story sooo much! GAH! Spike and Harmony! Though I do get why he is doing what he is doing. Buffy....well as we all know... there is no resisting Spike! I mean really, who would want to?!!!! Can't wait for more! Gotta see what happens when Lorne calls Spike!

Author's Response: Is there an echo in here? LOL, you must really want me to get crackin on chappy 14, which I will of course, *grins*

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 12:20 pm Title: An Alternative

I'm still loving this story sooo much! GAH! Spike and Harmony! Though I do get why he is doing what he is doing. Buffy....well as we all know... there is no resisting Spike! I mean really, who would want to?!!!! Can't wait for more! Gotta see what happens when Lorne calls Spike!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you're still enjoying the ride and happy that you get why Spike/William is doing what he's doing - even if it is stupid. Oh yeah, I agree - who in their right mind would even TRY to resist Spike. Thanks for the awesome review.

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