

Date: 09/02/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: William 'Spike' Ivanhoe, British Born Gigolo
Sorry (well not really) but I just love your chapter title fr some as yet undecided reason....
Okay so I just read that quickly because I'm supposed to be asleep...I'll try to read it more carefully tomorrow or soon....and now i have this whole idea for soething that could be going to happen that I totally blame on thinking about a certain movie recently (what? I don't want everyone else having my idea...it's my idea ;))
You're such a great writer...thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Tee hee, glad you like the title, I can hardly wait to hear your idea, tell me soon sweety and thanks for a lovely review.

Date: 09/02/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: William 'Spike' Ivanhoe, British Born Gigolo
Can I just tell you once more how much I'm enjoying this story? Loved the background story on William, loved his relationship with Giles,. I adore cryptic Lorne and your wonderful Anya and above all, I love how that night changed everything for William and Buffy, how they can't seem to keep thinking of the other. Awesome chapter, darling, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh sweety, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and it wouldn't have been a success without you - kisses and hugs. Yup, Giles is a good man in this, along with William of course. We'll get to know Lorne just a tad more next chappy, just a hint - I'ma tease huh? Thanks for the review and all the help my friend.

Date: 09/02/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: William 'Spike' Ivanhoe, British Born Gigolo
OK, before I even read this chapter ... THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY NIGHT !!!! Now, I will calmly go back and read this work of yours.
PS Thanks for updating this story so quickly!!!!!!! onward ...
Author's Response: LOL, you are most welcome, my pleasure hon. Thanks again.

Date: 09/02/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Certainly did not mind you "go[ing] there." Nicely done. Can't wait to see how real life unfolds for the both of them.
Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yup, next stop, real life.

Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:44 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
Bad spelling error ! It was "What a joy to get back.." !!
I'm not on my own computer , and was in a hurry to write . ;)
Author's Response: LOL, I was thrilled to have you review - doesn't matter to me if there's typos or not. Thankas hon.

Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:42 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
What a jot to get back at your wonderful story.
This last installment was gorgeous , there is no other word. Spike ' s emotions were heart-touching and so well written.
Nothing wrong with a bit of angst , it's the way for the Spuffy love after all!
Thank you so much .
Author's Response: Thank you sweety, I'm glad you enjoyed it this much. Yes, Spike was desperate to make this last encounter mean something, for him and for her. Have to throw a little angst in the mix, and I agree with you, it's what makes for the spuffy luvin in the end. Thank you for the wonderful reveiew.

Date: 08/31/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Wonderful chapter! It was hot but at the same time sad in a way. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Hi sweety, so glad to have you back. I tried to balance it out a little (between the hot sex and the raw emotions), and I feel bad their night had to end, but sadly it needed to. Not to worry though, the story is long from over. Thanks so much for the great review.

Date: 08/31/2006 - 11:38 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
Just got back from my mother's house (who sadly barely knows what a computer is, let alone internet, arrrgh !) and first thing I do after I got the car in the garage and the children playing ? Check out if the story is updated ! Awwww, my fix is here... But hey, the end was harsh, though I understand why. I feel bad and weepy for them and want to know how they deal with The Day After.
God, I'm so glad you exist and write stories like this !!! What can I do to make you feel better and write faster ? Bring you a hot tea ? A cold whiskey ? A nurse for the children ? A pillow for your back ? Maybe they're al virtual, but consider them here ! (Do I have to add that I'm not writing from a lunatic asylum but from a perfect "proper" house in the country ?) Sorry, I'm tired from a rathr long journey, but hey, do you see how many people read your story and write reviews (and think about those who don't write a reveiw for some reason - like I did - BUT like your story)... Well, I won't bother you anymore but I'm so waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response: To know you still wrote a review even after being so tired... that is a true compliment and I appreciate it very much sweety. LOL, boy somedays I could use a virtual hot cuppa and a nanny, so I'll consider it done by you hon, thanks. I know the ending was a bit sad, but its not he end of the whole story. I do hope you enjoy chappy 12 once it posted. I'll be hard at work at it with my virtual niceties from you. THank you so much for a truly lovely review.

