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Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire


Oh! I want to have hot butter rubbed all over me and be fried in the pan with that Spike!
Your writing is making me do extra loads of wash girl!

Author's Response: guess I need to by stock in laundry detergent huh?

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:34 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Lord have mercy! I wanna boot Buffy right outta bed and have that stud all to myself!

Author's Response: LMFAO, too f'in funny.

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2006 - 09:10 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

really, reallllly good chapter. but poor spikey has yet to come. i hope you'll have some mercy for him in the next chap... or not. hehe, why not make him suffer *wink*. looking forward to their next heated encounter, so keep them coming. (pun intended ;D)

Author's Response: Glad you like it, and yes, I'll take some pity on Spike next chappy. He got off twice before he started teasing her anyway, so I felt it was just and fair this chapter to make him suffer a little. Thanks for the awesome review and let me know what you think of the next chappy.

Reviewer: lustygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Snack? More like a mouthful, a very delicious mouthful. More please, soon.

Author's Response: Indeed, probably, 2 mouthfuls. You bet hon, I'm getting my next chappy beta'd right now, thanks for the freview.

Reviewer: spike's mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:19 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I need more now pleaseeeee........................this bloody fantastic it's like I'm really there...

Author's Response: That is so great, that's what I aim to do, make readers feel like they're 'there', watching. I loved your review sweety, thanks so much. And soon, I'll post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

At last.. this is my third try to read but now I'm doing it :)
Got distracted again now, I was hunting the link for some debart's icons I found on my computer. NOW on to your story :)
Loved Buffy's inner conversation. She got distracted too, huh? And both with thinking of the other as girlfriend / boyfriend. Awe, and the chocolate cake :) And now Buffy will be a 'first' for him too. ~ Loved the update and looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Debart's art is distracting isn't it? Tee hee, I know I've got a favorite, lol. Yup, Buffy's becoming distracted, and she's only semi-aware of it. She may think she doesn't want a boyfriend but underneath, we all want someone special in our lives. I got me some plans for that chocolate cake that you'll find quite surprising, lol, I'm teasing you to stick with me. I had to have her make an impression on him in as many ways as possible - with the BJ thing - she just had to do it. Thanks so much for the review sweety. I'll be going home next week, back to DSL and LJ... it's been fun here, but I'm ready to be back in my own house.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 06:34 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Was wondering how you were going to work it out that he has had so many women before Buffy. But, what you did was perfect. For her to be his first at that, well, that was a stroke, lol, of genius. Great, great chapter. I really loved it. Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it was tough, believe me. In the end I guess because it IS spuffy that anything goes, but I wanted to deliver it in a somewhat realistic way. LMAO, your pun is too funny, I loved it... 'stroke of genius', lmao again. Hope you like the next chappie as well. Thanks so much for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I am in love with this story. You write so animatically and flowing that I cannot do anything other than embrace the words and dive in:-)
Thank you for the snack, bet you had maincourse (english not my mainlanguage, but hope my spelling doesn't leave you a big questionmark as to what I mean) over and over between these two chapters *wink wink in a very not-so-discret way* lol.. Sorry, couldn't help it. One more thing about this story: just brings out the playful side once in a awhile :-)
I still just wanna hug them both. They are so sweet :-)
Thanks for the great update, really looking forward to follow this story further :-)

Author's Response: I am on a high right now from your kind words, you are so sweet. I like to write as 'visually' as I can, you know, really get the readers wrapped up so they feel like they're actually watching it in their mind. I liked you 'not so discreet remark', my kinda humor. Oh yes, the night's not over yet. Maybe I should have said this was an appetizer. I'm happy you like their characters, I wanted a light-hearted fic as a first. Thanks again for the stellar review, let me know how you like the next chapter once it's posted.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:59 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Please PLEASE tell me Buffy won't break up with Riley in the restaurant where Spike will see! Oh no! Great update!

Author's Response: Oh yes, you know it's gonna happen - ooops, did I let that slip??? LOL, I'm sure everyone's expecting it. Thanks for the great review sweety.

Reviewer: spikesmrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

god i'm glad my friend eve sent me here this great stuff.it hot and very smutty my thing thank you and now to chapter 8

Author's Response: Oh, let me know what you think, and tell your friend thanks for sending you my way. Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside that you both enjoy my little ditty. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: spikesmrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

god i'm glad my friend eve sent me here this great stuff.it hot and very smutty my thing thank you and now to chapter 8

Author's Response: Is there an echo in here? LOL. You must have liked it so much you entered twice.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I enjoyed VERY much! I couldn't imagine someone as hot as Spike never having a woman give him fellatio! Not possible...lol...but it serves the story great.. He is going to be head over heals by the time he has to leave, and vice versa. Also, his day job, and her love of his chocolate cake was a wonderful way to connect them outside of this situation. Great job!

Author's Response: I know, it is pretty fantastical about him not ever having a bj, but the fact he's only had one lover/girlfriend before this 'profession coupled with the fact his duties are to please women, not necessarily BE pleased, is hopefully ok with everyone. Me personally... I'd give him one in a heart beat, huge or not. OOOPS I just said that didn't I? Glad you like the connection outside of the bedroom and thanks so very much for the kind review.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Enjoyed ? No , more than that : was captivated !
It was utterly delicious. I really liked how you made them talk and share something different , starting to become intimate in other areas than the sex. lovely.

But of course i won't deny that I was in awe of your descriptive talent for the sex scene.. Wow.. Insanely hot again!

I think there isn't something hotter than a woman willing to please the man with oral pleasure , especially after he has been buried deep within herself , and " his shaft still swathed in her own juices, he tasted divine"; Hum.. is a puddle.

