[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:21 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
This Spuffy interlude was deliciously hot, but I also found it sweet that Buffy has been the only person that's ever put Spike's needs above their own. I really enjoyed learning more about William. I liked the conversation between Spike and Buffy, it's so cool that William is a chef at Buffy's favorite restaurant. Love how the story is progressing. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Good, I like a combo of hot, sweet, funny, intense, you name it. She's definetely making an impression upon him with her selflessness and desire for him... and his needs as a man, not a ho. There's a lot more to come as far as learning about Spike/William too that I hope you like. If you like him as a chef, you're going to love what happens when Buffy breaks up with Riley... yes, it's a tidbit of a spoiler here. Thank you for the kind words and great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Really love this fic! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Good, I think you'll enjoy the next chappy too, at least I hope so. Thanks for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Great chapter! I can't wait for Buffy to break up with Riley. Is it poosible for her to date Spike? I hope so! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, cuz you know she will - leave Riley... B.O.R.I.N.G. Especially when it comes to personality. In answer to your question, no. At this point they can't date, BUT, I have something planned just as good ,for the time being, that I think you'll appreciate. Thanks so much for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:44 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Yum (puff puff), That was just (puff, puff, puff) bloody fantastic! This might me (lights another one) my favorite tale EVER! (Puff, puff, puff). Those two are SO failling in love with each other and don't even know it! And the fact that he's the chef of her fav dessert! Perfection. So write more quick (puff, puff, puff) so I can keep those cig companies and business and up the value of your portfolio! LOVE IT! IT'S EXCELLENT! YOU ARE TALENT PERSONIFIED! more please.
Author's Response: LMFAO, you're funny. Yup, heavy feelings are developing that they're unaware of, and may fight to some extent... hey gotta have some angst in there, tee hee. I have something planned centering around that dessert that you'll never guess, and I think you'll find quite humorous when the time comes. Ah yes, I need my stock to to go up so I can send my two crumb-snatchers to Princeton, lol. Thanks so much for the awesome review sweety.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:33 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Give me strength !!! I have to say thos are probably the hottest chapters I have ever read. Sexy, passionate, great visualization tactics and so articulate !! I am thinking I am going to save them and reread a few thousand times. I am so anxious to read more, and cannot wait to see how this develops...not to mention what can be done with his yummy chocolate cake....ummm. All I can say is a big thanks
Author's Response: Now that's music to my ears - that you plan to re-read it. Glad you can clearly picture what's going on, that's harder to write than most think, but I'm glad I'm accomplishing it so far. I think you'll enjoy the plans I have for that cake too... yes a tiny spoiler here... it's not what you'll be expeting. Thanks for the stellar review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
loved it. great GREAT job!!!!! post really soon.
Author's Response: Thanks sweety, it's always so nice to hear from you, especially when you're as good of an author as you are, it's very flattering. Thanks so much for the kind review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
A chef (VERY sexy!!), his "first" (incredibly HOT), a professional so caught up in his client that he forgot a condom (TOTALLY flattering for B), she loves his chocolate dessert (icing on the cake). YOU are MASTERFUL!!!!!! I'll just sit here and wait for the next update ... what else is there to do? (Oh yeah ... husband, two teenagers, dog, job and home ... almost forgot) Thanks again for sharing your talent!!
Author's Response: A woman certainly loves a man who can cook. I also couldn't resist having a 1st' in there for him, however unlikely it might be in real life, but hey, it's spuffy and it's my story, so I thought... why not. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the awesome review, see you next chappy.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Thank God I was home this time when I read an installment lol. Oh poor Spike. He's falling fast and his inner William is coming out more and more with a vengeance. As much as I am enjoying every morsel of their time together, I have to say, I'm quite curious as to what the day will bring for these two. Keep it up :)
Author's Response: tee hee, I hope you're home when you read the next installment as well... that's all I'm saying. So happy you liked the snack, take care and thanks for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Enjoy the snack? You're kidding, right? It was awesome, the conversation, the thoughts, how they seem to be so perfect for the other outside this fantasy. Masterful touch that she loves his chocolate cake, which truly sounds decadently yummy. Loved how possessive their thoughts about the other they are, how jealousy is showing when they each think of the other with someone else. And to top it , the wonderful, steamy oral sex. ;) *lol* Over the explanation for no condom, very nice. ;) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh yes, they are smitten with one another. I had to have it that way to lay the ground work for the rest of the story. A man who can cook is a keeper in my mind - especially if he makes good desserts. Yeah, the condom issue is always a hard one to attack, but I wanted him so desperate to have her that all reason fled his mind. I soooo can't wait for your next installment... I'm jonesing for some letters between William and Buffy. Thanks for the review sweety.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:43 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
His first.. and a good cook.