Date: 08/31/2006 - 09:10 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
more please.....
Author's Response: Hi hon, glad to see you're back. I promise to work my hardest on 12 for you, but of course, I want it just perfect before posting. Thanks for the review.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Great story I don't usually read "All Human" Spuffy, but I took a chanch on this one and loved it !!! I hope you keep going I'd love a happy ending.
Author's Response: YAY, I'm so thriled you took a chance and liked it. What a wonderful compliment, thank you so very much sweety. I do hope you stick around for more and yes, it's spuffy so happy endings all around.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Just read through the whole story and I absolutely love it - I hope you can post more very soon! I love the last scene so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much, it's like music to my ears. I'll be hard at work to post asap, but it does take time. Lemme know how you like 12 once it's up, thanks again.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 09:19 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
Oh dear, I cried so hard I passed out. When I woke up my dial up had disconnected and I thought it was all a bad dream until I looked again. Spike is such a devilsh bitch. I love it! Can't wait for them to get it on again so I can fantasize some more.
Author's Response: And another satisfied customer, lol. Too f'in funny bro, thanks.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 07:48 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
that chapter chapter made me wheepy. cant wait fro more updates.
Author's Response: Well, I had to end it somewhere, and it had to be on an emotional note... to set the tone for the rest of the story. Not to worry, much laughter will be coming your way to cheer you up. Thanks so much for the lovely review.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 03:16 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
Brilliant, both hot as fuck, and heartwrenching. Can't wait to see what's around the corner.
Author's Response: LMAO, I tried to balance it out w/out detracting from the intensity of either the sex or emotions. Glad I could deliver it to your liking. Next stop is plot and I hope you enjoy it just as much. Thanks for the great review hon.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 03:15 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
I´m all weepy. Now he leaves and the question is: are they going to see each other again?. Of course they are, if not you wouldn´t write the story, right?, but how? Is she going to pay for his services again? Is he going to go after her?. The Story is very interresting and I can se the angst coming like a big wave. Please update soon
Author's Response: LOL, I think it's a safe bet they'll be seeing eachother. As for paying for his service vs a freebie, well, I have my plan and unfortunetely that's all I can say w/out giving it away. No, he's not going to go after b/c he's convinced he's beneath her and well, it might be stalking if he did. He's praying she'll call for him again though. Oh yes, the angst is coming, maybe not next chappy, but it's coming. Thanks for the awesome review, I'm glad you're asking the right questions and I do hope you enjoy the answers as they unfold.