This was fantastically written , dear , and so worth the wait. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I had to have them connect on a level beyond the sex, or it would have turned cheesy, so I'm glad you like that. Glad you like the descriptions, I hopefully pull the readers in 'see' what's going on in their mind's eye. Oh yeah, a woman who wants to please a man with THAT, is selfless and lustful. I can't say anything more w/out incriminating myself - luckily I'm speaking about my hubby. I loved your review, thanks so much... hope you enjoy the next chappy.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 08:29 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Oh yes I so injoyed this fic.Yes Spike is the perfect lover for her,and it would seem she is the perfect lover for him.I am loving this more and more.And to think he is a cook also,works as head chef at her favorite restatrant.This is truning out to be more then I was exspecting.I love how you have brought both Spike and william out in this wounderful story.Want more,like right now.

Author's Response: I'm was simply ecstatic when I read your review. That you found it to be more than what's written beyond the summary. I know it seems all porn right now, but it won't be. Initially, I have to have these two be enamoured with one another - so that it sets the tone for the rest of the story. After tonight, we'll get back to the plot. Thanks so much for the stellar review sweety.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

glad to know that they are being health conscious. Also, I think it's really amazing that she likes him in 'real-life' when he's the cook, too. too bad that they had to meet like this.

Author's Response: Yes, but we often find what we're looking for when and where we least expect it. Yup, as just a man, she likes his personality, which will help in future chapters. Yeah, I had to attack the condom issue or I may have been crucified. I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 12:21 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Wow!! I get back from vacation and I have CHAPTERS to read! Soooo sooo good!!! Can't wait for the next bit!

Author's Response: That's great, I'm glad you didn't have to wait. I love it too when I'm away and then mcome back to more than 1 chapter to read of something. Thanks so much for the review sweety.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:14 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you enjoyed. See you next chappy.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Good god.... are you trying to kill us here? *LOL* I enjoy your story sooo sooo much, it's unbelievably good! Please keep going, it's so addictive!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you're still liking it, we've a couple more steamy chapters to go before getting back to the story-line. Thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: MarzBar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Yummy, yum, yum. Delicious chapter; better than my peanut butter and honey sandwiches.

Author's Response: You're too funny. But hey, 2 snacks are better than one. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Thanks for addressing the health question. That really is a genuine concern, with what he does for a side job.

They're really getting in deep with all the sharing, etc. Very sweet interlude.

Author's Response: Not a problem. Whenever there's something of that nature, I'll address it, but beyond that it's just a fun fic (aside from upcoming angst). Yup, their getting in deep after just one night, but that's the point... the unusual amount of attraction, enjoyment, etc... Thanks for the great review, see you next chappy.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

:) I really love this story. Can't wait to see where their journey takes them.

Author's Response: I'm happy you like it so far. I definetely have my plans for those two, hope you like where they head to next. Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Damn...she has more than just a "man ho" now! I am loving these two together. Smutty goodness aside, their inner monolouge is so cute and while I do enjoy a good bit of angst once in a while, the lightheartedness of this always leaves me smiling at the end of a chapter.

I am glad to hear the next update isn't far behind. You are doing a smashing job so far!

Cheers!

Author's Response: You sound just like me, I love smutty goodness, and I like angst - as long as it isn't too angsty in a bad direction. I have some angst planned, but purposefully wanted to keep it lighthearted, as you put it so well. I enjoy humor as a way to balance things out. Thanks so much for the awesome review.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I really like the easiness between them in this chappy, very sweet, oh and we can't forget the hot oral *winkis*. In the words of Paris "that was hot!" LMAO!!! I can't wait for you to come back to Scott so we can bounce ideas off of each other! Great job sweetie and I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter, LOL! Kuddos!

Author's Response: That's great, cuz I was aiming to have them get along well as individuals their 1st night together... glad that's coming across so well. Buffy needed to make more of an impression on him than she already has, thus the oral gratification, and hey - she had to climb that' mountain of flesh', b/c it's there, lol. I am sooooooo looking forward to getting home and meeting you. It's a small world in the military huh? What are the chances though that 2 authors are next door to eachother and don't even know it??? Must be fate. I've lots of ideas I can't wait to talk with you about. Thanks so much for the stellar review.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

The easy dialogue and relaxed way they are with each other is delightful. I love that Buffy was Spike's first, and he was so thrown he forgot a condom. She's really getting under his skin, and her jealous thoughts show she's right there with him.



Author's Response: Good, that's really good you and everyone else is picking up on that sense of ease they have with one another, it's serving a purpose down the road. Yup, she's getting under his skin and vice-versa, but they've a long road ahead of them as well. Not too angsty though, especially not for my first fic. I wanted something fun and smutty to get used to writing with initially. Jealousy can sometimes be a healthy thing huh? Especially for these two. Thanks so much for the great review.

Reviewer: Iza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Ah, there again, you got us by the short hairs !... The snack was truly enjoyable, I love the way these two interact, they are so sweet and I enjoy their inner dialogue. By the way, while I think of it, I forgot to tell you a few chapters ago how much I looooved Mr Gordo's transformation ;-) This one had me laughing a long time. Can't wait to read the rest, thank you.

Author's Response: I guess it was a bit of a cliffie huh? But I wanted to end on that note of her 'getting' to him with that 'snack attack act'. More to come - er, yeah, the pun is correct as well, lol. Ah yes, the infamous Mr. Gordo. Have to admit I'm a sick puppy in my humor and I couldn't resist. It was time to turn the little guy into something a little more useful than just a stuffed 'toy', tee hee. I hope I made everyone laugh at that, glad you did as well. Thanks for the wonderful review sweety.

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