[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 06:12 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Hey no stealing Spike Joss made him for sharing, I'll leave a review okay !!
Okay this is turning out to be one of the most wonderful fic I've read in a long time. The scenes between Buffy and Spike are just beautifully written it's as if you could actually be living the parts, although there is sex it's not written at all in a pornographic way but with love and compassion for what they are both feeling deep down for each other...As I'm an English lit teacher; I give this fiction full marks for grammar and sentence construction , it is well written and thought out leaving the reader wanting for more....I'd like to see more as soon as it's ready for posting please....AA++
Author's Response: Holy crap, are you serious??????? No way, I find it hard to comprehend. Then again when I read your review I felt like I was back in highschool... 'oh my god, I just got graded', lol.
turning out to be one of the most wonderful fic I've read in a long time. Now that's a true compliment coming from an english teacher. I'm so flattered it's ridiculous. I never took writing classes, other than english comp. in college - I loved that class though, did pretty well too, maybe I should have switched my major.
It's music to my ears that you feel you're 'there' with the characters. That's my aim... to have readers 'feel' the characters and to 'see' what's going on exactly in their mind. I'm also pleased to hear you say that it's not written in a pornographic way. I'd feel awful if the readers didn't feel as if they were reading a 'story' vs just a sex scene. I'm always aiming to leave the reader wanting more too, so I'm glad I've achieved that... or else I'd give up. I'm always so worried about sentence structure and grammar, constantly, so to hear your 'grade' really made my day. Naturally, I owe a lot of my gratitude to my betas, without them, well, it mught be pure shiite.
I always respond to reviews and say which ones made my day. And it's true, but THIS review is like a gift, it REALLY made my day. Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart... I'm on a high now.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
oh god, this was fucking hot. i love the way you write... it's erotic then sweet and tender, then back again. so great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that tickles me pink. I didn't want to settle on just one 'mode' of emotions for the chappy, lest it be labeled strictly fluff, or smut. Glad to entertain you and thanks for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
now how can i not review with an offer like that!!!
loved the chapter. i don't want their night to end!!!
more please!
p.s. now where's my sugar and spike? ;)
Author's Response: I know, their night has to come to a close though, or else suffer raw parts, lol. One sugar and spike coming up, tee hee. Next chapter will deliver a little more of what your asking for, then we'll get back to the plot. Thanks for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 10:21 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Hey you're back. Glad you posted too. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks sweety, yup I'm home and back to posting. Hope you liked it, thanks for the review. Talk to you soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 07:46 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Mmm jealous Spike (Buffy going back to Riley). So he wants to make him unforgettable. As Buffy doesn't like the thought she would have to share Spike with other women. ~ Gah.. they managed another misunderstanding. Glad that Spike did talk to her before he stormed out...
Oh I really loved to read a new chapter. So both Spike and William are enchanted by Buffy. As Buffy likes his both sides. Looking forward to the next chapter :) If I could I would this story add to my favorites too. Just imaged I did it (because I can't do it any longer).
Author's Response: Oh yeah, you know it girl. They got the jealous vibes going on big time, lots of firsts to feel prtoective about. I won't make too much of a problem out of Riley - just enough. But he'll get his, wait and see. Yes, I had to break up the fluff with another argument, can't stand to much sweetness. Plus, it gave them an opportunity to see a little more of the other side to themselves as individuals. So sorry you can't add it to favorites, but you always leave reviews and that's enough for me sweety. So glad ou liked it and thanks so much for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 07:20 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
OMG! They're so sweet together! I love that you threw in a little squabble, or it might have been to sweet. As always I love your story and will be looking forward to the next chappie. Your mind, I must say, works in incredible (and delicously naughty *wink wink*) ways, and I just LOVE it! Keep it up. hugs and kisses
Author's Response: Thank you so much hon, you made my day with your sweet words. Yeah, I'm not much for fluff, (ickkkk, I don't like sticky sweet unless it's necessary) but the chappy called for it as the night draws to a close. I'm glad you liked the squabble, I had to break it up a bit and have them see a little more of each other's real person. Yup, dirty mind here, lol, but if it works for you why try to deny my true nature, teeheehee. Thanks again for the awesome review.
hugs,
Tina
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Great story.Great Chapter. This is fast becoming one of my favorites stories. Please update soon. The story is as hot as it can be. :-))
Author's Response: Squeee, I love to hear that. So happy you have been enjoying it so far and are looking for more. Thanks so much, you made my day.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 02:45 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Very good, but I'm waiting for the shoe to drop!
Author's Response: Ah yes, and you know it has to happen somehow right? Well, we'll see. The day after always brings it's own light on things that happen in the night. Thanks for the great review hon.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:43 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
loved it!!!!! LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!! is buffy going to give spike another go...or a third go....or....you know what? i've lost count how many times spike got her off! lol. anyway, really loved the chapter. it was fluffier than the last couple of chapters. it didn't look like it was ALL about sex with this update.....not that i woud've minded if it was. lol. great job. post soon.