Date: 08/30/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
That made me feel sad for them, the end of their blissful night together. Obviously it can't last forever though, much as we'd like. :-)
As for the angst, oh a little bit of angst never hurt anything, makes things more interesting, spices things up a bit. We all need a little change anyway to cool down some. ;-)
As usual, great job!
Author's Response: Yes, all good things must come to an end, sad but true. Glad you're up for some angst, and yes, I think that's enough sex for now. Anymore anymore would just be unrealistic, let's face it, the human body can only handle so much, teehee. Thanks for the awesome review sweety, take care.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Aside from the hot sex turing my laptop into a puddle of goo.... That was so sweet, the way they both tried to make their last time a fantasy of realness! As much as I (and the cig manufacturers) love all the GREAT Spuffy lovin' that's been going on, I'm very much looking forward to what's gonna happen next. I'm sure there so much more to this tale. They need to meet in real life, they need to pine, buffy needs to sell her house and buy spike for the next few years (oh wait, that's my plan) oh well. Love it. Anxious for more.
Author's Response: Glad you still enjoyed the sex and are looking forward to the plot. I'm ready for it too, and how it will be recieved by all. Yes, sometimes fantasy is better than reality (sometimes) but if they only knew it didn't have to be. LOL, sell your house and buy Spike for the next few years, cheers to that! So happy you liked the chapter and I can't wait to see what you think of 12. Thanks so much sweety for the truly awesome review.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Oh, it wasn't too mushy at all, it was wonderfully written, cariño! It held all the emotion you promised and much more. I love how you ended their night together, it will be one they will not forget that's for sure and one that will weigh in a lot when decision-time arrives. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you hon, I was hoping it wouldn't be too much mush. Yes, it is an unforgettable night for both of them, no matter how they may try and ignore that fact in the future. Thus the inevitable angst to come. So glad you enjoyed it and I'm soooo looking forward to some SSS. Aside from all the lovely reviews and updates on my own favs so far this week, I won't feel complete w/out another chappy from your wonderful story. Thanks sweety.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
This is such a wonderful story. Extremely hot & sexy and then sweet & poignant. I am enjoying the character development. and can hardly wait to find out more about Spike's alter ego, William, and his complete story, especially the rationale for joining the escort service. I think Buffy's next day reflections will also prove to be very interesting. But please don't make us wait too long before they get together again. I got a little choked up when Spike left without one more look at Buffy - sigh.. Did I mention that this is a brillant story?
Author's Response: Such a lovely review, thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the characters as we get to know them. Ah yes, I do hope you enjoy my history of William and the reason he does what he does, after all he hates doing it. Yes, it really was hard for him to leave her that morning, but he didn't really have a choice. Buffy will have more than her share of thoughts the next day and I'll try not to let it be too long before they get together again. Thank you so much again for the lovely review.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Fantastic, as always! Poor Spike...my heart just broke for him there at the end. Can't wait to see where you take the story from here!
Author's Response: It was sorta sad I know, but hasn't William and Spike both always been a fool for love? Just trust that it will have a spuffy ending and I do hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much. Thanks for a stellar review sweety, I always enjoy hearing from you.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Wow! I just started reading this this afternoon...and damn if I didn't sit here and read all 11 chapters in one sitting. That was truly amazing. The hottest and most beautiful Spuffy all in one story. I don't know how you did it but it felt so real, like I was right there with them the whole time. Absolutely brilliant writing. Pat yourself on the back, sweetie...but not before you post another chapter...or two...please?
Author's Response: I am truly blushing, you are so sweet, and I'm thrilled with such a wonderful review, thank you. I always love when a reader comes along, discovers TE and leaves a review. It really gives a different perspective on how my writing impacts a reader. I tickled pink that you like it so far, and yes, I'll try to post asap, but of course each chapter needs just the perfect touch before I let it go and that comes from my wonderful beta's. Thanks again

Date: 08/29/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
What's gonna happen next? I wonder if Buffy and William will see each other again. I hope so. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Well, the day after is, the day after. A time for reflection, and also for Wiliam's past to become clearer. As for Buffy? She'll have quite a bit to think about. I think it's a safe bet to say, they'l be seeing one another again. Thanks so much for the review, glad I have you guessing.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 04:27 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
omg. After I hit submit, I am going to read the rest of the reviews and hope that I wasn't the only one that got sniffly while reading this.
And I laughed out loud at this: "If only he were of average size, he wouldn't have to take his time... "
*flails* You KILL me. LOL!
Oh, and now he is gone, and we will have to wait for them to figure things out. I swear I sigh like a teenage girl when I read this one...it is so wonderful. Every chapter. Thank so much!!
Cheers,
Nina
Author's Response: Oh no, don't cry, it's not over yet, well ok, that night was. Yeah, sometimes bigger isn't necessariy better, when you're as desperate as Spike was to have her. Glad to make ya laugh. I'm thrilled you are enjoying it this much. I'll try to get 12 posted asap, but I'm so fussy sometimes that I end up going over and over it before even handing it off to be beta'd. Thanks for the truly awesome review sweety.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
Favorites: I found another site and did it there ;-)
So bittersweet to see Spike so 'desperately wanting' Buffy and yet thinking he can't because he is beneath her and he'll have to leave her again. Spike is William now, so to say; Buffy could see the difference. ~ Loved how you played with the emotions in this chapter. Looking forward to 'more William' and how Buffy will take it. She asked not for him to stay but that was before. I'm curious :) (And loved the update)
Author's Response: Oh good, that's wonderful. Makes it easier to check for your fav's without having to cruise around too much. Yes, our William wants love above all, that's always been such a strong part of his character even on btvs. It will motivate my William to go above and beyond the call of duty - lol. Ah yes, the emotions, delicate area that is, tough to write. The day after will be interesting and I hope you like it once I post. Thanks so much for the wonderful review, and for continuing to enjoy it, ttfn sweety.