Author's Response: Yes, I realize it's a bit of fantastical but hey, it's spuffy. Hope you enjoy the next chappy, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
I love your fic!
Author's Response: Wonderful, please stick around and let me know what you think of the next chappy. Thanks so much for the review hon.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
fun, flirty, and sexy chapter! more please!
Author's Response: Yay, I love it when people enjoy my work. So glad you like my snack. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Still doing great. I see you changed the name of the restaurant. Still Italian though :)
Author's Response: Thanks sweety. Yeah, I wasn't settled on any one thing really, but the name just spoke to me. Thanks for leaving the review, talk to you soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: An Alternative
Mmmm. That was good. Now, hopefully it's Spike's turn to beg.
Author's Response: LOL, well maybe, I'll have to think about it. Sounds appetizing though I admit. If not soon then later - that's a promise. Thanks for the great review.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2006 - 10:46 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Holy Mackeral ... girl, you are the unarguably the PRIMO writer for Spike/Buffy physical interlude(s)(I'm crossing my fingers that there will be more in the future chapters). I am really looking forward to seeing what you do with these great characters once they are outside of the bedroom. This is already going down as my favorite of all of the fanfiction that I have read.
Enjoy every moment with your husband !!! Well wishes to him and to you once he departs. I'll be sitting here with your ever growing legion of fans awaiting your return.
Author's Response: LOL, thanks. I love reading the graphic nc-17 stories and when I started this I wanted to be one of those writers. To when you read about it, you feel like you're there and you can see it in your mind. I am ecstatic you enjoy it this much. Makes the hard work worth it. And to answer your question, YES, there will be plenty more 'encounters' between our fav couple. All of them steamy, and all of them as original as possible - I don't like re-inventing the wheel when it comes to the sex scenes. I also think you'll enjoy the characters outside the bedroom. That's where the development will really start to take off in the future chappy's. Again, I'm stunned this is going to be one of your favorite stories. Thanks so much for the stellar review, oh and yes, I'll enjoy my husband as much as possible.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2006 - 10:34 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Again, OMG, and wow that was hot. You're talented, don't stop, I need more.
Author's Response: LOL, again, I'm glad you like it this much. Thanks for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2006 - 10:33 am Title: Turn up the Heat
OMG this is hot, I am beyond impressed. I cannot believe this is your first sex scene you've ever written. Totally reads like a pro.
Author's Response: Well that's great, thank you. SO many compliments from the readers are truly wonderful. Thanks again sweety.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Turn up the Heat
.... and just when I thought that Spike couldn't be any more awesome ... YOU really write/create wonderful/multifaceted characters. I adore your Spike.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review. I'm really glad you like all my characters. It makes me feel good that the hard work pays off.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2006 - 12:04 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
oh spike... oh... oh... oh my gawd, again and again, oh yeah! Now you got me all sweaty. Keep this stuff cumming!
Author's Response: LMFAO, maybe you're enjoying too much, tee hee. Thanks again for the positive review.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2006 - 12:01 pm Title: Turn up the Heat
oh... my... gawd...
now you went and did it. My pants are all sticky!
Author's Response: LOL, you're funny. Thanks for the great review and for enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Wow!
Can't wait to see how the story progresses.
Wish I could write like that!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure you write just fine, and thanks for the compliment. I'm really happy you're enjoying it as much as I am writing it. Thanks for the great reivew.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Turn up the Heat
Wow! What a story!
They might have some negative tension there, but you can see that they're good together and were made for each other. The comical moments help lighten the mood some, that's good. You have a great sense of humor.
Hope they end up being able to sit on that couch watching movies together, that would be nice, I like happy endings. Of course it's much too early for an ending, and who would want it to end now it's just getting started!
And what a start, wow!
Author's Response: Yeah, a little negative tension never hurt though, and yes, much too early for an ending. Glad you enjoy the comical moments. I didn't want it too serious. Thanks for the awesome review, the lovely comments/compliments, and I'm happy you like it so far.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Very hot indeed. Difficult to read in the middle of the day when kids are home. WOW
Author's Response: Oh yeah, not good to have the kiddies around, I agree. I had to write most of it while mine were asleep. Thanks for the nice review, talk to you soon.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Turn up the Heat
V ery well done. I like how you carried on. Now on to 8
Author's Response: Thanks hon, you're the best.
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Can't imagine topping this one, but I'm sure you will!
Talent undeniable, no doubt about it.
Author's Response: Well, I hope to anyway. Your very sweet, thanks so much for the stellar review.
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