Author's Response: Teehee, I love it when you review, it's always so sweet and funny. In answer to your question, maybe... we'll see. I figured they deserved a break and would be tired after all that. That's so funny, you lost count. Yes, I had to move into some fluff area here as we are nearing the nights end. I kinda cringe, but it was necessary. That and it can't be about sex all the time, right? Then it would be just smut, lol. Thanks for the review hon.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
That was so good! All of it has been just great! Please let him be there in the morning! I feel sad for them because you know its going to have to end soon, sigh, but it could be put off for a bit, right?
Author's Response: Thanks so much sweety. Alas, all good things must come to and end, even for these two. As for putting it off a bit, that could be arranged, we'll see. I'm happy you enjoyed this chappy.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:54 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
That's "there are no words." See, you made me lose my train of thought completely.
Author's Response: LMAO, so, is that a good thing??? Gotcha unhinged eh??? Your so funny. Take care.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
I'm at a loss. There are no works, dearie. They made ME sleepy. I'm wondering though what will happen when the real world creeps back in.
Author's Response: LOL, well, at least you'll get a good nights rest right??? Ah yes, the real world inevitably creeps in. Well, please stay with me to find out what becomes of the day after. Thanks so much for the lovely review sweety.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Wow girl do you ever write hot.right now cant talk,just love your work.
Author's Response: LMAO, sounds like cave woman Irishwoman39 has come to review. I just had to tease you. I'm always so happy when I see you review. Very pleased that you enjoyed this chappy, thanks so very much for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Well, cold shower time for me..... ok, I'm back. Those two are so hot my socks melted.... my cig lit on its own.... my air conditioner kicked on while reading.....Damn gril, can you write an erotic scene or what (of course it probably helps that we've all had these fantasies about Spike/William/JM). And what's with the apologizing for sex scenes with Spike in them? NO NEED to apologize, you can apologize when you DON;T have a sex scene with Spike in it!
I Thought he was gonna tell her his real name when they were face to face and about to "complete" their mutual release. Thought for sure he'd let her call out his real name. Oh Well, I'm sure you have plans. Afterall there's still the "dessert" to consider and I know that their "erotic night" is nearly over (I'm with buffy's inner voice though.... buy up all his time, damn, I'd sell my house and my JM beer can collection for a night like that! YUMMY! So more please (well, as soon as I calm down from this chapter that is). Thanks you for such "stimulating" entertainment!
Author's Response: LMFAO, your sooooo funny... my socks melted.... my cig lit on its own.... my air conditioner kicked on while reading. Ah, I love to hear it affected you so much. Well, I looked back on my work and thought, wow, I have more sex in here than anything else, and it DOES have a plot and lots of future chapters with that plot. So I didn't want to drive anyone away by making it seem all smut. Well, rest assured there will be MANY more sex scenes in the future, and I hope you like them just as well as you have these.
Nope not yet, no real name for now, and yes, there is a plan for that I think you'll like very much. Nope the night, er... morning isn't quite done yet. Parting is such sweet sorrow, but yes, I'd take out a loan to buy up his time as well, mm mmm good Thanks so much for the stupendous review hon, stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Awww....Caveman Spike, always my favorite, made his appearance. He's so under it now, and for that matter, so is she. I am dying to know what's going to happen in the morning.
Author's Response: Tee hee, yes, the primal instincts are in the forefront, grun, grunt. I think I can say with confidence, that you'll enjoy what the morning brings. I so loved your review, thanks a bunch hon. Let me know what you think next chappy.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
THE BEST CHAPTER YET ... made my Saturday night ... and now it'll make my hubby's (You know what I'm talking about) That chapter could actually stand alone it was so cleverly thought out and written. So many layers to each character are just pouring out through your words. As always, looking forward to the next chapter ...masterful.
Author's Response: OMG, how am I going to top my own work if you say it's the best chappy yet? I will strive to do my best and I sooooo enjoy it when I hear that you've enjoyed this chapter that much. Haha, you're hubby is in for a night to remember huh?? Well, someone may as well be getting some right??? That's why I write, b/c my hubby is half a world away, sighs. Wow, stand alone, cool, never thought about it like that. Thanks so much sweety for the wonderful review, I got me the warm fuzzies. Talk to you soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Mmmm, sugary Spikey, how can I resistt? *lol*
Oh, honey, this chapter was so perfect. I love that they both know deep down that this night is going to change them, even if they're equally aware that a relationship between them would be very difficult, if not impossible, at least up to this point, mostly because of Spike's 'profession'. I love how possessive they both are with the other, how they want to remain in the other's mind, even if they know they might not see again. I felt that part of the reason Spike wanted another go might have been that he doesn't want the night to end, the fear of thinking there might not be a repeat in the future, might be me reading too much into it, too. ;)Thank you for the awesome update, cariño, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, *blushes*, yes, feelings run deep even if they aren't aware of it. They have made such an impression upon eachother that the possessiveness is a natural reaction. Kinda like, "I did that, I made that happen, I was his/her first, don't touch. Mine" At this point a relationship isn't feasable, but they want so much to be on the other's mind for a long time to come. Well, yes, in part Spike wanted very much to have her again b/c he's not convinced she'll call for him again, but it's also his stamina in play as well. He's very, 'marathon man, especially when it comes to her. He doesn't want the night to end for sure. So no, you weren't reading too much into it. Thanks so much sweety for the wonderful review, hugs,
Tina
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
I think you are doing a great job of mixing Buffy and Spike's emotions with the hot Spuffy lovin'. It's definitely coming across as meaningful yummy smut. I loved the dialogue between Spike and Buffy in this chapter. I also really liked the sweet moment when Buffy knelt down to Spike's level and took his face in her hands to speak with him. Wonderful update! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad that you're like the underlying emotions playing outy. Also that you liked the kneeling before Spike part. He's very much like a child that wants to please, and when dealing with a child, you have to get down on their level. Buffy is really taken with him, and sees more in him than she's willing to admit. I so hope you review the next chapter as well, thanks for the truly wonderful review.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Awe, I really love this fic. Hopefully not too much dramatic angst in the departure/reunion. And no Riley to mess up their post-coital bliss. Ass.