Date: 08/29/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Once More, With Feelings
So, I was supposed to be outside putting up hurricane shutters and finishing the prep for this dang storm and I gave everyone orders then snuck back into the house to read your chapter. (Makes my day/week when a new chapter arrives) Anyway, I got caught by the family so I had to postpone the reading and actually help out. (I'd already gotten a few paragraphs into it and man was it hard to close my laptop even at that point)
I found that when I am reading your work sometimes feel as though I am in his head, then I'll feel as though I am in her head and suddenly I'll feel as though I am just in the room as an observer. I am completely taken in by the story, each character individually, them as a couple and their various interactions, the whole plot, and the potential for where the story can go. Like a great movie ... it is the ONLY thing on my mind at the time that I am reading it. Your imagination, your attention to detail, your creativity and the way that you are able to convey the story is absolutely amazing !!!! Usually when reading a story (and you know that I am reading a lot of them) I can think of things that I would have done differently or little things that really would have made a story better. I absolutely do not do that while reading this story. It is so well done. I wouldn't change a syllable.
I love the fact that you are not injecting artificial angst into the story ... their situation alone is angsty enough if one considers them as individuals ... what are the chances of this encounter in real life ... slim to none (yet still plausible) ... can they do it ?... will it work? ... I mean the angst goes on and on just by virtue of the plot.
I love this story and I know that you put a lot into each chapter that you write and man does it show...it's flawless. Thanks for all of your time and effort ... this is such a masterpiece and I am faithfully standing by waiting for what ever comes next. I know that you love this story and I know that what ever you do with it will be awesome. You go girl !!! And thanks so much for all you do!
Author's Response: Such an outstanding review, really blew me away thank you a million times over. This is an author’s dream to have this much feedback, and so positive at that. I do hope you have your house secured, my prayers are with you and your family. To know you can be in each mind’s eye for both of them and still an observer lets me know I’ve accomplished my goal, which is of course to make the reader ‘feel’ what the characters do, and still be able to ‘see’ what’s going from an outside perspective. And I’m happy that the story draws you into a place where you can escape all thought except for what you’re reading. I think that’s why almost every reader comes here for so many of the great fics, to escape to a world where love – usually – reigns supreme between our fav couple. That’s a first, to know someone wouldn’t have changed a thing, cuz I agree, when reading a story sometimes, you think... ‘oh I wouldn’t have had him say that’. So I’m thrilled you feel that way, so much so I’m not sure how to respond to it, I’m speechless – and I’m a talker by nature. Angst, oh boy, a touchy subject indeed. I’m sure that will be an area where I won’t be able to please everyone, but I will follow my heart and my gut instinct on what needs to be. As for artificial angst, it doesn’t need it. You’re 100% correct in your assessment, this plot is a challenge, and god knows I love a challenge. It’s plausible but not likely, thus a good first fic for me to tackle. If I can thrill readers when this is complete, I will surely go on to write more and different types of fic. As for the attention to detail portion of your review, I had to laugh... I’m a Virgo, thus a perfectionist by nature, but after being in the military and their ‘attention to detail’ training, well it’s resulted in agonizing over simple things like a choice of one word. So again, I’m glad you wouldn’t change a thing. Thanks so much sweety, you’ve truly made my day, hell, my week!!!