Author's Response: LMAO, your sooooo funny, I loved that comment about Riley...'ass'. He'll get his, that's all I can say for now - it'll be quite, amusing. No, not too much angst in the departure. Renuion, I haven't planned any, but there will be some as we get deeper into the story and feelings are realized. It needs just a touch to stay out of the fluff zone. Thanks so much for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Have I mentioned I freaking love this? I am so ready for the "leap into the arms declaration of love part!!" But oh the build up is so delicious. They are just too cute and the whole thing just makes you grin like dork.
You have just made this so fun to read. Thanks so, so much!
Okay...review is here..where is my sugary Spike? *waits*
Author's Response: That is so awesome you like it so much, It tickles me pink and sideways that you do. But, sadly, there will be no declarations as of yet. Don't worry when they do happen it will be VERY romantic ... at least if I write it correctly. That's wonderful that you find it fun to read. That's what I want for a first fic, something fun with lots of smut and a touch of angst.
LOL, you are too funny... 'waits for sugary Spike'. Sorry, I ate him all, teeheehee.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
great update. love the sex, and the emerging feelings between buffy and spike. can''t wait for more smut and plot. please update soon. glad you made it home safely.
Author's Response: Thanks, it was a loooooong drive - ughh. Yeah, I will be getting back to plot, but there's a bit more smut to come... ooops did I say that, lol. I'm so happy you like their feelings that are playing out. It's an unusual encounter but hey, it's spuffy and they're destined for one another right? Thanks for the super review sweety.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Beautyful chapter. They are sneaking deeper into my heart. Can't stress enough just how much I enjoy this story. Smut aside (which is steamingly written.. mixed well with tenderness), it is such a sweet description of their interaction.. insecurities, hopes, the works. And just who is breaking in who here .. lol. Love that while Spike brought out her wilder side, she brought out William..
Thank you so much for posting this story and keep'em coming (yeah yeah, I know.. hard to write a thing without tripping over an innuendo ore two.. lol)
Author's Response: That is music to my ears that you're enjoying the story more and more as we go along. Yes, I like smut a little too much, but I enjoy plot equally as well, thus I suppose that will be my style from here on out. Yup, they are both breaking eachother down and don't even know it, at least not yet. LMAO, your innuendos, yep more to 'come'. Thanks so very much for the awesome review, I love them.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Oh Honey!!!!! Where do I even begin...Well I like the banter between them, way cute. Buffy tried to act like she didn't care if Spike left, PLEASE!!!! Like anyone could turn THAT away, LOL!!! I really enjoyed how you wrapped this chappy up, very sweet yet mind numbling HOT! I swear I get goosebumps everytime I read one of you'r chaps, LOL!!! Great job once again girlie! I haven't gotten any e-mails yet, but you know how hotmail is...THEY SUCK!!!! Kuddos and hope to hear form you soon ;)
Author's Response: LOL, yeah, god knows I couldn't turn that away either, yummy. She just had to try and beat him at his own game though, and it brought out exactly what she needed to see - William - though she doesn't know that yet. I'm so thrilled you enjoy all my chappies, I aim to please, and Spike does too - teeheehee. Yeah, I gave up on hotmail ages ago, it's just not what it used to be. Feel free to email me anytime. I thought perhaps when school starts this tuesday, maybe I can have you over and we can meet and chat over coffee or something. I'm dying to share ideas. Thanks so much sweety for the review, hope to hear from/meet you soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Do It To Me One More Time
I thought she was kidding. I'm glad that was cleared up! Is it possible for them to have a relationship after this? I hope so! Great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: I just had to throw in some bickering, you know they do it so well. Yeah, I think they can have a relationship, but it will take some time to get there. So glad you liked it, thanks for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:40 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
I can't believe Spike has held out this long! I would have blown it by now. Lord have mercy, another pair of pants into the wash.
Author's Response: tehee, too funny bro
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